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BillyColt


Hello. I'm BillyColt. In real life, I'm a dweeby music student from California. Here, I write Pony fanfiction.http://billycolt.tumblr.com/

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Six String thought being a pony would be pretty good. Though for some reason, he doesn't feel all that great.

Maybe he just needs some new friends.
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Initially intended for a TCB event - sadly I took too long writing it.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 4 )

Very good, and I could see this kinda thing happening should this kinda thing come to pass and if it was set in a TCBverse where the potion doesn't alter your personality and such.

I like this, it's good. Not much more to say than that, no deep criticisms... it's solid writing though.

I dig it. Very cute, and a very fun concept. I have to admit I haven't read much TCB aside from Windchaser.

He’d never have coffee again. Not unless he went back to earth. As he sat at his kitchen table, he pondered started a business where he could import coffee from earth.

- *starting

There were two mares and three stallions, all of whom murmured welcomes to him as he sat down, placing his guitar case beside the cushion.

- *welcomed

You may want to format your scene transitions to be a little more obvious, rather than just a single hyphen that is left justified.

Other than that, I approve; I like it when newfoals keep their human names in mind!

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