How's life in Equestria for you?
Living in a village, town or city? Going to work every day? Meeting friends? Having fun, doing the things you're ment to do?
I wish it was that easy for me. I used to be a happy filly, about to look into a bright future but then....
Well I met the unpleasent side of Equestria.
Ponies jump into conclusions and act before they think. They tend to run and scream rather than to actually ask what is going on.
Now I live in Everfree.
It is a tough life and I had to give up many things just because of one coincidence. But I am not alone here. Those, who cant lead their life in Equestria, for the way they look or live, they all come her. They all live in this magical forest. It is bigger on the inside than it is on the outside I tell you.
Equestrians call us names like monsters, witches or evil creatures.
If they would only give us a chance. Take a closer look, not just run at first sight, when they see a creature, they haven't seen before. They would find we are anything but monsters: We are lonly, outcasted, beaten through this world.
I am Zombie Stitch and this is the story of my life.
When I saw the name Zombie Stitch, I thought of Lilo and Stitch. I was mistaken.
Interesting concept (how exactly did she bring Fluffy to life? Those spells she mentioned had to come from somewhere. And would she ever consider making another friend or fixing him?) but scattered with errors. I liked the descriptions in the //, but when there are more than one in a single paragraph it starts to get confusing.
That being said, she seems like a dynamic character.
2311721
The mistake about the name happens to a lot of people.
Well the spells yes, they are similar to those, that brought the guards back to life, yet further developed.
Fixing Fluffy, that depends on who calls what "broken".
And about the errors: whupps ^^''' i should check before upload more carefully. I've had to turn off the hint function of my text program, because i didn't get an english dictionary installed properly.
I'll re-check it a few times.
Thanks for the comment.
deviantart.com/download/321538516/sweetie_belle_confused_by_felixabsolved-d5bfopg.png
I dunno about this one
Wow this is really great, your grammar and spelling were very good and I didn't spot many mistakes so you're alright ^_^ ~Future Twilight Sparkle from ibrony
I can't waaiit!
PS. THIS IS KATE!! :D HI!!
hey stich its me i told you i would read it so im about to as you ask
and yer i hope i enjoy this as much as our little well you know haha 
that last bit was a pain to read haha but it was funny when i understod it
Your grammar is frickin terrible.
loughing do you mean Laughing? "Ha Ha I Laugh at the funny joke?" Not a being a critic and English is not your first language its ok. The grammar is bad but the story is good enough that I like it any way and can just read over it. It helps that the mistake are constant. But that one word I am only kinda of certain what you mean.
Still Gonna keep reading. Thank you for writing this.