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Whirl Wind


Whirl finds himself in a mess and need the help of his friends to get him through this tough time. He starts to come out of his shell and seek new friendships in places one would never think to look. (Has yet to be proof read, but any mistakes usually go unnoticed unless you are looking for them.)

(Sequel to: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/82761/this-means-war . Which is a sequel to http://www.fimfiction.net/story/82759/quest-for-the-holy-gr-tea-cup . Which is a sequel to http://www.fimfiction.net/story/61252/whirl-wind-sonic-flare-in-nightmare-night

Chapters (10)
Comments ( 7 )

Didn't expect you to bring lucidity into this story. Interesting that you did though.

Another interesting thing in this story; redemption. Much more important to the storyline, and much more surprising too.


That was the point. Anypony can kill, but it takes a special kind of pony to forgive and help somepony.


Well, you know me. ;)

learned math, science, and history

Big Bang Theme Song started playing in my head.

Whim chuckled and lifted Star up to his lap. “Well, you see these spots are actually frostbite. It happens when you stay cold for too long and it actually hurts a bit.”
“I didn’t bite you though…” Frost Star said in a sad tone.

I can't help but think that you both chose the name Frost Star and had Whim get frostbite just so you could make that joke.

Wow, nice way to end it.

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