When Gilda returns to Ponyville looking to patch things up with Rainbow Dash, things don't exactly go as planned. Grounded and humiliated, Gilda begins the long process of learning that sometimes, friendship means being willing to admit you were wrong.
One-sided Gilda/Dash shipping, rated for Gilda's bad language. Crossposted from Fanfiction.net.
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Loving this story so far. One of the first fanfics I've read in a while that nails everyone's personality perfectly.
You've done a great job of showing Fluttershy's strong side along with her usual shy side. Gilda's slow realization of how she's
to blame for alienating Rainbow Dash was very well done. Can't wait to read more :D
Good start dude! Keep it up
What a magnificent piece of work! It's well-written in general, and you have the characters down perfectly. I hope you'll finish it.
It's a very good start to a story. Gilda is just as unapologetically self-centered as she was in the series... you've got her character perfectly.
"You're in love with Rainbow Dash, aren't you, Gilda?"
Isn't everyone? *GRIN*
Nice story. Nice start of growth in Gilda's character...
...and Fluttershy is very, very patient. She is an angel!
I appreciate the care you took in characterization. Gilda IS growing. And Fluttershy is as strong as she's ever been.
Well done!
You have my attention. *tracks the story*
*munching popcorn*
Definitely good so far; looking forward to more.
I've been bored as heck so ths story is a welcome change to the ritualistic schedule I've got. I almost want to hound you for more. And with that, I end on a Timelord-y note of
ALLONS-Y!!!!
This reminds me of The Barbarian and Druid....
Speaking of which, I can't find the story. Link anyone?
Evil evil cliffhanger
I approve 
Ooh, this is a good story
Kind of a dick move from Applejack there
I recommend choosing which spelling of griffon/griffin/gryphon you're going with. Other than that, good read.
68557 Remember that the Apple family members have an accent, my friend.
68645 ...Not totally sure how that affects the spelling of a word that's pronounced the same way regardless, but whatever floats your boat.
69648 Just pointing out that it was intentional, and that that, however specious, was my reasoning for it. =) Glad you seem to be enjoying the fic, though.
70214 Oh, I'm very heartily enjoying it. Just rather nitpicky, is all.
Blessed Faust, Mother of Luna! That cart just ran over Big Machintosh!
And lastly, unless this is rogue weather from Everfree attracted to the Zap Apple Trees, SOMEpony is getting sacked from the weather team.
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You've got good intuition (and you know Mac well, heh).
Gilda's cart was the one that ran off - she put it down too close to the edge of the hill.
(The thing is, I didn't really have a plan for the weather - but now I certainly do have a justification for it!)
>> RedSavant
any news on next chapter, the cliffhanger is killing me
Is this fic dead? I hope it's not, because I really like it.
1991855 Seeing that the author has been away for nearly a year, I guess we can say that this fic is dead.(Although it's not actually all that long)