• Member Since 18th Jan, 2012
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Midori_Kuroba


I'm an aspiring writer, with far too many ideas for my own good. I write pony fictions for fun, and if others enjoy them, then that's all I could ask for.

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((Fan made sequel to "My Little Dashie))
After secluding herself for nearly a week, Rainbow Dash receives an urgent call from Princess Celestia. When she arrives, she finds out an army of death is out to erase her human father from existence, and only she can find him in time to stop this. By crossing through the Secret Door's between dimensions, and with the help of an odd green wolf, can Rainbow Dash find and save her father before Death can, or will she die saving his life?

I wrote this story out of respect for the original, desiring to give it a happier ending whether people like it or not. I added my oc Xam the wolf, because his dimensional madness was the only way to make the story play out the way I had planned. Surprised from the feedback I got, I wrote an epilogue to give all my readers some closure. Be sure to enjoy, and yes, the story is over. ^_^

Cover art by Kitsong on deviantart: http://kitsong.deviantart.com/art/Comission-Curve-room-282792777

Comic with Honey Dew from Epilogue: http://pashapup.deviantart.com/art/After-the-Rain-Goes-Part-1-260752610?q=gallery%3Amlp-fim%2F29390499&qo=129

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 13 )

wait mom?:rainbowhuh: is there going to be a part 2 or somthing cause i wanna know

...Mom? :rainbowderp: anyways, great story! :pinkiehappy: i almost cried tears of joy :pinkiesad2: ...but i didnt! :yay: this story made me feel a lot better though. so thank you :twilightsmile:

Epic just epic I admire your work

Interesting. Alot happened... wow.:applejackunsure:

Interesting, I'll track this.

This just screams sequel... sorry but, it's kinda loud. *Picks his ears.* Man up you pansy. Though that Mom bit at the end has sparked my interests in what that would mean as well. What a twist! Cork it Shyamalan no one asked you.

So, my little dashie, but with a furry?

Ok.

Odd, I don't remember writing a description for a furry, but if you don't like it Commander then feel free not to read it. :ajbemused:

As for the rest of you, yes, I intend on writing a little more to this story. Inspiration taken not only from the odd picture drawn for my cover art (not what I asked for but I went with it) as well as another source, hence Rainbow's mother. Anymore than that, and you'll just have to wait for my next piece. :rainbowwild:

everything was good in the world… Well, everything except spinach.
I completely agree with the above statement.

NO! :flutterrage: NOT SPINACH! :pinkiesick: yuck... :rainbowlaugh: anyways, thought this wrapped things up nicely. well done, good sir. :yay:

"Her cutie mark was an X-box 360 controller"

I laughed so hard at that part :rainbowlaugh:

There's only one thing wrong with this story.

They erased Rainbow's memory of her dad before she left.

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