Chapter 21: Afterword
Edited by uSea
AFTERWORD
Beyond the horizon, we will be together again.
“Oh, c'mon, you can't st- FZZT -rking right now!” BAM BAM BAM! “Hello hello? Test, test... onetwothree...”
“...”
“Okay, it seems to work. Very well... let's get started. First of all, my name is Watcher. My self imposed mission was to watch over the Wasteland, looking for lost ponies and groups of adventurers, hoping to eventually find those that carried the Elements of Harmony. Now, things are changing and I have friends that will help me with my task. I'm not alone anymore, and I finally have some time for doing things that I feel need to be done.
“And this is the reason why now I'm recording this tape and, just for this tale, I’m asking you to call me Mister Questioner. This is a story that could seem unimportant, or even silly, but it’s about dreams, and memories. It’s a story about two large, innocent pink eyes that couldn't see the horrors of our times and kept believing that somewhere, behind those ruined walls, inside the slave pens and even in the raiders' camps, everypony was still a pretty pony.
“And at the end of her journey, where the road met the ocean, the ghost foal that lost her mom finally found a place to rest. Sure, she was a little late, but I was told that when she finally accepted her fate, Puppy left with a smile.
“Like she were following an old postcard the filly went down the Big 52, showing everyone she met what ponies had been in the past and what they could still be. Somehow changing the way they saw themselves, making them see a better past, and making them wish for a better tomorrow. She wasn't actually trying to change the world, or even to save lives, but that might have been why so many ponies took notice. Since she was no preacher but simply herself, it was easy to see that there was no fanaticism or weird ideals in her; just a little pony with large pink eyes that knew, for a fact, that no one could really be that evil.
“And this... this is what happened in the few months between Puppy's arrival at Emerald Shores and today.
“The ponies of Emerald Shores came back to the town shortly after the Wild Herd's defeat: when they arrived from the NCA, they found the graves on the hill and the remains of the crushed ferris wheel; alas, what really startled them was that somepony had changed the name of the town on all the signs. Now the town is called Nightmare's Fall.
“The survivors of Ironworks started rebuilding the town, helped by their neighbours. Since the battle the settlement had a shortage of adult ponies, so the Rangers decided to settle in this town, making it their new headquarters. Not everypony was happy with this new situation, but the rangers proved themselves vital during the liberation of the town, and eventually even the most stubborn came to accept them.
“With Ivory Tower destroyed and Ironworks reduced at the shadow of its former self, Broccoli gathered all the ponies that didn't want to live in a ghost town or hadn't a home in which to live at all. The work in the fields improved greatly and the farmers diversified their crops, for the joy of the foals. Now they grow both broccoli and cabbage.
“The crater at Ivory Tower was filled by the seasonal rains and a small trading post has been built along the route between Broccoli and Rust Manor. The town is very small and lightly fortified, but it's growing fast and somepony is starting to build farms all around the lake. The town still doesn’t have a name, but the traders call it The Hole.
“Rust Manor was attacked during the Enclave conflict; the town wasn't able to repel the attackers and the control tower was completely destroyed; numerous ponies were killed, but the survivors are already beginning to rebuild their home. It won't be easy, but nothing is easy in the wasteland.
“Sun City is still a war zone. The Sand Sweepers and a number of small bands are currently fighting each other to gain the control of the desert's gem. Since the Hired Hooves retreated from Sun City during the Enclave conflict and never came back, the settlement is still a dangerous place, avoided by almost every caravan. For those that dare to risk their lives, though, the inner town is full of old world technology that could make you rich for the rest of your life.
“Tunnel Town expanded on both sides of Sugartop Mountain and now it's the third largest town along the Big 52. The prices for using the tunnel have been cut considerably and the city began a service of long range patrols to keep at bay the groups of raiders and slavers along the Route in the town's territory.
“Salt Cube City is still the biggest city along the Big 52 and it has grown even more since the ghouls left the Dome. The Hired Hooves are expanding their influence even outside the Route, and have opened offices in the nearby towns. The Talons don’t seem very happy with this policy, and tension between the two mercenary groups is rapidly growing.
“The Redtrotters didn't change very much: they stayed faithful to their tribal customs and are still charging the caravans that travel along their territory, but now foals don't have to pay the fee. This is not a big improvement, but the tribe has opened relations with the other settlements and they are actually trying to improve the safety of their part of the Route.
“The Applejack Rangers helped in reconstructing Ironworks, establishing their new base in the town's Stable. During the last battle at the Cave, all four of Ironworks’ surviving paladins were dispatched to help with defending the place, and I had the opportunity to meet both Cold Shower and Scold. The battle was hard and Shower didn’t survive it; she is now sleeping besides Gauss at Emerald Shores. Scold has grown distant after losing her; it seems that the old scribe is doomed to survive all his friends... a fate that I can easily understand.
“Happy and Jamie married and I was told that she is expecting. Since the marriage is quite a recent news, I think that they didn't expect to be celebrating again so soon. When asked what name they are planning to give the foal, Happy stated that she's still uncertain, but it won't be Puppysmiles.
“Molten Gold didn't stop his graverobbing career for long after the battle with the Nightmare. The ghoul left as soon as he recovered and sailed south on a steamboat, along with a group of adventurers. I haven't heard anything from him since then.
“SolOS and Pinkie 7 were actually able to become friends in the end. I was contacted by P7 a little after the first Enclave attacks; she was curious about this 'Questioner' Puppy was always talking about, so we had a chat and even if I don't think I'm going to trust her or SolOS any time soon, I think that they aren't going to give us troubles for a while. She actually scared me a bit when she told me about her and SolOS’ idea of programming a new AI and naming it Puppy.SML... I hope that this was just a joke.
“Lonesome Pony recovered from his wounds and went back to Radio 52, keeping the Big 52 together with his encouraging speeches and all of his music. DJ Good Stuff is still working with him but when I tried asking when they were going to marry, both of them laughed at me. During the Enclave conflict Radio 52 kept broadcasting; it was small enough that the pegasi didn't bother to shut it down. The radio helped with organizing the defenses and boosted the morale of the defenders; it wasn’t very much, but it was enough for those that fought during the conflict.
“Mister White trotted back to Salt Cube City; the loss of Sage Brush changed him deep inside, even if his sister never blamed him for it. After resigning his place of leadership, he became a traveling merchant and as far as I know, he's still running along the Route, bartering every sort of merchandise. This is just a rumor, but it seems that one of his guards is a unicorn mare with a tower as a cutie mark. Maybe he didn't want to lose the opportunity to hire somepony that had the guts to spank a Nightmare, or he simply wanted to give a raider a second chance... After all you gotta care, right?
“After Long Ears' demise, a new filly in her tribe got the Far Seer cutie mark, becoming the next shaman. I have no idea how their power works, but it seems to be some mix of powerful drugs and innate precognition; I just know that it is very tolling and quickly consumes the mare's body, so that a single pony sacrifices her life to help the tribe. A boon that brings a curse...
“There’s still a pony that I never met in person, and I’m starting to doubt his actual existence. Puppy described him to me as... the baddest evil villain ever. Count Horse Tile. I asked several travelers and caravan guards, but no one has been able to give me a single clue about this cruel noble pony... I guess his mystery will remain unsolved.
“Henrietta is still running from the Talons. It seems that there has never been good blood between them and the Firebrights, and the young griffon is keeping up the family tradition. I tried to talk with Gawdyna, to see if some sort of truce can be arranged. I hope that Henry will accept to parley; after all she was Puppy's best friend, and seeing the girl die because of a feud that she didn't even start is something i rally don’t want to see.
“The Wild Herd was dispersed and fled to their outposts on the coast again. This time they suffered heavy losses, both in numbers and in pride, but everyone knows that they will come back one day. Hopefully, even if they once more strike the Big 52, it will be without the help of an army of robots, and that could be enough to let the good ponies sleep quietly, for the moment.
“The Lost Herd seems to be gone. With Sidekick's death, the last of those damned souls found peace at last, and finally Equestria will be able to forget one of the many horrors of the war. May those poor foals find a deserved rest in whatever awaits us past this life.
“So, this is the end of Puppy's story. Did she really change something along her path? Will her action matter in the long run? I have— sorry, I has no idea, but I think I'll miss the way she talked, and the way she took everything so lightly. Another shard of the Equestria I loved is forever gone... but I still hope that I will live long enough to be able to see a filly like her again; but this time it won’t be a ghost from the past, but a daughter of the present.
“And speaking of ghosts, the legend of the Ghost of the Big 52 is still alive, even if it seems more a Nightmare Night's tale than a real story. It’s said that when the sun goes down and the moon is waning, a ghostly figure rides along the Route, silent like a shadow and swift like the wind. It looks for the souls of the wicked: slavers, raiders and the evildoers that lurk in darkness, waiting for easy prey. At least two groups of raiders were actually found dead along the route: they didn't show a single wound, their weapons were still fully loaded and they were clearly ready to strike... but they died on the spot, with no explanation. Killed by a presence that didn’t leave a single clue. So, now I want to ask you one thing.
“Do you believe in ghosts?”
DAY 4 - TIME approximately 7:30 P.M. - LOCATION: Downtown, Salt Cube City
Sand Box turned the wheel left trying to make the airship fly against the wind, but it was an impossible task. Friend Force One was losing pieces along the way since the take off, and two engines had already failed. The ghoul slammed his hoof down on the intercom and yelled: “Soft Air, we need more power! We’re getting pushed back by a damn nightly breeze! I don’t know how, but give me more knots!”
The reply from the communication device had more in common with an electrocution than an actual conversation, but it was about the balloon losing gas and the engines catching fire.
Sand box cursed, before talking again in the instrument. “Okay don’t worry, I’ve got a backup plan: we will crash the airship here, so that the wind won’t send us back to Salt Cube city!”
If the reply from the other side of the line was a complaint, it never reached Sand Box. In that very same moment the whole world decided to become pure light.
Just an endless, blinding, perfectly silent light that enveloped everything. There was no pain, and there was no fear. Just light.
DAY N.A. - TIME N.A. - LOCATION: N.A.
When Sand Box opened his eyes again he had the unsettling feeling that there was absolutely nothing wrong. Nothing at all. He took his time to look for a moment around the flying deck, trying to understand what happened. Well, the wheel was still there, the sky was all starry, the commands were working, the lights were all lit...
“Wait a moment... the lights are all lit? There are stars outside? What the...”
Yes, the airship was working perfectly, and by perfectly it meant that the whole damn room seemed as new as the day it went out from the docks. The floor was shining, the commands were clean, the wheel was even waxed! And the windows! They were so clear that you could even see yourself inside th—
And Sand Box saw Sand Box. Surprise on his muzzle was giving way to realization. Slowly, he touched his face with a hoof. It was... his real face, the one he had before becoming a ghoul! He was a pony again, he was...
Dead.
He was dead, this was the only possible reason for all of this. But if he was dead, why was he still on the ship? Was this some sort of afterlife punishment where he had to fly a ship forever, like the Flying Dutchmare? Were the others trapped forever on that thing with him? And why? He... he didn’t want to fly forever, he had to see Agatha! She... she was waiting for him somewhere, he couldn’t just... fly a stupid ship for the eternity!
FWEEEEET! A loud whistle interrupted Sand Box’s shipwreck of desperation, making him turn towards the deck’s entrance. A feminine voice announced her arrival while the door slammed open. “Captain on the Bridge!”
A pink mare with a pink mane and big blue eyes appeared in front of the former ghoul; she was wearing a navy officer uniform and sported the largest smile Sand Box had ever seen on a pony... “Miss... Minister Pie?”
Pinkie dismissed Sand Box with the wave of a hoof. “Ah, call me Captain Pinkie, I don’t like that ministry thing... it wasn’t happy at all anyway.” The young mare started jumping in every corner of the bridge, giggling and yelling enthusiastically. “Yay! I knew that this little filly was going to fly sooner or later! Oh, oh, look! Look at this! All the arrows on the panels are pink exactly as I asked! It’s... it’s fantastic!”
The chief technician stood still with a confused expression on his muzzle, looking at the hyperactive pony touching everything while moving around at a speed that wasn’t physically possible. “I... can I help you somehow?”
Before Sand had the time to finish the question, he found himself staring into Pinkie’s enormous blue eyes, nose to nose with her. “Sure you can! They are all waiting for you in the lounge! Move that slow rump of yours and join the party! I’ll get there as soon as I’m done having fun here!”
The stallion nodded, slowly stepping back towards the door and never losing eye contact with Pinkie Pie. She was a little bit scary, especially from the point of view of a pony that had just been dead for less than ten minutes. Once on the stairs, he turned on his tail and rushed to the airship’s recreational bridge.
The saloon wasn’t crowded, still it was quite populated, especially since Sand Box clearly recalled that aboard the Friend Force One there were just four ponies when it took off. Now instead he counted eight guests.
It was easy to recognize Soft Air from his typical military technician jumpsuit, and Peach Blossom with her blooming peach flower cutie mark was easy to spot; the middle aged mare with the stethoscope had to be Dr. Get Well... wow, she was quite a sight with all of her skin and muscles in their place... This left a griffon and four other ponies that Sand Box didn’t recognize.
The griffon was sipping tea while reading a newspaper, sitting on a couch. He was wearing combat armor and had several weapons on him. Two of the ponies, a mare and a stallion, had the typical padded suit used under power armor and were standing side by side in front of a table with drinks and snacks. They didn’t pay attention to the table anyway, being too occupied in nuzzling each other, seemingly at peace.
The third pony was sitting alone in front of a window, looking outside the ship. He sighed and shook his head, in his eyes was easy to read some sort of regret and resignation. As if he left too many things undone behind and wanted to go back. The fourth pony was a unicorn mare with a long cape; she had the Sand Sweepers traditional jewelry on her, maybe she was a dead far seer? The mare seemed different from the others, more a shadow than a real presence. She was also the one that trotted towards Sand Box when he stepped inside the room.
“Greetings, I see that Pinkie let you come down at last. I guess this means that we are ready to proceed... she should be here soon, unless she got lost again.”
Sand Box frowned. “What is going on? Who is she? Who are you? Listen, I’m not a troublemaker but I’d—” He stopped talking when the mare approached a door and pulled it open. A Pink foal with a blond mane and two big pink eyes trotted inside the room.
Puppy still had her pretty silver ticket in her teeth. She didn’t understand how exactly she arrived in that place, but it didn’t matter. There were games, and treats, and it totally seemed like a super fancy party! It was everything she always dreamed, and it was full of ponies to boot! And a Chicken!
Sand Box felt his heart sink in an icy grasp. Of all the ponies he was expecting to see, Puppysmiles was the last one. “Oh, little one... I’m... I’m so sorry...” How could this foal smile even in a moment like this? “What happened? Who... how did you arrive here?”
Puppy tilted her head, unable to recognize the pony in front of her, but he seemed very nice, so it was all right. “Hi mistur pretty pony! I am Puppysmiles, and I am going to find my mom! A super nice skelly pony gave me this super fancy ticket and sent me here! And I was told that Mom was just over there, after the ride!” The little filly paused for a moment, checking the place. “Ah, are we there yet?”
Sand Box blinked his eyes, trying to understand what the foal meant, but Long Ears came in his help, whispering in his ear, “Her mother is dead...” This only succeeded in making Sand’s perplexity grow.
“You... you are happy to be dead?”
Puppy giggled. “The nice skelly pony told me so, mistur pretty pony! But I feel fine and I’m going to find mom! This is, like, the best thing ever!”
“B-but...” She was so... happy... and even if she was explained what was going on, what would have been the point of it? Sand Box smiled and nodded. “Yes. Yes it is. Do you want to play something with the others until we arrive?”
In the meantime, the various ponies in the room had slowly gathered around Puppy. They were all looking at her with various degrees of perplexity or sadness. Cold Shower and Gauss approached the filly, the mare was the first to talk.
“I’m sorry that we had to fight you... I wish there was a better way...” Gauss nodded for a moment, sighing deeply.
“Ah, why is everypony sad? Where are the pony games? I want to play hide and seek! Or pin the tail on the pony! And then I wanna dance, and... Oh, I hope the pony tail is pink! Pink is my super favorite color! I’m the bestest tail pinner ever!” Puppy was already jumping on her hooves, trying to look beyond the small group of ponies.
Pinkie, now wearing a flight attendants uniform, followed Puppy through the door, and patted the foal on the head. “I’m sorry Puppy, but there’s no time for that! We’ve sailed through the Star Ocean, and now we have arrived! The ride ends here, fillies and gentlecolts! Thank you for choosing the afterlife airlines and have a pleasant stay!” The pink mare moved rapidly towards the door, opening it and revealing to the other ponies a wonderful landscape made of green hills and small ponds.
Small herds of ponies dotted the meadows, while pegasi sat on the clouds populating a wonderful blue sky. The passengers trotted outside the ship, staring in amazement at the place. It seemed like a dream come true: here and there it was possible to see the roofs of some houses and on the distant hills there was a large apple orchard.
Even Puppy was left speechless in front of the beauty of the place; everything was perfect! The trees, the meadows, all the pretty ponies and the sunny sky! It... it was even better than Ponyville, it was so beautiful! The only thing that was missing was—
Puppysmiles froze for a second, her eyes staring into a small herd of ponies grazing on the borders of a daisy field. The smile on her face grew bigger and bigger as she galloped toward the ponies in the grass. One of the figures looked up and smiled at the incoming filly who was now crying with joy, unable to say anything but a single word.
“Mom!”
Footnote: Press any key to skip credits - Thank you for playing Fallout Equestria: Pink Eyes.
This fanfiction is based on Fallout Equestria by Kkat; a familiarity with the source material may aid your understanding.
You can read Fallout Equestria by Kkat on Equestria Daily
If you enjoy Fallout Equestria Side Stories you will want to check the Fallout Equestria Side Stories post on Equestria Daily and the Fallout Equestria Side Stories thread on Ponychan
The Ponychan group is also a hatching ground that you can join if you want to share your experience, writing or comments with us.
Huge thanks to Nyerguds, Damhoof, Easteu, Aerondight, Arcane Scroll, Palacioskw and Anonsamurai for helping me both with the language and the eternal struggle of keeping the story on its rails ^_^
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Dawww, So happy, yet so sad.
Of all the things on the internet, only Fallout: Equestria fics seem to actually make me cry.
This is definitely one of the best Fo:E fics out there, just as good as Project Horizens, and even Fo:E itself.
O god man that was a wonderful ending ending
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please for all that is wonderful in this world i wish i could read Henrietta seeing Puppy in the afterlife to this this has been a wonderful story i have had laughs and ive had tears it was an experience and im looking forward to more of your work.......a few manily tears gave there lives this day
*Slow clap* Bravo. Absolutely amazing. I loved this whole story, and the ending is perfect!
<---Happy tears right there.
Words fail me... It was that great.
Yay for happy endings.
An emotionally powerful ending. I almost shed a manly tear.
This is truly one of the best fanfics ever conceived. You did something I thought impossible - put enormous amounts of humor into a world which has levels of grimdark leaning dangerously close to those of Warhammer 40k. A genius idea with wonderful execution. I'd hope to see more stories written like this.
Humm, not sure how to say this. This might be inspired by, and follows in the footsteps of Fallout Equestria, but, you have created something new and special in its own right. Rather, you should stand proud at what you have created. I would sudjest, if you can find the insperation, set once more pen to paper, and write something, with an eye for handing it in for publication. You have a wonderfull story here, and such talent I would like to see go on to more new things.
I should also add, the end did bring tears to this old fools eyes as well.
Well done.
I also would have liked to see the meeting of gryphon and Puppy on the shores of the after.
The more i try to hold the manly tears back the worse it gets
absolutely bucking amazing all the way through.
goddamit this was the only fanfic that made me cry. That includes My little dashie.....god day sir.
+ spike manly tear
Amazing... i cant explain how awesome that was so ya
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This never story never failed to bring a smile to my face, and this ending was no exception. Beautiful.
... Beautiful. Just - beautiful.
This story made me cry for like 7minutes
and i rarely cry
you achieved a amazing feat
Pyros over all grade for Fallout equestria by mimezinga 5/5
A emotional rollercoster
>Count Horse Tile rears his immaterial head once more
We need a story about some ghoul Count called Horse Tile, and a lack of understanding as to why he's being prosecuted by would-be heroes when he just wants to make fine marble tiles.
About the only thing I don't like about this whole story is that it's finished and the ride is over. Oh well.
Nicely done.
So fucking good! ARGH!
Are you God?
... ...
...*clap*... *clap*
*clap* *clap*
*CLAP, CLAP APPOSE, WOOTS, CHEERS,*
THE CROWD GO'S NUTS
Masterpiece, bravo
i say, that was one of the beast story's I've read of all time.
We give this one a 5/5, way to go dude.
Twilight's seal of approval,
MISSION COMPLETE!
YES!! SHE DID IT!!! SHE FINALLY FOUND HER!!! TTwTT
This story was truly excellent! I never would have thought anypony could manage to pull of such light-hearted and yet retain that emotional sincerity and yet remain so true to the setting, but by Celestia you did it! Congratulations on finishing, I am sure this story will be remembered as one of the greats of the fandom!
It was an awesome story from beginning to end! Thank you for sharing it and writing such a moving ending!
Puppy shall be missed. But I'm glad she finally found her mom.
Now that was just brilliant. The only regret I have is that soon i'm going to run out of fallout equestria to read...what will I do then?
Nice job. You're finally there at the end of it all. I gotta' say that it wasn't the best ending ever, but it was still great - and that's all I could ask for, right? So, thanks; and never stop writing. What more needs to be said?
This ending was wonderful. It fit into fallout's style and simply made me the reader smile through teary eyes.
If only I beleived in Heaven..
As soon as I hit that last paragraph the tears welled up.
I salute you sir for what you have accomplished.
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Of the 3 top Fallout Equestrias, why is it this one that makes me want to/has made me shed tears!? Very nice work as a whole and might I add, a fantastic ending to boot. not too dragged out, nicely wrapped up Fallout 3 style, and an outcome that I've wanted since chapter 1 with minimal plot twists (a logical one that's not overly complicated). Straight forward and simple, just like puppy. just...great
Thinking about it... this made me happy. Not happiness, more like... relief? Yes. Reflief, as most people tend to think that when you die, your consciousness is just lost in a big empty room. But this actually made me feel happy for all those who died and didn't deserve to die during the Story. Making me feel good that they wouldn't be just dead. Making me feel better that they didn't just die and stay lost forever. I think that's all.
You're doing it right! This was on par with the best things I've ever read.
Good way to end it on a high note
AND PUPPY GOT TO SEE HER MOM, DAWWWW
Awesome story. Glad to see that Puppy finally found her mom, even if it took 200ish years.
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While the grammar and spelling, in all honesty, can be very atrocious, this story still managed to make me cry, twice.
The amount of attachment I have developed to Puppy is astounding, and I applaud you for being able to do so.
Grammar and overall artistic deliverance could use some tweaking, but this story was excellent. Well done, a different fallout taste than Project Horizons or the original, but nonetheless a masterpiece on its own.
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THIS. So much THIS.
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Manly tears were shed this day, not even the squint could stop it.
Well, it's all over now. I have to admit, the ending was a bit... mixed to me. At some points, it seemed utterly ridiculous, especially when Creepy Voice/Nightmare Noob pretty much did the shaking-a-fist-and-saying-I'll-be-back thing. Then again, it fits the style of the story pretty much perfectly, so I can't complain. The recap with Spike/Watcher/Mister Questioner was a nice little touch, fitting the Fallout 3 ending that showed the scenes of how the hero (this case heroine) changed the Wasteland (this case The Big 52). All in all, it was an ending fitting for the story.
Nightmare Noob. Dammit, Mime, you've got it to stick!
That said, well done, Mime. I don't know where you plan to go from here, but wherever it is, best of luck.
Cheers,
Adder1
AND THE CROWD GOES WILD!!
Fucking beautiful end! I loved the ride, as sad as I am that its over, I am glad to have ridden it from the near beginning.
*auditorium packed to the brim doing a standing ovation*
Hey guys try this: look up "friendship is magic - theme song (piano-instrumenhtal)" on youtube, start hit, thehen start reading from when pinkie opened the
Door to heaven. Great emotional effect.
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You don't have to believe in heaven. You just have to believe the world of Equestria has one ;)
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Well Mime, since you allowed us #FalloutEquestria guys to preread this I was literally along for the ride on these last 2 chapters. So even though I've said it all before, I still have to say, again, thank you, this was amazing, and despite your doubts on how to execute the ending, this was definitely brilliantly done.
Yes. All of my yes. And my yay. And my tears. Thank you so much for this story.
That was. . .
I'm in tears. Not manly tears; broken down, messy, emotional tears.
This ending. . . it's *perfect* for this story. 10/10 on this story, now that it's done, and good job earning that score =D
I'm not one for tears, but even I had slightly damp eyes at the ending.
Excellent finish to a good story. You did the original FOE proud.
Congratulations.
Manly tears...really i mean it lol *sniff*
Great story you made,and thank you for it.
Im so happy Puppy finally found her mom,and creepy voice accepting puppies name as her was great (not sure if better then Nightmare Noob tho)
Now i want noob tubes(grenade launcher attachment) to be mentioned in some FO:E story and someone shouting that another is OP (overpowered)
Thank you for the ponies
So sad and so happy.
A really unique story.
Thank you Mimezinga!
Llama needed this so badly and is filled with admiration and love for Mime and Puppy.
Well, here we are.
Thank you for all the feedback and the cheers you gave to Puppy, I'm still amazed of how much love she got ^_^
About the language, uSea, I and the pre-readers did our best wiith it, but I guess that the starting point wasn't good enough to ave a good narrative language, I'm sorry ç_ç
and nao, some more credits!
First of all, thanks to uSea, that took all the 130k of the story and edited them into a better form. Guys, if you feel that the language is meh right nao, you don't even want to knoww how bad it was before! He's a real hero.
Second, I must thanks my first three readers. MintyRest, Llama Llumps and Samurai. Their encouragements made me go beyond chapter 5 and try putting this story on FimFic ^_^
Third, I want to thank the communities that supported Pink Eyes. First of all the Side Stories doc community, that is linked everywhere in the story, then the good guys at www.fallout-equestria.com and the fallout equestria wiki. The community on #falloutequestria on canternet and the good reviewers of the rookies review post on Ponychan (and a special thank goes to Twilight Snarkle that accepted to review chapter 11 even if he didn't have a clue about the story. I really was in a pinch that time, so thank you very much TS ^_^). Obviously, I want to thank also EqD for giving Pink Eyes so much spotlight. It was awesome.
A big hug goes to the pre-readers too. I had a lot of friends pre-reading for me and putting all the names could be messy since I'm afraid of forgetting some of them ç_ç but everyone that pre-read some chapter knows it and knows how much Puppy owes them. Oh, and a special thanks to Silfir, the guy that did the very first proofreading and editing of chapter 1, thank you Sil, I owe you one! And to Dinawartotem, that saved chapter 19 from being a complete trainwreck!
Nao the artists. There were many, but in this moment I want to thank especially Sip for the cover and Easteu forthe cute; Julep and Irkengeneral were awesome too, and there are many others, Puppeh got lotta art!
Thank you to the guys that made and updated the TVtropes page, it is made of win! Love goes also to the two guys that made youtube readinngs, I enjoy them very much ^_^
I am forgetting somepony for sure, but hey, I've never been good at these things, so I'll add other thanks when I remember them! Until then, thank you everypony and hugs from your little guardian filly! Go Puppy!
Mimezinga
Thank you for writing such a beautiful story. A very fitting end.