Spike has everything a young dragon could want: friends that love him, a happy home, good food in his belly. So why does he feel like there's something missing?
A/N: Rated teen for language, alcohol, and references to sex (No clop or innuendo.)
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For your first fic, it's interesting, but then it just stops and feels incomplete. You need to go into more depth about the relationships involved and a bit more into context.
I sense some promise here, but it needs more.
Not a bad start but it feels unfinish. Making it longer and add more depth into it will really help with this story.
makes me interested to see where this goes
and I hope the tag "romance" gets added...
not bad I like it
For a completed story, it doesn't really feel like there's much here.
That's it?
Thought Spike will have a therapy section with Luna.