69 dislikes...

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unf

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Now, if you will excuse me, I need to have a talk with my pastor.

Is it sad that I enjoyed the part with cleaning up more than the whole chapter?

stahp pl0x?

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what the fudge are you blithering about

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You keep on not putting enough cum in these chapters.

stahp pl0x?

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Sorry I'll have her snort jizz like cocaine later to make up for it.

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Good...

Come for the sexual activities, stay for science.

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I came alright.

Now that was certainly an erotic and kinky chapter, MORE!

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kk

Not bad, just one little thing. She mentions that she will be having twenty eight meals, but if she eats three times a day for a week that would only be twenty one.

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Fuck math.

(thanks)

As a special bonus chapter, you should have Trixie show up. She sneaks into Twilight's house in an effort to learn some advanced spells for her show and to one up Twilight when she discovers her recordings and the spell, leading to her growing her own penis (which is substantially larger than Twilights)

I-I.....excuse me........

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Yeeeeeeees?

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Was thinking I might do some bonus stuff with Twilight felching her own jizz out of Luna's ass or something. Depends.

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you forgot snacks, and afternoon tea

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part of me wanted to puke at the cum gargling and the rest wanted to clop to it.... my genitals havent been this confused since i saw shining armor banging big mac

This is both disgusting and absolutely hilarious. Liked, watched, all that good stuff!

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I am disturbed that anyone could find cum gargling disgusting... It's a beautiful sight to see a female with a nice body gargling six or eight loads in the back of her throat.

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i just threw up in my mouth a bit

3978297 It is truly a testament to one's skills with cum gargling. It should be an Equestrian Games sport.

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Gargle it, I guess?

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OH deer lord you wont stop will you?
no?

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Not as long as you continue to misspell "dear", no.

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Or did you mean that I should have a bunch of deer fuck Twilight and jizz on her?

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well then my deer friend, i geuss this a draw..

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that I would love to read. please do it

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that I would love to read. please do it

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The Scent: The Lust Of Mares by Distorted Flare

I found something you may want to edit.

She could heat seeping through the glass, warming her cheek, and could also smell the semen inside.

I think the word, "feel" should be in between those two.

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I think that you are most likely correct.

What remained then was a dusty old basement decorated by [an electrical box, a single light] fixture.

I think this could benefit from the addition of the word "and"
'an electrical box, and a single light fixture'
Other than that, maybe only one or two other small things that i forgot to go back and note.

Good? Bad?

It was excellent!
Sometimes you just need to do things...
FOR SCIENCE!!

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I don't think I can look at twilight the same way ever again...

I loved this and was disgusted at the same time. Thank you parasprite for writing the weird stories that I love.

I reward you with Japanese ponies.

She conceived of a world so enticing that she wanted to fuck it... That's a great way to come up with a sexual fantasy!

I would love to see Twilight actually submit her findings to a science committee, and then see Celestia's reaction.

I can't choose between being aroused and being hysterical with laughter!

This was great! Next chapter, please.

I. Am.Hooked. On. This. Story. For. Now.

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Damn Twilight dreams of fucking the entire audience at a science award ceremony to get off. She has a raging brainer

This story is everything I could have asked for, so far.

Twilight's tiny magic dick is gonna bug her all week, isn't it? Particularly if Rarity has a bigger one. I mean, being beaten by earth ponies and pegasi, yeah ... but another unicorn? Terrible.

I LOVE IT!
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Oh Twilight, your mind is so locked into the Socratic method, but your subconscious knows better and you just go with your gut when you're drunk.

At this time, I am fifty-nine point three pounds in weight and three point six eight feet in height, horn included.

Oh sure, go insane if you forget your methodology, but then don't use the metric system? I'm revoking your science license.

Twilight's fantasies had me laughing up a storm, and the whole time it seemed perfectly in character for her to be fantasizing about medical journals and getting rutted while receiving awards.
Looking forward to the next chapter.

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I'm hoping this shows up as some form of Epilogue.

This is amazing! Can't wait for the next chapter!
And I'm pretty sure Twi will have to do soemthing about the taste after a couple of days or she might get sick (though Applejack's has a hint of apples I asume).

This is great!!! Twilight's insecurities about his dick size, Twilight's crazy fantasies.... This is gold!

there was a book about scientific equations resting upside-down on her chest.

Upside-down? Perversion!

Eeeeeewwww..... I'm a lesbian, so this is just really gross!

I'm still gonna fave it though...