Flower had a boring and joyless life. After he saved enough money, he decided to begin a new life in Ponyville.
He started his jorney with hopes and dreams of a better life. But what he found exceeded all his expectations.
Special thanks to BigBadBari21 for helping and editing the story. And karlajkitty for the coverimage.
I also want to thank my dear friends CinderUnicorn and Fuedra for their great help.
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I'll be happy to point them out if you like. First off, be careful about some typos. Sometimes you accidently write words that don't belong in the sentence. Regardless, really good story; can't wait to see more.
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Thank you, i would be happy if you do this.
The second chapter is already done but at first it have to be edited before i can publish it, so it take a while. But in that time i´m working on the third chapter
2441524 Just tell me when you're done.
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okey dokey
Excellent; can't wait to see more.
Wow, great work. I am amazed at how well you are at this. If you could write a story this good on your first go at one, you have a gift. MOAR!
2508435 You exaggerate
. Without my editor it would be full of errors and only half as good.
2508482 All the editor does is check grammar and punctuation errors, it's the author's job to make the story likeable and you're definetally suceeded on just that.
2508539 Normaly editors doing only that, but mine help me a bit with sentence structure and such things, so the "flow" of the story is better. And do you remembter how Luna is speaking in the third chapter with this "thee" and "thoust"? She helped me with that.
2508668 Well, give her my appreciation, wait; She?
2509027 Actuelly I never asked her about her gender. But on her user-page was some things that identified her as a female.Why do you ask?
2509041 Just wondering.
2586261 Some sentences you forget a period at the end.
2586507 Ah ok. Thanks.
So what do you think?
2586550 I already said excellent work.
2586924 Ah, ok.
I loved this first chapter. I'm excited about reading the rest
2975128 Glad you liked it
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I hope I can come up with a new chapter soon.
HHHHHHHHHHHHiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii!
I am going to read this story now
Neat! Strange stallion but neat.
3107379 Strange?
3108070 What I do?
3108603 No, I meant whats strange about Flower.
I can't remember I will tell you later.