I thought I won. I played Slendy's games, beat him at what he does, got the pages before he caught me. I thought he would let me go, be a good sport.
I was wrong.
Currently undergoing a sort of fix. First chapter complete.
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There are a few spelling errors, but this is starting to look very interesting!
I shall track this one.
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I actually did not think that this was one of my better works. I am pleasantly surprised. I am also of the belief that I second guessed myself into believing that. Thanks for comnenting!
Okay. I'm interested. Please continue and I shall still play slender haunt.
Sorry you cmlosed your thumb closed in a car door. I had my entire hand closed in one with the door ompletely shut. Hurt. Like. Shit! Good beginning so far.
I wonder if she will tell them about slender man.
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All shall be revealed in the time to come. All shall be revealed.
I the mean time, have another chapter!
Yes another chapter. javascript:smilie('
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Slendy's new game. Can't wait to see where it goes.
Not really being a fan of the Slender game, I really didn't care much for the character of Jaime at first. But damn, did you give her some great characterization. You managed to keep Slendy's horror appeal while fleshing out his motives and for that I say good work.
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You are my favorite comment. It is comments like yours that remind me that I am really good at this. I keep thinking that the dialogue is a bit... I don't know, it bugs me that I lack words for 'said', it feels off for me just writing 'Jaime said', 'Applebloom said', and then 'Jaime said' again, it just feels repetetive, but it seems it only bugs me.
I just love the love this story is getting!
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Thanks. The said thing is a problem I have as well, don't get too pushed about it though.
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You mean while you write or read? It seriously bugs me and may be one if the factors that lead me to second guess earlier and think this was going to be fairly bad. I got nine more favorites today. I TAKE PRESSURE AS WELL AS AN EGGSHELL TO A STEAMROLLER! The good news is that it just has been driving me to write a chapter a day. 682 words into the next chapter.
Lol Sunny Town I see what you did there
2352476 When I write. Sorry about that.
Not really how the Slender Man works but ill go with it
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He was just watching, he only wants Jaime at the moment, and if she gets distracted from him, she is safe, who are the three most distracting ponies on the show?
If the Crusaders tried to get more knowledge on him, since that is how it seems to work in terms of calling him, he might have been a bit more direct and took them all, but since what I said happened... Just saying this in case I never put it in the story.
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My current Spikestache count: 3. I am now officially a great author.
I>>2363616 I didn't mean it like that. What i was saying is that Slender is known to appear as somewhat friendly to children and hostile to adults. In the game for example you play was a grown woman that also goes into the arrival. It is also the reason the voice of Slender is a child not an adult, which many refer to as Masky.
It is true that the more you know about Slender the more likely he will come for you, but that's why he uses proxy's to remove or add information about him so he can get closer the to his victims he wants. Masky is of course in deeper then them all.
and dear Keelah tell me your not going to call him Slender Mane
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Okay, before you read, spoiler alert for my story process.
I know Slendy is friendly towards children, that's why they are his "games",and Jaime is his new "friend", and had been stuck in his games. Jaime was overreacting when she said she may be destroyed (I forgot my actual words) since Slendy is, as we discussed, friendly towards children, Jaime is in Equestria because Slendy was being a poor loser when she won his first game and cheating because she actually did pretty good at his games, having the last game before going to Equestria being her seventh game. I assumed the character in Slender was young, and just tall for her age, going by how you have a low stamina that I keep reading about. And I did not know Slendy's voice, I just freaked the fuck out when I saw him and ran. The most I found was five pages. D:
And NO! God, no! He will not be called Sledermane! What kind of fool do you take me for? He is even going to be listed in Twilight's book as 'The Operator". I told you that there was a spoiler!
Also, sorry this is taking a bit, I had to scrap two chapters because I was late for an april fools chapter and scrapped that, then tried adapting it for canon, and that went about as well as you would expect.
2368505 Sorry if i upset you.
But Slender doesn't have a voice he just uses Masky or other proxys to talk for him since he is in there minds controlling them
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Don't be sorry, I actually thought I upset you.
Crazy way things work.
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Yes, yes you did.
Why do people find the escape prtion in Story of the Blanks so hard? I did it first try without hastle. It was easy!
2368579 Plus the only name i have seen that makes any seance for Slender in equestria is Slender Horse. Since he is too big to be a pony and he is called Slender man because he is known to look like a tall man that is really thin like a tree.
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I quite understand why he is called Slender Man.
And I get that he would be called Slender Horse, but it doesn't fit well in a world inhabited by ponies, and just doesn't sound right when you know his proper name, you just want to make it similar, but I have respect for this abomination of eldritch proportions. Also, would yo like another spoiler?
Alot of spelling errors, but other than that it was a pretty great chapter
sympathy shown
good chapter
i can tell you this already
this story needs a "Every day I'm slendering" joke...5/3
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The day I do that is the day I hand this to somebody else for I have gone insane by defenition. Not to you, since you suggested that joke.
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Good call there. Anyone who makes that kind of joke doesn't deserve anything.
Did Applebloom mention something about "Sunny town"? That's the game "Story of the blanks"
That last sentence just creepy.
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That was the point.
It all begins.
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What all begins? I write this story and have no clue what you are talking about!
Well... Damn... Better luck next time.
meow
THIS IS SO AWESOME!
The main character's a girl?
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>Thank you!
>aaaand I just realized I spend too much time on Ponychan's /rp/ board.
Oh shit
don't worry I slam my hand in a door so I know hop it feals.
2342031 Work on the spelling. And also this seemed rushed. other than that, it was really well done.
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In my defense, I write on a mobile device, and can't use autocorrect to tell me "this word is a garbled mass of letters! Are you a puppy? Down boy!".
2549806 you write on amobile device? How do you do that?
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I use an amazon kindle touch. I guess it is seen as a normal computer on here. If that isn't the case, I just tap that edit button after I enter a chapter
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I have approval from slendy himself.
I am good!
2549989 Amazon Kindle, is that an app or a website?