Air
The sky was clear of all but a few clouds, bright and crackling with the energy about to be released by a Pegasus who had abused Rare Candy’s. This was not a battle she would could win under normal conditions, however she was fortunate enough to be needed. If not for the fact crashing into the ground from this height would probably seriously injure her, if not kill, she would already be defeated.. Red and Blue all quickly deduced this in a matter of seconds, and their eyes met, Blue doing the talking.
“Ok, so weak attacks only; we want to try and weaken it without killing it. We don’t have time to get someone with false swipe so I will say this once. Are you absolutely sure a fall would kill her?” Red didn’t bother nodding; Blue knew his answer just by looking at him. Blue brushed his hair back and groaned once.
“You owe me for this Red, one battle for old time’s sake. One day I will win, but for now let’s focus on our impatient guest.” Their eyes turned upward, their Pokémon rising in a gradual circle toward her. Scootaloo was crackling with energy, the attack was imminent.
“We’ll only have one shot at this; let’s hope luck is on our side.” With the casual chat finished, the two clutched tighter on their Pokémon. Charizard roared, Pidgeot screed, and they fell into perfect sync. The two Pokémon rose, Scootaloo finished charging, Red’s hand clenched tighter around his Pokémon, Blue’s eyes narrowed, and everything stilled. Two Pokémon waited on the ground, not having Pokéballs in this world yet. Three, Red reiterated; Lyra was one too.
“DIE YOU FURLESS FREAKS OF NATURE!” The entire sky rattled under Scootaloo’s cry, and she began to dive. The battle began.
Scootaloo dived for Red, but Red was expecting this and Charizard merely tilted to the left, the pony flying harmlessly by. Red and Blue now had the upper hand, and both began diving toward Scootaloo as she skidded to a halt. Her wings flared, and a single flap took her out of their reach, but they quickly curved upward and turned their dive into an ascent.
Blue was first, throwing a Pokéball in front of him, releasing the Pokémon on his chest and clutching it as soon as it materialised. It was small and brown and had large bunny-like ears, and it was called Eevee. Eevee was quick to take scope of the situation, and curled her tail around Blue’s neck tightly. Blue waited until he was sure she wouldn’t fall, before letting go and holding on once more. Eevee was now able to watch his back.
Red was ahead of him, keeping Scootaloo from turning around and attacking them without exposing herself to attack. Blue whistled, and Red began to prepare to swap places, Scootaloo saw her chance. Flaring her wings, she spun in place and was now facing Charizard. Opening her mouth she cried loudly, and flames erupted from her mouth. Charizard flared his wings in return, halting his rise and met her challenge with hotter flames.
Blue was quick to retaliate, beginning a drill peck from the side. Scootaloo broke off, rising up and out of the flames and the attack. Blue rode through the flames, but Charizard had already weakened them so he flew through harmlessly. Scootaloo tried to launch an attack at the now exposed Blue but Red easily intercepted her, throwing the pegasus a tailspin.
Blue quickly began flying upward to gain height, Red coming around to flank from the side, his hand reaching for a Pokéball. Scootaloo roared in fury, and attacked Charizard with a gust of wind, throwing the Pokémon off aim and causing him to merely bump into her sideways. She growled in response, and kicked him away, hard. Missing hitting the dragon, her foot instead connected with Red.
Red grunted, losing his grip. His Pokéball slipped and fell first, before he too followed. Charizard would have followed immediately, but Scootaloo wasn’t letting him save the human, and began to assault the dragon on all sides. Charizard was not amused, and would have likely destroyed Scootaloo had Blue not dive bombed the Pegasus. Blue kept Scootaloo busy, Charizard roared, flipping into a dive and making a beeline for Red.
Red wasn’t worried about himself; he was worried if he would catch the Pokéball in time. Five, his hand inched closer to it. Four, his fingers brushed it, sending it a back out of reach. Three, he brought his hand back so it wouldn’t touch when it just got in reach. Two, he reached out once more, hand grasping the Pokéball with a protective strength. One, Red tilted his body straight down, making him fall faster but also ensuring he would be in the right position.
Charizard swooped under him, he grabbed on, and hugged his Pokémon as Charizard jerked them into a sharp arc, bringing them back up to the battle but causing Charizard some serious wing ache. Red knew Charizard was fine for the moment; he brought the Pokéball around and gently released his Pikachu on his chest. Mimicking Blue’s Eevee, Pikachu was ready. Red brought out a burn heal, spraying the bottle lightly on the wings, and Charizard was once again ready for battle.
Blue dived past them, and Charizard roared, diving after the form pursuing him. Charizard crested just above the houses, so close he could almost open his mouth and bite down on Scootaloo’s tail. However Charizard was more than likely going to try fire-breath, or he would if he didn’t have his trainer with him.
Blue’s Pidgeot darted left, and then feigned right before turning and darting around Scootaloo as she tried to stay tailing. Blue fell in with Red, and glanced to Pikachu. They were ready. In hindsight they should have had their Pokémon out and ready, but old habits of only having one out die hard.
Scootaloo saw they had a plan, and rose into the air. Flying rapidly towards the sun, faster than earlier, Blue and Red followed, never losing pace. Every time she tried to gain a speed advantage they were one step faster.
“How fast can you miserable monsters be?” Scootaloo shouted over the wind.
“I am ultimate!!” Blue smirked, and Suddenly Scootaloo was surrounded.
“We’re level 90-100; do you really think a level 40-60 could hope to defeat us? Oh please, don’t make me laugh.” Blue was so confident, it enraged her. She kicked toward him but the Eevee locked eyes with her. Suddenly she had trouble moving, managing to force her wings to move so she could stay aloft but no more. She turned, maybe she could escape under and-
Red just looked at her, and she knew there was no chance of escape there. No she would not allow them to trap her, she was SCOOTALORD! This cannot be this-
“Face it ‘Scootalord,’ this battle was over before it began.” Blue’s attitude, Red’s lack of it, she couldn’t take this insult. She was so angry she just wanted to-
Suddenly she began glowing, and they vanished from her sight, she cried out in blind fury, fire erupting from her every pore. She puffed, she felt considerably weaker, but there was no way they could have avoided that…
Red’s Charizard stood in front of Pidgeot, sucking in the flames greedily to feed his own. Scootaloo blinked, she was outclassed but she would not admit it! If she continued fighting they would never-
“How about I make you a little bet ‘Scootalord.’” Scootaloo’s eyes narrowed at Blue, who was smirking so confidently. She wanted to kill the human, rip off his smirk, and stick it in a trophy room. Blue saw she wasn’t going to answer, and his grin grew.
“See this little guy that Red here is holding? He’s level 5; Red was training him for some reason. I bet one attack from him is all it takes to kill you.” Scootaloo laughed, a level 5, defeat her? They had said she was at least a 40.
“What do I get out of it?” Blue smirk grew, and he motioned to his chest.
“Us,” Scootaloo’s eyes narrowed, suspicious. But the deal was too good to pass up; she smirked and spread her arms wide, wings spreading to produce a huge target.
“Hit me with your best shot then, pathetic humans.” Pikachu bumbled up and stood on Charizard’s head. It was really a pathetic creature, dumb and stupid enough to oppose her. It began to spark with electricity, and that’s when Scootaloo began to doubt. The Sparks grew, and suddenly the Pokémon arced the lighting across the sky.
“How pathetic, giving up your lives for an attack that didn’t even get aimed at me.” Scootaloo began to laugh loudly, thunder crackling behind her, wait, thunder?
The sky as she gazed upward was suddenly filled with clouds, and very angry clouds. Lightning was only a minor hazard to Pegasi, but it had never caused her major harm before.
“Oh Red, what’s that? This Pikachu isn’t level 5?” Scootaloo turned on them, and Blue chuckled sheepishly.
“My mistake ‘Scootalord,’ its 50 not 5, I did always forget those zeroes in kindergarten.” Suddenly the dread in her slammed through her skull, and she glanced to the sky. She had only enough time to widen her eyes before-
CRACK
Red watched the Thunder attack his Pikachu had sent hit Scootaloo. Her whole body jerked still, and she fainted. She began to fall out of the sky. Blue was first, immediately throwing his first ball, ceasing the fall before continuing. It shook once, and released her. Red tried next, both matching the halting descent. Again the ball released. Pulling out the last ball, Red threw it and watched.
Once
Twice
Thrice
Cli-TSSSSSS
The body flew out, and continue descending toward the ground. Blue swore, and he glanced to Red. They exchanged glances, a battle waging between them. As usual, Red won.
“Ok fine, I’ll use mine!” Blue pulled out a legendary ball with a 100% catch rate. Normally used for Legendaries, it could be used on anything, and anyone. Rumours said that once a human had been caught with this. Blue tossed it, and his aim was true. With just a few meters to spare Red caught the ball and pulled out of their rapid descent. Landing, both Pokémon skidded to a stop before letting their owners off. Standing on the ground, the two thanked their Pokémon before returning them to their balls.
Turning around, Blue never expected to see a crowd. He prepared a scowl, but stopped when they were looking not at him, but at the ball Red was holding. Red turned to him, and placed the Pokéball in his hand before walking away from the crowd.
Blue never expected them to begin cheering for him.
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No! What a waste of a MasterBall...
you said legendary ball I'm not sure if that was on purpose or if my Pokemon knowledge is inadequit in the poke ball department
2443929
What about it?
at most id just use a great ball, mabey an ultra
2443929 I think he meant "legendary ball" in the way that the ball itself was legendary. As in adjective.
2444060
She
2443791 You need at least a Great Ball or Ultra Ball
...I do not believe I would have used such a powerful tool on someone as ungrateful as Scootaloo, even with the power going to her head. Then again, I am an angry individual in that aspect.
2444156
So you're expecting scoot to go
"Hey could you please catch me against my will to put in a ball and likely use me for battling?"
2444176
No. I don't know what to expect from Scootaloo after that power trip. All I know is that I would not have been so forgiving as I would have let her fall after the failed attempt rather than use a Master Ball. I am feeling rather vengeful at the moment though, so it is likely that my opinion will change later.
2444205
You misunderstand me.
I mean, you expect scootaloo to be grateful to be shoved in a master ball?
But I get what ya mean, so enjoy I guess.
Me: "Hmmm... Should I applaud that the crisis is over?
Or should I headdesk because Blue used a Masterball?"
Other people: "Why not both?"
OKAY
Darn, I was hoping Red caught Scootalord...
Why not use it on the ever-rare Woona?
haha nice A/N
Man... I'd use a Masterball to catch a chicken any day.
Lvl 40 with no EVs, Do you even train Scoots?
2445041
She has plenty of speed EV's from her time as a cmc.
2445042 She might have been better off not evolving and just holding an eviolite.
2445072
Evolite's can't be found in Equestria.
The Masterball.......You Were The CHOSEN ONE!
Now We Have To Get The Hax Into The Story......Wait Is That Missingno?
10100010101110101001100
A-Win-awee A-Win-awee A-Win-awee
Looks like Scootaloo has a new idol~!
Red use your master ball on Celestia!
You have, dare I say it, 'captured' my heart by using Eevee. Thank you
2444115 Ooooooh, sorry.
Well, that was awesome. As everyone else, I must gripe about masterball usage, Blue is probably pissed.
Indeed, I wanna see him catch a Celestia. Or maybe some Lunas.
SCRATCH THAT, PINKIES ALL THE WAY. She'd probably have a magicarp type evolution though.
What I don't get is why these guys never seem so have any Ultra Balls.
Or at least Great Balls.
2446055
Yeah that's a great idea, catch the deities that move the sun and moon, begin the apocalypse. Or at least eternal day/night.
4 Things:
1. Twi Sparkles is not worthy of the Master Ball. In fact, she just barely qualifies for a great ball.
Shouldn't that say 'letting'.
3. I hope your damn serious about Red catching Celestia. That would be a phenomenal plot twist of epic proportions.
4. Blue is not worthy of Scootalord. Just sayin'.
and he grin grew
1. His.
2449227
Thanks ^_^
who caught scootaloo?
2478913 Blue
2516146 oh ok
red does not talk but maybe thats before he went to mt.silver and lost his voice
2563831 he could never talk
2445042 exept for the fact that rare candies dont add the evs to the stats -_-
2565135
I don't use rare candies its just plain cheating I only train my pokemon
2448027 lol Just yes haha but I'm curious on Chrysalis tho she controls hundreds of changelings and Discord especially discord :D
Also READ this if you want this story to have a deep enough plot to last to the 100k's
Anyways my obvious guess here is you are working with the Shows CURRENT elements let me remind you that Equestria CAN be bigger
And be darker so I'm gonna add a few tips
Ponyville/Canterlot is just pretty peaceful because The princesses watch over it
Again It's safe to say Equestria is bigger so you can add many other continents and red and blue can go on all sort of Adventures also remind you that Everfree is technically HUGE because the show never really show any Actual ending of the forest and it just keeps getting deeper
If you want some sort of base look at many Other fan fics like Mordane stronghoof or the chess game of the gods fics where they go all on sorts of adventures across the lands. Do you get what I'm trying to say here?
Place ideas; Everfree forest which is safe to say be Enormus.
The frozen wasteland oh come on it's like antartica there could be many caves that leads to secrets or frozen artifacts
Jungles ( daring do )
Small villages make the townspeople like Human medieval age attitude but not to harsh scattered all around the world.
Honestly this is just a little idea that can make your story reach 100k word and oh it's just an ounce of the idea iv come up with
Message me if you want to know my full on idea that can make you reach 500k easily I guarantee you will love it although I can't say it unless you want me to help you with each chapter
If you do agree I can give you ideas for the every chapters I just have so much ideas! That this will not even resemble much Pokemon cross overs no it's not a bad idea your story will be unique as it will not follow pokemons but still have the whole Pokemon in poke balls and capturing and stuff In Pokemon there are the protagonist that travels around the world becoming stronger and go on all adventures BINGO did you have a lightbulb appear above your head? Yes? Well that's... Not normal..
Anyway Yes lyra ( maybe blue too or they can go their separate ways and maybe adding future events in which blue meets red in certain situations.. ) and red goes on adventuring and meeting other ponies or other mythical creatures oh don't you bullshiting me XD It's safe to say there are other things there seriously -_-
I mean (judging from what I read) that you dont really have much of a plot do you? ( no offense D: ) Red comes in have some fun in ponyville then either some villain sees red powerfull gadgets and stuff that's from either Red's world or Equestria and wants to take over.
Also Twilight/lyra lacks reaction to seeing advance technology -_-
Anyway thats too overused plot on the whole one big villain thing
if you still don't get it just message me if you want me to help you on the plots and TRUST me I can Add SO MUCH DAMN content Equestria will be bigger and more complex heck this story can even crossover with other characters and I also have many good ideas to back it up so it won't suddenly be random bits added
No your story does not need awsome grammar if it can be Read and has an awsome plot it's good
So what do you say ? Also if any one else wants my idea of making Equestria a more Complex and huge place. Message me but come up with a character fit for adventuring ohh I don't know some Human with Tech engineering but quiet weak physically and not good in combat but smart enough to know how to win ugh there's a difference
GOD DAMMNIT too much IDEAS! I
2565906
Listen, I get that you have ideas and want to get them out, but I can't put them in this story.
I don't write a story to reach a certain wordcount, I write so that I can sleep.
Ideas running around my head.
They ask to burst, and I have to get them out before they fade into obscurity.
This is not that kind of adventure story. It's a story with random events happening, and then Red going home. Red isn't going to leave ponyville. Why would he leave? He's waiting for Oak to finish the device.
You obviously have an idea, and you are free to write it. But this is my story, and even if the plot if flawed, the endings turn out crap, and I manage to make plot holes it is still my story. I appreciate the advice, but you can't tell me how to write my story, that's my job.
2447460 Well capturing the master of time itself didn't hurt anyone.
2642162
Hmm. Wasn't being serious.
After all the unicorn race moved them before Hotflank and Moonbutt were around.
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2715150
What is?
I find that this is a fun story. I do hope to find more chapters to the story soon . Keep up the good work.
Dragonfox
Fuck Celestias and Twilight Sparkles Luna's are where its at.
3290020 Screw both! Go Chrysalis!
2444151 Nest ball, huehuehue
I completely agree with the authors notes. 'Scootalord' can fall for all I care