Set a year after Twilight's coronation, a new force growing in the shadows of the east threatens the peace Equestria lives in. Starting off with disappearances of Royal guard patrols that has got even the princesses worried, comes a threat Equestria never saw coming. While taking refuge in the Crystal Empire, Twilight realises that the only way out of this is to unite against a common enemy in search of peace. The Mane 6 act to reunite not just ponies, but members of the Griffon Kingdom, the Buffalo Nation, the Zebra tribes, and even dragons to help combat a much feared enemy.
Chapters (10)
Any changelings?
2333677 Wait for it... XDDD
This isn't the most technically accomplished fic I've read by any stretch...but I'm not sure that really matters when I really want to find out what happens next.
Bravo.
2338738 Really, oh wow that means a lot. It's my first long fic. I hope you like the upcoming chapters. Thanks a lot <3
Sorry, but Changelings aren't that evil. Parasites, yes, love-eaters, yes, mass murderers? No. Not a single pony died in the invasion. Sorry, but stories like this grate on my mind, 'cause they'll end with the extinction of the changeling race.
2338960 Ok...
2339119 And love doesn't come from hearts. It comes from certain parts of the brain.
that picture is freak'in EPIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
2339125 I know. I'm a med student XD.
But in this story, I'm mainly using mythological influences. So yeah.
I really appreciate the input you've given me. I'll try and use it to hopefully improve my plot line. Thanks
2339186 I know right? You should totally check the artist's page on dA.
http://ziom05.deviantart.com/
2339524 Ok... because Changeling extinction stories are even higher on my list of least favorite plotlines then clop. And I hate clop as a hobby/
2339541 I know that feel bro, I don't like clop so much either.
well, I think this is shaping up to be an AWESOME story. I can't wait to see where it goes.
-C.Storm
You, my fellow author, have just earned a favorite from me, as well as a like. I can't wait to see what happens next. You've got me ready to take up arms to defend Equestria.
-C.Storm
3062654 Really? N'aww thanks man. Much appreciated! I'm just about to post the next couple of chapters. I find it rather funny I wrote these upcoming ones in a medical surgery XD
did you base this off dragon age
Once again you have amazed. Keep up the awesome work.
-C.Storm
3173646 haha I don't think so. Actually, I haven't heard of dragon age. The idea just came to me when I was listening to this guy's new album --> http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MuqDj6ppnSk
(also I'm a massive fan of LOTR and Narnia and that sort of thing ^^")
3174781 N'awww thank you <3
Another excellent chapter. As to TwiSentry shipping, everyone is entitled to their own opinions. I for one think EG could have done more with it. But that's a matter of opinion. And I think you pulled off the dialogue very well. I can't wait to see what happens next.
-C.Storm
Have you ever considered submitting this story to Equestria Daily? You can find out how to do so here.
3360957 Thank you very much <3 Glad to see someone enjoying this :)
I look forward to reading your comments every time, you know??
3361107 You reckon I should??
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You are welcome. I am flattered you view my comments so highly, but you are welcome to them too.
I have recommended your story to several of my friends as well. And I don't recommend stories lightly.
-C.Storm
3362813 Really? Thank you so much <3 Thats so sweet :)
I really appreciate it
Once again you have amazed me with your mastery of the craft.
Wow, that sounded really...flowery. But it's still true. Great work. Can't wait to see what happens next.
-C.Storm
3942001 Mastery? PSSSHHHT. I'm just a beginner. And as a beginner, I really appreciate the positive comments.
About what happens in the next chapter, I can't reveal much, but I can say that...
DIS GON B GUD.
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I'm looking forward to it.
And if you think you're a "beginner"...you're more talented than you give yourself credit for.
3942143 Oh you flatterer, you.
But thanks anyways. I'll try not to let my impeccable procrastination abilities get the better of me this time round.
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I don't tend to flatter. I offer compliments that I think are deserved.
Thanks for the watch, too. I really appreciate it.
3942598 No worries man, you deserve it. Had a look at your works. (They look awesome :P)
Great story! Needs more action... Like having one of the mane six be under the control of the Queen