Twilight watched the last of her friends emerge from the armory, each a matching shade of dull navy. Every suit of armor was vastly different in minor ways; where Rainbow's had been all sleek and spikes, Fluttershy's was rounded and soft, blades hidden and armor altered for a more Earth-Pony physique. Where Pinkie's was flashing claws and pouncing attacks, Applejack's was sturdy and built for powerful kicking with underbelly protection. Rarity's was a mixture of them all, elegance mixed with efficiency, crest of the helm studded with magical crystals and tail banded with a single spiked chain.
Twilight's chest, head and feet were still bare, however. Carbon held her boots under his wings, while Steel levitated the helm and neckpiece with an amulet Carbon had described only as 'a gift from Celestia'.
The thestral stared up at her, frowning. "Will you wear Her helm, thestral Princess?"
Twilight took a deep breath. "I... I will take her place as Guardian of the thestrals. But I will not take her Stone."
Carbon glanced over at the neck-piece, the small gemstone inside flickering in the light. "W-why not, thestral Princess?"
"The Stones are the core of a Princess's immortality. In taking that, I would take her life and make it mine. I cannot do that." Twilight levitated the boots and helm from Carbon and Steel. "I will lead you, but not with her life as my protection."
She slipped her hooves into the boots, finding the rear set adapted for claws. The helmet slid easily over her skull, and the dark violet glimmered brightly against the rest of her dull black armor. She could almost feel the phantasmal skin of the previous bearer taking over her own, a sensation she quickly dismissed.
"If it comes to a point where I must die to save you, I will not hide behind magic to do so."
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"The Southern dragons are not the same kind of dragons as those you are bonded with. You all have some of Spike's essence in you, and he is a Northern dragon." Luna turned, unrolling a wide poster with her magic and holding it open.
She pointed a hoof at one of the two large dragons taking up the canvas. "This is an Equestrian, or Northern, dragon. They are under our rule like any other Equestrian, and because of this do not have the constant fights for dominance like those of the South. From generations of this, they have grown rather soft and rotund."
Luna turned her gaze over to Fluttershy. "You have defeated an Equestrian dragon by talking to it, yes? That will not work on a Southern. Pony hooves will do little but glance from its scales, and magic," here, she turned to Twilight, "will do little to no good. You will have to use everything at your disposal to take but one down, and you will be going to a Hold, which normally contains near to a hundred."
She pointed at the other dragon. "The Southern dragons live under constant threats from other dragons and survival itself. Gems are far less plentiful in the South from ages of relentless mining, and territory relies on dominance. Rainbow Dash!"
"Uh, yeah?"
"You saw the dragon's hoard, yes?"
"Yeah." Rainbow scuffed a hoof on the ground. "And?"
"Rarity, you saw how much Spike grew when he gained his material wealth?"
"Yes, Princess."
Luna nodded briskly. "Southern dragons do not have hoards. Their size is purely from age and fighting. They pride themselves on their knowledge and skill, not on petty belongings. This also allows them to leave areas without needing to bring anything with them, as anything they need with them to stay strong not be in physical form."
"So how do you beat them?" Pinkie asked. "You make it sound like they're invincibubble!"
"Invincible, yes." Luna corrected. "Nearly. The only way you'll be able to defeat one is through sheer strength. Once challenged, they will not wait for you to recover, and chances are they will not let you live. You may be able to seek refuge as they are not themselves. The force seemingly overpowering them may be more relenting than they are."
"Do we know anything about this force?" Twilight questioned. "Do we have any idea of what we're up against?"
"One of the dragons, the one that sent us that letter, once vanquished both my sister and I during the battles prior to peacetime. Had we not mastered the stones of immortality," she brushed a hoof against her neck-piece, "we would not have lived to sign the treaty."
"We're so dead." Rainbow muttered.
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Twilight folded a third map, sliding it into her saddlebags alongside various blank scrolls, an inkwell, and a quill. She knew from experience that Rarity would pack any clothes they could possibly need, and Pinkie would cover food. She had a whole second set of bags to carry her armor when she wasn't wearing it - Carbon had repeated that it was enchanted to be lightweight, and to fold up for convenient storage - so that wasn't a problem.
As she puzzled through a stack of books, she was faintly aware of somepony shuffling their hooves outside of the door. "Hello?"
The hooves stopped moving, followed by a soft knock.
"You can come in. It's alright." She looked up at the door, letting her books hover in a pink-tinted cloud around her.
Steel edged around the door, looking up at Twilight's magic in mild awe. Twilight smiled at her guest, patting the ground with a hoof to invite her in.
Twilight set the books down in a ring around her, leaving space for the second pony. "I'm just trying to figure out what to bring."
The kirin frowned, scanning the titles around her. With a smile, she tapped her hoof on the cover of a nearby tome.
"'The Royal Equestrian Bestiary'?" Twilight read aloud, laughing. "Even I should have known that."
Steel nodded in agreement and continued onto the rest of the books as Twilight packed the bestiary away. By the time the large book had been shoved, Steel had sorted out a pile of much smaller books, each surprisingly suited to the task at hand.
"Dungeons and Dragons? Really?" Twilight hovered the last book above the bag, tossing a quizzical glance back at the kirin.
Steel shrugged.
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Carbon jolted to attention as Twilight trotted into the hall, Steel trailing behind. As she passed to join her friends, she caught a glimpse of the two hugging, Carbon obviously trying to convince Steel he'd be okay.
"Are you ready to go, girls?"
Applejack smiled, claws clicking on the tile floors. "Ah reckon as ready as we'll ever be."
"Ready to kick flank!" Rainbow cheered.
Fluttershy dipped her head. "I guess seeing some new sights would be nice."
"Do dragons like parties?"
"Oh, what colors go with fire and brimstone?" Rarity fretted, re-opening her bags. "I hope something I brought matches!"
Twilight smiled, turning around at the click of metal on tile. Princess Celestia smiled down at her faithful student.
"We're ready."
"I'm coming with you." Carbon interrupted, filling the space beside Twilight. Between when she had glanced at him and now, he had slipped on a full set of black armor, offset by the navy accents of the Night Guard. His eyes gleamed from behind a thin sheet of wire. "I won't let you go in this alone."
Princess Celestia laughed as Twilight glared Carbon away from her side. "Let him come. He can do no harm."
She paused, shuffling her wings.
"And remember, Twilight, you are never alone. Equestria will always stand at your back, and the sun and moon will guide your travels."
Twilight nodded, wings opening slightly in her excitement. "I know."
"Good luck, my faithful student."
And with that, she stepped back, allowing Twilight and her friends outside, to where a line of navy carriages awaited. The six Kirins harnessed to their carts beamed as Twilight looked towards them.
She was stopped as a navy Alicorn stepped into her path, letting her friends by but holding her with a firm teal gaze. "You're leaving so soon?"
"Yes." Twilight looked over the Night Princess's shoulders, trying to see her friends. "The sooner the better. No lives should be lost from our late arrival."
"You make a good point, Twilight Sparkle." Luna nodded, "but promise me one thing."
"What?"
"That you will come back alive."
Twilight's breath hitched in her throat as a sudden wave of emotion pulled her deeper into the Alicorn's eyes. Flashes of fire and white, yells thrown over crashing thunder, heat and chills, a sister's love torn away. Icicles pricked along her spine, making her fur stand up.
"I-I will." She choked out, turning her gaze away from Luna.
The Princess seemed not to notice. "The sky is a rather lonely thing to paint alone."
"Yes."
"I want you to use all the power you can, should you be in a fight. Whether it be your own," she pointed a hoof towards Twilight's neck-piece, the small socket where a Stone would fit currently vacant, "or that of another," she pointed towards the slim back of Nightmaren armor peeking out from her bag. "Remember you must survive."
"You... you want me to use Nightmare Moon's Stone?"
"I want you to live." Luna clarified.
Twilight glanced back at the pale blue armor, noticing Carbon's finish had turned her full suit the same shade. She'd have to have a talk with him about that. "Of course."
Luna simply nodded and breezed past her, a misplaced wingtip drawing a cold snake down her side. Twilight's breath felt like ice in her throat, fading quickly as the Moon herself vanished into the castle.
"Are you ready to go?" One of the Kirins asked, looking back over her shoulder. Her cart jolted as Carbon leaped on, curling up on the seat and inviting Twilight to join him.
She studied the mare as she climbed onto the chariot. Faces she didn't know, but wings and scales she did. Another five ponies willing to give up their soft furs to stand by her side. She sighed, letting the wind wash over her as she was pulled into the air. Carbon crouched beside her, shaking in fear and pressing up against her side. She let a wingtip drape over his shoulders, protecting him somewhat from the wind.
It was going to be a long time away from home.
She glanced towards her friends, each returning her gaze with a smile. Even Carbon halted his terrified shivers enough to give her a grin and a short, "thestral Princess?"
She took a deep breath, feeling her magic run through every vein and muscle, filling her with power.
It was going to be a long time away from home, that was for sure. They were fighting blind against a legendary enemy, and darkness seethed at the edge of the Southern horizon. Her bones ached with predictions of restless nights, and her skin itched with the promise of filth and dirt.
She wrapped her magic around her heart, the calm dun-dun pulling her back to the here and now. She scanned the eager faces of her friends for the second time, tracing the edges of scales and the cat-like pupils in their eyes.
It may have been a long time away from home, but she was not alone.
And as a distinct fire blossomed in her soul, she realized she never had been.
I've been waiting for this! Continue, for this is brilliant!
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I'll do my best to keep the quality up!
Well, here we go. Decent set up for the start of an unknown enemy causing some sort of conflict down south.
Even though she appeared to just be a support character, Steel. Is she mute or something? Didn't have a single spoken line, and you referenced scales in her mouth, or something like that. Idle curiosity.
Will have to see more before rendering any judgement, however you seem to be off to a good enough start.
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Yes, Steel is mute. (Only a support character for now, though hinthinthint)
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Yep, thanks!
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Yep, thanks. I know it's a reoccurring mistake I make, but I can try my best to fix it.
A) YAY!
B) You write too fast, make me look slow lol
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This was in no way fast.
2420558 Hahaha, lemme guess, you had multiple chapters done before publishing?
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Maybe.
So far so good and should this
be will or should will be after with?
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"As anything they need with them will not". I'll fix that now.
wish I could make stories that are this good, you always bring out some great stuff
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Thanks!
If you didn't know, this is on the Featured Stories list! Congrats!
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I noticed! *fangirls* Thanks!
2420173 I am now officially confused. I had believed that the official sequel was already being written by the author..... Is this some sort of fan made alternate universe sequel? Or is the story i read just of the same name ass the story you have based yours off? I... I have no idea anymore....
A very excellent start. Enjoying it immensely.
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Was there ever any sign that they were not allies? I just assumed, since Equestria isn't war-torn and in poverty, that they were all pretty much okay with each other. Canterlot's just really stuck up and doesn't like change, so nopony ever went there.
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...I am the author of the previous story? Keep in mind there are two stories by that name, my one and some other one.
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I hope you continue to enjoy it!
wat
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Hm?
2421134 yes
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Exactly as I had surmised... Thankyou for allieviating my doubts.
alot of different creature to remember lol thestrals kirins and whatever the other were called i love it its like a non nerdy version of a dungeons and dragons fiction
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Why did you say 'wat'?
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You're welcome.
sequel! woohoo! amazing!
Ah, sequel time!
*rubs hands together*
Wonderful!
Sweet. Just heard about the sequel. Haven't read it yet but I know it is going to be awsome.
Well I'm sold. Great start to what will be an epic story.
2421155 no reason
will spike be in this at all?
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He will be a supporting character for the end of the first arc and the greater half of the second.
A thestral is a batpony, which can have Pegasus parents. A Kirin is half-dragon. Although, techincally, a Kirin can be a thestral but a thestral can't be a Kirin.
Could you make the title of I wasn't prepared for this a link?
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Yes, one minute.
2420828 You're joking, right? You're really going to go with "we didn't see otherwise so it could be true"? Thus far, in canon, we've seen at least five distinct settlements: Canterlot, Ponyville, Cloudsdale, Manehattan, and Appleloosa. Not a single one of these places has any of the races that you depict walking around. Moreover, the nature of your description makes it clear that this extremely cosmopolitan version of Canterlot has existed long enough that it's quite normal where as you yourself directly admit, Canterlot's not the most welcoming place for all these allies. Finally, you depict changelings walking casually down the street chatting whereas at last call in canon, changelings were at minimum extremely unwelcome. So hang all that sleight-of-hand you just tried to hit me with and let's hear a good reason for this strange, sudden, unexplained deviation from canon. Preferably, in the story itself since as I said at first, such a significant and abrupt deviation requires explanation.
2422930 Well, the dragonification was at the end (albeit at the very, very, very rushed end) of the prequel to this story. It was not, however, explained in any way nor was an attempt made to justify why all five of her friends get randomly blended with dragons in a random fashion as a realization of their destinies. This would seem to imply that if not for the accident, all six Elements would have become alicorns to imitate Twilight, but this possibility is merely implied but never solidified. Again, the end of the prequel was incredibly rushed so these bits of important information have not yet been shared.
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Although, to be honest, 'we haven't been proved otherwise' is a logical solution for a childrens' show about technicolor horses, I will go into it in future chapters.
Why is Carbon scared, and why can't Steel go herself?
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Future chapters~
2423059 Well, of course "it hasn't been proven otherwise" is a perfectly good solution for a children's show about Technicolor horses. But when a good storyteller upgrades the medium from "children's show" to "multiple-chapter story with adult themes", a little more sophistication is required. I sincerely doubt that you'd depict Applejack being so heartbroken that she overworks herself and gets crippled for life in a cartoon for young girls, but it's a perfectly appropriate thing to have happen in your story.
Well apart from some readers that lack the ability from be able distinguish between canon and alternate universe, I've enjoyed your story so far. Keep it up!~
It is still rather difficult to tell who is what species, but I now understand that the 'mane' six have always been as such, but I am still unsure of how to imagine Celestia. Having characters familiar to someone be an entirely new species, a great deal of description is involved, I think You could have that in the future, a very good story beyond that and a very interesting concept.
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Ah, must have overlooked that
This is just all too rushed. You're deviating a long way from canon, and need to do the world-building to support it. All the thestral stuff, in particular, is woefully under-supported for how important it apparently is to your plans.
Also of concern is that so far, you're making very little use of the other Elements. While you've got plot justification for them being there, you're not backing it up with working them into what's going on - Rainbow got the bulk of what scraps of dialogue were going around, and she was basically just yes'ing and no'ing to the armorers.
*see's the story about half dragons, no sign of spike in sight*...really?
its not a bad story but im just..wheres spike?
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It's a sequel, link in the description.
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Mentioned in other comments, mentioned in prequel, the story isn't over and I can still change character tags once they're relevant.
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I'll be sure to build on that, thank you.
2425057 As long as you can pull off an interesting and engaging story where nothing is working against the plans said character do, go ahead.
Personally I don't think that would work as a story since the emotional input that you 'want' them to overcome their problems wouldn't exist. Without hindrances and obstacles to encourage them over it would be like sliding down a slide; over before you know it.