What began as a relatively uneventful night of conversation over Skype between a Brony, an Anti-Brony and Commander Shepard regarding "Cupcakes" escalates to the point of an impromptu trip to Equestria for all three. Now, the Anti-Brony is caught in a sticky situation that threatens not only his life, but his patience for Shepard's antics.
Meanwhile, Sweetie Belle's life is about to have a fresh new start.
Two things to to consider before reading:
1. Parody of Cupcakes, but contains minimal actual gore.
2. Shameless self-insertion of author and two friends (one of which made the cover art).
Cliches aside, constructive feedback is greatly appreciated.
Chapters (1)
I lost track in the middle of the story...But I gave it a like anyways.
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Did things get confusing because it got absurd, or because it was written poorly, or both?
Though I am sure my fic has most of its negative reception due to a knee-jerk response to its subject matter, I really do want to know if it has some semblance of merit. Bottom line, would you kindly explain why you chose to like it? It will help me learn from my mistakes if I have a better understanding of what those mistakes were.
Whatever the reason(s), I do hope it was worth the time you took reading what you did; and of course, thank you for your feedback.
Um...
Fanfics read today:
Something involving AlChestBreach
Some weird Skyrim fic
This
Some other weird crossover
More weird crossovers
Etc.
Nobody likes a self-insert.
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You're only three years late to point that out, friend.
7154058 This fic was just added to Absolutely Disgusting. That's how I found it.