When your invasion fails, you gather whats left of your forces and regroup. When one of your own disappears, you go looking for clues and hope to find them alive. When someone starts making you their puppets, pray they're not as clever as they think.
The changeling's knack for adaptability is put to the test when a small collection of strays go looking for a missing member and find themselves caught in a devious plot that could change the course of history, and determine the fate of their beloved swarm.
[I did some refining with this story cause I didn't like where it went, and it didn't seem fair to let it gather dust and call it 'Canceled'. Chapters 1 and 2 only went through few corrections with Chapter 3 getting its last part cut. Chapter 4 had minor changes. Around 60% of chapter 5 was written from scratch and ends quite differently. Chapters following will be written from scratch.]
you should definetly continue this
i wonder what the ponies' secret is
i bet they trap changelings and eat them
that would be shocking
I need MORE you ..Wonderful author! MORE!
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Close enough
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I'll try to deliver
Good one, i like it.
Especially 3 different characters mix for troubles :D
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I shall love you forever, have these.
Oooh a mystery and horror story
Me likey likey
wow, i really didn't expect that
how exciting
Ok, wait.
So, what happened to the others?
Are u going to explain what happened to them, or what's happening at all?'
cause I'm kinda drawing a blank here.
2485614 The others are dealing with their own problems. That will be explored soon-ish.
I'm still confused.
And also, Jellybean better not be dead!
2524005 Look at it this way, Rook is also confused and the current story is told mainly(somewhat) through his eyes.
And about Jellybean, I KILL WHOEVER I WANT!
JK
2524043 you know, I used to think that this story was in ghost's point of view, that is until you killed him!
I'm feeling a little obligated to keep reading this because every chapter just gives me a depressing and hallow feeling in the cavity of my heart, inflicting me with my own problems and destroying the little bit of sancuary I escape to in the world of ponies.
...was that too deep?
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Ummm... Huh?
Well it was through Ghost's point of view. Think of it as passing down the torch.
2524236 BUT I DON'T WANT THE TORCH TO BE PASSED DOWN!! (pout)
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There there, everything will be okay.
2524290 GREAT!!
NOW YOU'RE CREEPING ME OUT!!
oh well,
I guess I'll just have to wait until the next update to get my answers
Keep up the good work.
This story is too confusing for me
2562612 If you're talking about Digital's story, don't worry about it. It's not really relevant to this one.
2563257 when will this story level out and start making sense?
I'm about to give up on this
2563906 Probably the next chapter. That's all I can say
2564091 I hope so
Is Digital human? Because you're sure making it sound like it. "A universe away"? I'm taking that literally.
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Was Human
Its really a pity for something so well written to have only a few people knowing it exists...
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I'm really glad you think so. Still getting used to making fics, thanks for letting me know that it's going in the right direction.