camp fire tales
Late at night, Travis was still asleep dreaming of again things that I can't put on here due to reasons of publishing until he was awoken by pinkie pie.
"Hi there Travis." said pinkie pie how had just gotten back from the club.
"What time is it?!" asked Travis. It was still night time and Travis was tired as hell from the last couple of days.
"Someone’s here to see you!" said an excited pinkie pie, how let the pony in. it was twilight and a large, armoured pony.
"Sorry for waking you up. It’s just we are all meeting up to discuss what's happened with everyone."
Travis got out of his bed, got his shades and katana and set off with twilight, pinkie pie and how ever the armoured pony was.
"So how's the robot?" asked Travis. "This is noble 6. She can't talk but I found her in the hospital and she needed a place to stay for the night. I wouldn’t mind as she was quiet and wouldn’t bother Me." replied twilight.
"Wait that's a she!? I thought it was bloke!" laughed Travis who then got smacked on the head by pinkie pie.
"Don’t say that about her! She might be offended." whispered pinkie pie.
"No it's fine." said noble six. Her voice was slightly scratched but she still had a slight feminine voice. “I get it all the time."
"Well sorry anyway. Names Travis touchdown. And yours is?" asked Travis. "Noble 6 but you can call me viata."
"Funny name. What’s its, Latin for robot?" asked Travis jokingly.
"Firstly I’m not a robot! This is armour and viata mean's life." said viata.
They arrived at a campsite and everyone was here: rarity, flutter shy, apple jack and rainbow dash and with their new friends as well. They all sat around the camp fire, relaxing.
"So who's going to introduce themselves first." asked rarity.
"My names krona." a nervous hoof was raised by the pink haired Pegasus next to flutter shy.
"Nice to meet you krona. Names Marston." he shook krona's hoof and sat down.
"I’m taokaka and I’m a cat pony person thing!" said a very happy and possibly crazy taokaka. She went over and hugged everyone.
"Well look my names Travis touchdown." said a slightly annoyed Travis.
"Sonic’s the name, speed's my game." said a gloating sonic.
"Viata here." said a quietly.
"I brought over some marsh mellows." said flutter shy. "You know if you want one of course." said flutter shy nervously.
Everyone got a couple of marsh mellows and started making smores.
"This is nice." said krona. "I have to agree there." said Marston. "Tao, can you pass me a marsh mellow?" asked rarity.
"Sure here ya go Miss Rarity." some marsh mellows were passed over to rarity.
"Why does she call you Miss Rarity." asked twilight. Rarity shrugged and so did taokaka.
"So........... how did we all get here anyway." asked Travis.
"Well I got sucked into a television and woke up near a river." said Travis.
"Got shot in the leg and fell off a cliff." said Marston. Travis sniggered at this. "What’s so funny?" said Marston.
"Nothing, nothing. Just thinking of something that's all." said Travis.
"Well I got here from making buns with miss litchi. I passed some flour and poof I’m falling through the sky, landed in a river and miss rarity saves Me." said Tao who hugged rarity again.
"Pardon me for asking but how's this miss litchi person." said apple jack. "She’s my best friend." said Tao.
"What about you krona?" said Marston.
"I was training with Mao and soul and then I exploded and then found myself falling towards the ground. I hardened my blood to survive the impact but I was still injured but thankfully flutter shy found me and brought me back to her cottage and looked after me. She saved my life." said krona. "But you saved my life as well. You stopped that manticore from hurting me."
fluttery shy hugged krona.
"Random sonic boom and I’m here." said sonic.
"Got shot by a missile and landed here. I was found by some travellers who brought me to the hospital and twilight took me in."
After all the marshmallows were eaten, everyone started to relax a bit.
"Look I don't want to spoil the mood but how are we getting back home." asked Travis.
"Well I could ask celestial about sending you all back. I’m sure she won't mind." said twilight.
"She won't be able to." said pinkie pie. "She’s powerful but not powerful enough." added pinkie pie.
"How would you know pinkie pie? I mean no offense but you don't seem to know a lot about unicorn magic." said twilight.
"I don't know that much about magic but I do know who caused this." pinkie pie said.
Everyone except pinkie pie in unison said "HOW!!?”
"Well it was someone from krona's world and someone from our world." said a serious pinkie.
"From our world it's night mare moon's spirit. And from your world it's some lady called medusa." said pinkie pie.
Krona’s eye's shot open instantly at that name, medusa. "You’re lying. She was killed. I saw it!" shouted krona.
"Krona please carm down." said flutter shy. "I won't carm down! She is dead! I know your lying so tell the truth!" shouted krona again. "Who is this medusa anyhow?" asked apple jack.
"She was my mother. My whole life she tried to make me as a weapon. I suffered for my whole life and I wished I had died sometimes. When she died, I finally escaped her. She deserved to die for everything she had done to me and my friends."
"Huh. That’s an eye opener." said Travis. "Still there's no reason to have a tantrum about it. I mean if it happened there's no reason to cry over the past is It." said Travis, not caring for what had happened to krona.
"Let her cry. There’s nothing wrong with it." said viata. "Uhh yeah there is if you’re a bloke. You’re a girl so it's okay." said Travis.
"Okay that's it!" said Tao. "Tao hate's it when people like you talk!" said Tao.
"What kind of person am I then?" asked Travis. He put his hoof near his katana."You’re an asshole!" said Tao. She got her claws out. Travis got out his beam katana.
They both charged at each other. "STOP RIGHT NOW!" viata grabbed Tao and Travis and slammed them both into the ground. "NOW SHUT UP AND LISTEN." said viata. "Krona please continues."
"Actually I’m talking now." said pinkie pie. "For medusa to do anything she needs to control someone that want's that kind of power. That’s when we have our world. Someone might get taken over, someone that had a part of their life destroyed and someone that is partly evil. Well we have 2 possible subjects for this: one is Gilda for being mean to everyone and losing dash as a friend and the other one is Trixie how lost her home from the ursa attack and want's revenge against twilight. For embarrassing her in front of everyone."
"Well it's not Gilda. She holds grudges granted but she knows I can beat her in a fight so it must be Trixie!" said rainbow dash.
"Well its Trixie then! I say we split up: me, apple jack, krona and flutter shy can check the areas around pony vile, nearby towns and locations and such and twilight and viata can go to celestia and everyone else can go to canterlot and the other big cities." said Marston.
"Who put you in charge?!" said sonic. "I didn't. I just made the plan that's all. Got any problems?" said Marston.
"Yes I do. Why do you get to say where everyone goes?" said sonic. "Okay look let's spend a minute thinking about this." said twilight.
after about 10 minutes it was decided: Marston, apple jack would check the surrounding pony vile with Travis and pinkie pie, sonic and rainbow dash would check the far off area's like pony hatten and appleoosa with krona and flutter shy, twilight and viata would head off to canterlot to see princess celestia along with Tao and rarity.
"So should we go now or rest up for tomorrow?" asked Travis. Everyone nodded and went to sleep.
Tomorrow was going to be tough.
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231843you forgot i can sorta preread if uou ask and also i finnaly found yime to read this and i'm gonna start now
232648 well if it's no problem with you, then sure. i'm working on the next chapter now and i am tired so i'll coninue with it tommorow or something.
232655spunds good though i can see people dislikeing how your portraying the mane 6 and how the ponys are reacting and such but i'm not that good at making it more show like though how pinkie pie acts makes sense to me
232693 i thought i did a good job with pinkie pie and flutter shy. ahh ohh well i'm having fun macking this and that's what matters.
232727no with Pinkie it seams legit but with shy not so much and i can't say about twilight yet but also how the other ponys reacted (non maine charechetrs) seems generaly just out of charichter and the names of twilights robbers
232743 flutter shy is the element of kindness so i dunno it looked good on paper. the thug thing i got from a show i watched the other day and the twilight at the bar thing... well before i wrote this, i noticed about 2 or 3 story's about twilight and alchoal so i thought it was a good idea i guess.
what about all the other charecters.
232754i've been reading a lot more fics than usual latly that stay almost as true to the charichters as though it was cannon so it might be because of that that i'm noticing small details other people wouldn't but to me it's mostly in the reacations of pretty much everyone besides the ones you crossedover cause i don't have a predetermaned idea on how they would be since i never watched their animes also you gave human names to some ponys
232788 well i was trying my best with the anime and videogame charecters. i kept travises ego and swearing in tact, i made krona shy as hell for the most part, tao a idiot (i love this charecter in the game but she's a absoulute idiot. there's one part were she's trying to catch a criminal, find's him and then befriends him!), i kept sonic as sonic i think, marston like marston i think ( i never finshed red dead redemption because my little bro showed me the ending! buck sack!) and noble 6 has nothing revealed at the moment and since all the spartans in the halo series have little personality, i can get away with a lot here.
232823just stated on sonic him marston and noble 6 i can confidently judge while the others i never heard of them before this fic so as i said before can't say anything about them
232844 well taokaka is, as i said before, a idiot but i'm willing to forgive this because she's adorable! she act's like a little kid, she's energetic, she keeps calling one of the charecters in teh game boobie lady for obvious reasons and is genrally a funny charecter.
krona is very shy, just like flutter shy but unlike flutter shy krona was made to be a weapon and sufferd her whole life from her mother!
krona's mother bassicly made krona's life a living hell, she almost lost her sainity and when she put in prison and her mother got let out... well let's just say that i swore a lot on that day. also she's got the most interesting power i've ever seen ever. she can control her own blood and harden it to protect her from injury. AWESOME!
travis is a otaku assassin that wressles, watches anime, fights with a light saber, i mean beam katana, and is well kinda ego tistical.
he always acts like a badass and i do hate him sometimes for how he acts around his job in the first game.
in the second game he went throgh some charecter development but not that much.
hope that cleared some things up.
232879Eeyup and sonic seems to be right to me and i'm on marston right now
232884 oh sonic was easy. i mean i love his games but personality wise.... yeah i'll just leave it there
232893Eeyup
232897 here's a question: would a rarity and macontosh shipping work?
232911Eeyup? it's a freaking fandom you could find a dimond tiarea X spike story if you tried hard enough or simply made one in fandom's the law's of physichs, personalty, time, and cannon all bow to the insane like were pinkie pie on steroids coffe and red bull
232923 well i've found luna+fluttershy, macontosh+zecora, spike + sweetie belles (creepy), but the oddest one that's got me curious is the macotosh + rainbow dash.
also giving pinkie pie red bull: ARE YOU MAD!? SHE'L OPEN THE 4TH WALL! wait that's a good thing.
232933already seen all of those i'm mostly looking for gilda ship fics not about dash and not based of the winter song Jackle App made for Griffon Village about her
232951 well i am planning a gilda and luna story. yeah i don't mind gilda ether and luna because... i don't know it was ether luna, celestia or trixie and i was so tired when thinking of this."
232933okay so marstion seems right except you forgot about how he has a wife and son back home though i can ignore that and noble 6 seems okay though if i can say something? you forgot she had cortana withy her when she was transported and sparten armour can both house AI's (Artifical Intelegnce's) and allow them to use the external and internal speakers to talk to the people around her also if you decide to alow hwer to have some wep's brought along remmeber all spartens carry around bear knifes and in the case of guns ether a assult rifle and a pistol or a assult rifle and a sparten laser also adding in dual wield energy swords as a third hidden weapon isn't out of the list of possiabilty's
232972 wait marston has a wife?! (note to self finsh red dead redemption)
and don't worry, i have the cortana thing. i'll have it in the next chapter for sure as for weapons, well i had the idea for the magnum and energy sword but not much else.
note: think of way for weapons to appear.
1)pinkie pie breacks 4th wall. 2)celestia summons weapons 3) speacal delivery from ditzy?
232989 let's try this comment again
4)you just never freking mentioned them
5)twilight enchants them to be invisable so as to not scare everypony
6)she left them under twilights guest bed
also i think Gilda X Luna was the best out of those possiabiltys and john marston left his guns in his bag also i have a plot twist idea cortana speaks rommanian because it's viata'a native tounge and so she has to translate what cortana says? google has a realy good translator if you have an account also 23 comments by 3 people and only one did less than two comments
233025 i'll go with number 6 for the weapons.
the romain thing sounds good but wasn't cortana designed to understand all languages or did i miss something in halo?
i guns in the bag for marston will work definatley.
the invisible guns thing has given me a idea though
233047nope but she has immense intelegnce so realy after about a day or two she would understand them wich explains why she dosen't enter the conversation and realt i liked numbers 4 and 5 the most but if you go with 6 we could add on a shit ton of extra ammo that was in the pelican wich therby allowed it to come with and we can give her more wepons as well like neadlers and a jet pack that for some reason works for a short time than magicly refuels...hmmm maybe it's powerd by light from the sun and moon? ahwell she's with pinkie so that can explain it for now
233067 well i did not know that about cortana. i assumed that since she was a computer program she could't adapt but what i did not know that.
the jetpack? i was thinking armour lock. the amount of times that has saved me online is in the hundreds.
number 5 by the way will be used but in a slightly differant way. let's just say it's be a massive surprise.
and hell i'll give more weapons. how does, 2 energy swords, a spartan lasor, assualt rifle, rocket launcher and of course her own fists!
still jetpacks are awesome.
233107i was actually thinking about the camo that also addes a silencer to your gun but a jet pack just seamed like more fun also Cortana is the most advanced powerful and unusualst of all AI's being a "smart" (not bult for only one tsk in particulear but for any and all tasks) AI means she can adapt to anything could hack you computer deleate your acconts take all your money and break all your relationships in only i'd say about 0.055 seconds if i had to estimate also AI's are bassed of humman brains wich die in the basing process but she wasn't because to give her spartens everything she could to help dr.Halsly creator of the spartens, their shields, their armour and their best weps and some ships had her braind cloned and then used the 1 surviving clone to make Cortana and gave her every possiable edge avalible so she's the smartest most adapteve AI ever to be made even better than many of the ultra advance forerunners who built a weapon capable of ending all life in the galexy in one fell swoop and she is also based of the brain of the smartest humman to ever live (the game is difrrent from what happens in the book but whatever she's still justt as smart ether way) though due to equestrias lack of technolgy she can't hack satalites and such since thay arn't there so she's basicly stuck inside viats armour though she wouyld only send a small part of her out to access the computers anyway
233154 okay so in short, she's an evolving computer? AWESOME
well considering the lack of tech there in equestia and considering that master chief has gone through some of the toughest situations against the flood (god i hate those ugly buggers) which don't really have technolygy, so cortana would be pretty useless in this situation... wait could she hack a spartana laser? if so i 've got a plan.
also i never read the halo books so that explains my lack of halo knowledge.
233178well she can use the suits HUD cammeras and audio recorders and such to see what's going on to provide tacticle data also she is practicly a humman (they don't call it Artificul Intelegence for nothing) just a humman who within 0.055 seconds could ruin your whole life and deleate all files onlinhe showing you exsistance since she can hack anything also she can't hack a sparten laser but since it hooks up to viatas HUD to use it's scope (same with snipers and such how the hell do you think there such good shots?) she can use it as well to see what's happening and who says magic with some help from pinkie can't make some death machine she can remotly control from viata's armour (it has data storage equal to that of a cramped space ship the size of a freaking mountin thanks to dr.Hasleys genius...so in short it's mposiable to recreate) so while she can't use any machines here she can provide tacticual data nad be your best freind also she can speed up your reaction time while she's in the armour and help you learn other langueges and such and dude it's freaking 11:30 in england why are you still up?
:233250 okay so she can't hack a spartan laser? damn that would of been helpful in the campaighn... but i digress.
i'm gonna sleep now so i'll look at all this again tommorow... probaley unless i have something planned that i forgot about.:twilightsheepish
in my plan i did make noble 6 a unicorn, just like tao so maybe they could amplyfie the spartan laser with magic? and possible cupcakes.
and the only reason i'm up is because... i have no clue. time went by i guess
233292the second icon didn't show up and good night also i think making her a unicorns a smart idea and how about we say she used magic to make it so she can use two powers? but no armour lock i've seen that used way to much it's just to OP for those who know how to use it correctly i know she should get the camo one though
235682 i always heard maka as mao in the anime for some reason. i'm guessing you don't like the story.
235812 Oh, so it's meant to be Maka? I suggest you go and change that before other people start getting confused.
And yeah, I don't really like it. Sorry buddy.
235904 there's to there own. i'm still happy macking this so oh well.
235909to tell you the truth this is just like me as a pony it has a rough not good begining but as it goes on it gets better and better till it goes from a 2 star fic to a 4.5 star fic
236704 well yeah i guess you could say that. i just get annoyed when people juage AN ENTIRE STory just on the first chapter only. it makes me rage
I find it a bit silly that at one point you say that Noble Six can't speak, and then a couple of sentences later, she speaks!
Also, it's occurred to me that if Crona's there, then surely Ragnorok should pop up every now and then like he does in the anime? Crona's been in this story for a couple of chapters, and Ragnorok hasn't appeared once. It's totally out of his nature to just sit back and watch.