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Akatsuki God


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Equestria will soon be at war with its bordering nations and the elements of harmony will not be enough to save them, their only chance of survival is to summon allies from an unknown world....

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Comments ( 138 )

I want to see where this goes.

You should re edit this. Make sure you start a new paragraph when each person talks

Is this going to be a Naruto crossover? The cover image makes it seem so.

2354615 All the Akatsuki members will be included in this story and I will try to make the story as realistic as possible

BUCK YEAH I found another Naruto and mlp xover:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh: Lets see how this turns out:unsuresweetie:

2369708 dude ur pic is funny as buck I love it!

It's Zecora not Zacora. Also it's perform not preform.

im sorry for the spelling issues, ill fix them

Akatsuki as Equestria's guardians? Instant fave, like and watch. I just hope none of the members die.

2373989 Also, since the Akatsuki will be on the good side, nothing is stoping them from stomping every enemy they come across.

What I want to know is who is going to be summoned.

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All of the Akatsuki? (except Orochimaru of course.)

2383130 ITACHI! I think I am going to love this fic. Don't let the Akatsuki help them right away though. THEY ARE A CRIMINAL ORGANIZATION FOR CRYING OUT LOUD!

2383792 is that a good thing or a bad thing?

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Good to read, Can you imagine what Orochimaru would do in Equestria?

2386180 probably try to take itachi's body

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That and dissect as many ponies as possible.

2386773 Wait, will Orochimaru be in the Akatsuki or will he join up the Changelings and the Griffons?

2393401 Well then, it's a good thing Akatsuki is on the good side. Itachi, Sasori and Kakuzu would stomp and when you add Orochimaru... I also wonder what pairings there will be (Will all the members be paired with someone?)

2394400orochimaru is with the akatsuki and that's all ill spoil for you

Also, if anyone wants me to lengthen chapter 3, so you know exactly what happens while shining armor is in the borderlands, then leave a comment and ill be sure to do so for you.

just one question, what about pain well better known as nagato

2403354I'm releasing Chapter 4: The Summoning tomorrow on the 10th, you'll know when you read it.

I am loving this story:twistnerd: And I cannot wait for the next chapter:moustache:

itachi for the win! :pinkiehappy: sorry...itachi fan :twilightblush:

The barbers of the elements of harmony, Twilight, Applejack, Fluttershy, Rainbow, Rarity, and Pinkie all were asleep, woke up, and rushed to the thrown room, fearing the worst.

Fixed:

The bearers of the elements of harmony rushed to the throne room, each fearing the worst.

You don't need to list the names of the mane six at this point.

Do you have an editor by chance? I've noticed a few more typos and I believe an editor would benefit you greatly.

2407104not really but if you would like to help me with said typos then that would be and i'd really appreciate it, but I don't know how that would work without using my account.

To everyone waiting for the next chapter, im sorry if I don't get chapter 5 in as soon as you expected, but this chapter has been difficult for me and im still working on it. :ajsleepy:

Also, if anyone wants me to lengthen Chapter 3: Signs of War so you know exactly how they discover the alliance and how the war started then leave me a message or a comment and ill be more than happy to do that for you.

2413173 There's a few things that can be done. I highly recommend reading through this first. It will get you going in the right direction and may eliminate your need for an editor. But, if you still need an editor afterwards, just ask. I'm happy to help.

2414166Well I would have gone and read it but I gave up on the first "The" lol so I guess you can b my editor bro

2414166nice pic by the way , it fits you cause you pay attention to detail

Ideate......I don't think that's a word. Do you mean 'Idiot'? Cause you used Ideate a LOT.

I'm sorry the concept is good ,the characters are at least half way relatable and the writings pretty good but I just can't seem to get invested in this story. I'm sorry I wish I could but I simply can't :ajsleepy:

>>2428234ya but I didn't know how to spell it plus when I corrected it ideate is what it gave me

2428527well I'm truly sorry that you couldn't get it, but thank you for giving it a chance:moustache:

To everyone reading this story, please note that the chapters are being re-edited by DaGoomba then re-posted by me.

Hello everyone, I'm adding music links and detail to my fic so if you want to check out chapter 1 and leave a comment on your opinion about the add-ons, I'd like that.

Dude you have an awesome talent for writing /) :yay:

Very well done i got chills when i read that third memory :pinkiehappy:

Really wonder how Equestria is gonna win this war with these guys causing trouble...

2593377 It's going to be a while before a get chapter 8 out, but I've added onto chapter 7 so check it out, I think it may answer that for you.

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