T'was the night before Hearth's Warming and all through the castle
All the staff was stirring Discord giving them hassle
Ponies everywhere treated each other with care,
In hopes that the windigos will never be there
The foals were nestled all snug in their beds,
While visions of Princess Luna danced in their heads.
And Spike in his basket, and I in my cap,
Had just settled our brains for a long winter’s nap.
When out on the garden there arose such a clatter,
I sprang from the bed to see what was the matter.
Away to the balcony I teleported in a flash,
Tore open the door and threw up the sash.
The moon on the breast of the new-fallen snow
Gave the lustre of mid-day to objects below.
When, what to my wondering eyes should appear,
But the Spirit of Chaos, Discord, my dear.
By a snow covered rose bush, so lovely and red,
I knew that he thought I was still in bed.
More rapid than eagles he flew up and placed a rose in my mane,
Not red but blue was the rose like everything he does it was far from mundane.
The spirit could be sweet as a dove,
An aspect that made me fall in love.
He rubbed my cheek with his claw his eyes filling with light,
He told me I was beautiful especially at night.
Like my heart my breath he did steal,
So zany and strange he was that none of it felt real.
He asked if would come with him and I said I will,
We land on a cloud full of gifts, and goodwill.
And then, in a twinkling, we blasted off through the night air,
I could see the town nearby I knew my friends were there.
As I drew in my head, looking at the ground,
Down the chimney of sugar cube corner we came with a bound.
Our coats were all tarnished with ashes and soot.
The girls were all giggling and having a hoot
A bundle of gifts Discord had flung on his back,
And he looked like a peddler, just opening his pack.
The girls were all there their faces all in delight,
And I laughed when I saw them, no matter what they always made things right.
They all hugged me at once knocking me down,
Rarity asking me “Where’s your crown?”
We partied and partied all through the eve,
Discord making jokes being a peeve.
As the night wound down and everypony slept,
Me and Discord left.
We flew through the air like a comet with magic to spare
We land on the balcony Discord whispering that I'm his mare
We went to bed to take our leave
"Good night princess, Merry Hearth's Warming eve”
heart warming.
I like it
Well I sure timed my catching up right. This was a nice poem chapter, I typically have issues with making poems like this.
Cute. Looking forward to more.
Keep up the good work. Deus tecum.
great, truly wonderful, cant wait fo the next chapter
daw.
5357238 It was more about reforming their entire school system, Celestia's School for Gifted Unicorns was just an example. However to cop out of any thing else
As an alternate universe story...everything I write about is cannon to the story
5357831 yea my proof reader kinda...vanished
but I have a new one and we're working on this and more
This was cool and all, but when is there gonna be an actual story progressing chapter?
5358635 With my wife being pregnant and exams looming in the horizon I am adding about 10 words to the story a day if I'm lucky...but I have about 1200 words written so far so soon...hopefully
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Oh man, that is some hectic home life. Don't blame you at all. Take all the time you need with no rush.
Your story is great. I loved reading it. I can't wait to read what happens next. I want to know what Discord do to Blueblood?
Fudging cute
Left out again.