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In the Everfree forest, one of the Princess' of Equestria take's a class of fillies and colts to learn about the past and its hero's. There they discover that legends often replace the original story.
(A quick one shot story I came up with, which I think is starting to evolve in my head. There may be more...)

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Well... that was unexpected, it's always been Twilight becoming an Alicorn, which is what I was was guessing until Fluttershy made herself known. You are going to have to finish this so that we may know the truth. Or leave us to imagine what happen, that works too. ~Celestia's Paladin

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THank you! :pinkiehappy: Yeah, I wanted to shake the norm up for a change. As I say, I have further ideas to this, maybe one day the truth will be revealed as well? We'll see, I'm working on two other stories as it is! :derpytongue2:

Yeah. Yeah this was good. A nice little one shot. Melancholy, but overall satisfying.

Good work.:pinkiesmile:

Hmm... Well, I'm a little confused as to what exactly caused the other 5 to get sick. Were they trying to create a cure for the plague and got exposed? Or were they just the first victims?

Beyond that though, great story. I love what you did with Fluttershy's character, allowing her to develop some more confidence (At least around kids) in the past 500 years. Hope to see some more in the future!

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Firstly, thank you :yay:
In regards to what happened to the girls, I'm leaving that open to your own thoughts. Maybe one day I may reveal what happened, but where's the fun in that? :derpytongue2:
Thank you again, do have some further idea's, but its developing them enough!

Great story. I expect great things of this.
Fluttershy, an alicorn? I can see that happening

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Heh, thank you, I try my best!
And so could I! I think I'm the first to write a story about it though of ehr on her own as one.

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yeah, believe so.
I'm working on a fic some like, but the ratings are in the toilet now. But i'm having fun with it.
And that's the thing, have fun with it. It won't satisfy if you didn't have fun writing it.

I very much enjoy this story. It manages to capture very well an older, more experienced Fluttershy after she's been through so much.
Is this a series now? I'd love to see more.

This is amazing! I loove it!:yay:

it would be so like Pinkie to party in her sleep
probably did it the same way she always found Rainbow Dash

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That's kind of my philosphy, I write for my own enjoyment, but if I get just one other person to like it, I am happy :eeyup:
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Thank you! Yes it has become kind of a series, I have a fair few ideas for it. That said, I have a fair few idea's on a LOT of stories!
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Thank you! :heart:
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But of course! :rainbowlaugh:

I must say this storyline idea surprised me as I have never thought Fluttershy to be one of loyalty to her friends and the creatures of the forest, to have a royalty ranking. :fluttershyouch:

Something tells me that Rarity may get Jealous over Fluttershy...again. :raritycry:

Nice idea overall, I wish you the best of luck upon such a great storyline like this one. :yay:

Keep up the good work. Thought; when they wake up Luna will be the one with all the experience in
adjusting to a loss of time of that length! And now the student becomes the teacher.

Wonderfully written- and quite touching indeed.

The reason for events unfolding so is a bit distressing- I doubt any would like to consider the Six plagued so- but this is a beautifully hopeful handling of it.

Kudos on a nice little piece of writing. :twilightsmile:

This story is really good. I can't wait for the next chapter.:twilightsmile:

so does that mean when AJ, Rarity, and RD awake, they will find that Applebloom, Sweetie Belle, and Scootaloo are long dead?

I like where this was going, it's a real shame that this is apparently a dead fic.

After finding this, I would like to ask for more chapters if it is possible.

Is this a full on lost cause?

how can u live with your self not completing this fic!!!!!!!!!:fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry:

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