When Derpy Hooves dose a drastic crime against the muffin peoples, she turns herself in. It is now up to the investigator, Axle John, to either prove her innocent or guilty. when a certain pony gets to attached to his criminal, what is in store for him, and his new roommate?
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-My editing is visible
-Seems decent
- The story is good
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2301423 i like it very much. and your editing is visibale. so is vehemence's. lolz.
Talking to muffins....I can't see this ending well
2302508 it is rainbow dash doing. she is not high it is a microphone
DERPY!!!! I love the way you had her even more obsessed with muffins than usual. Derpy x Muffin ships should be a tag. The grammar could use some work, but other than that, it's quite skillful.
2362417 thier is still some grammer!!!! what the fuck!!! i went through this for grammer
and derpy Xmuffin is a ship. just not this ship. it is Derpy Axle Flame John
I thought you were going to restart this...