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Friggin Jake


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Comments ( 56 )

Brilliant. I would change nothing.

Yessss. Let the AppleDash flow in you.

Also, I totally demand AJ's response. :rainbowkiss:

This is awesome. Great job! I second Tcherno, I'd love to see AJ's response. :ajsmug:

And I might even check out NintendoGal55's piece. . . or, I'll try. :applejackunsure: But you know that's a big deal!

This made me quite happy. I cannot stop smiling. I would also recommend writing Applejack's response. And if you won't, I will! Bwahaha! Ha.


No place for wimps.

2297670 I'm writing it, don't worry :raritywink:

D'awww! Yeah, I'd love to see AJ's reply, but this is good as a stand-alone too. It's very Rainbow-ish, eeyep. :rainbowwild:

God damn... it's like you just took the pure, concentrated essence of Rainbow Dash and chalked it up onto my computer screen.

Damn you, it just sounds exactly like she wrote it!

I wish I could do that...

2299282 Thank you so much :twilightsmile:

And hey, sorry about all that unpleasantness I caused back on the socializing forum (my bad)

dude, are you rainbow in disguise or something!? you wanna know what I hate? the fact that it cuts off and makes me wanna know how everything turned out. oh wait, i love that.

I love George Harrison! I'll read this immediately.

Sometimes you need little things like this to just help you get through the day. You did a pretty good job of getting RD's character right, and I'm hoping for even more from this. You've created a good thing here.

I just had to read this again. I was on your blog and it was calling to me. I'm glad I did, because I think I missed this line the first time:

You know, things where I don’t actually need to think and junk (the novel is so good, it writes itself, baby).

. . . And I nearly spit out my coffee. :rainbowlaugh:

Amazing.

2309856 I know me kissing your ass is getting old, but...

BOOKPLAYER CALLED ONE OF MY LINES AMAZING!!!!!!!! (fangirl squeal)

this was really nice.
Stayed in Character for rainbow all the way through some really funny lines.
i liked it

I hope you don't mind, but I have put together a little reading of this on YouTube.

Hehe! I gotta say, this was quite a treat. And there was me thinking that Dash's love was already requited. I very much how everything she wrote played together, both in her character, and the sheer bravery it took for her to send her (ahem) letter to Applejack. Pony of action, indeed. Well done!

How did I not know of this fic before?
That mistake is now rectified.

I demand a sequel!!!:raritycry:

Sequel! Sequel! Sequel! :pinkiehappy: ...please :scootangel: :yay:

I can see that a lot of people are demanding AJ's response, so... I really shouldn't have to. This however, was amazing. I wish I could write like that.

2639651 How soooooooon is soooooooon?

2639748 As soooon as I finish this other one shot and write a few more chapters of RariDash Project

2639770 Can I get an estimate as to how long cause that could be anywhere from a day to several years depending on... well everything, and I'm very impatient. (no pressure) (LOTS OF PRESSURE)

amazing job!! keep up the great work! :yay::yay::yay:

I....WANT MOAR!!! :applejackconfused:

second Best fanfic I have ever read:yay::twilightsmile::ajsmug::rainbowkiss::raritystarry::pinkiehappy::twistnerd::twilightblush::rainbowlaugh::scootangel::raritywink::derpytongue2:

Length should never be taken as a sign of whether a fic is good or not. I've read some long piece that I couldn't stand and short pieces like ths that resonate with me. This is beautiful, it feels perfectly tuned to Dash and captures her perfectly. I love how you left it open, it's truly stunning.

George Harrison eat your heart out.

I could have done without so much cursing, but I can see it being in Rainbow Dash's vocabulary. That's more of a personal preference of mine than any kind of genuine critique I can offer. The whole thing is written a lot like a letter would read, especially one written by everypony's favorite rainbow-maned pegasus. I don't have a whole lot to say about it really, other than it was a nice enjoyable read. Everything felt natural and in-place.

My only curiosity is whether or not Rainbow had the nerve to put it in the mailbox... or if she left it on Applejack's pillow with the disemboweled remains of a rabbit next to it in the hopes that it'd take away some of the girlishness.

3426279 But it's gonna take time.

3426973 It's gonna take plenty of moneh.

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To do it right, anyway...

... mmm-HM! :trixieshiftright:

SHL

Epic, brilliant, awesome... I think we NEED a sequel with Applejack's answer. Pleaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaase!!!!!! :fluttershysad:

...This is a Rainbow Dash x Mane Six shipfic written from the perspective of Rainbow Dash that reads like it's from the perspective of Rainbow Dash and not a really lame Dash stand-in, and makes its case for infatuation quickly and elegantly.

Instantly favorited. Feel proud of yourself. I would wall o'text this but the story's too short to really devote disproportionate words to, and that's to its benefit because it's this tightly-focused little nugget of all the yes in the world.

Loved it.

Been looking for this for some time.

I heard scribbler's reading of it and really enjoyed this Fic, though felt a bit confused. It was my own fault, I'd just listened to her readings of treating her right and til death do us part, so it took a few seconds for my brain to wrap itself around this Fic.:applejackconfused:

Really enjoyed it though. You did good:twilightsmile:

D'AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :heart::heart::heart:

this is all I have to say: SEQUEL!!! NOW! STAT. ASAP. GO. SHOO. WRITE.

ok I lied. I have to say this, too. I love this so dang much its ridiculous. RI. DI. CUL. OUS. I swear, this describes my thoughts EXACTLY. and its freaky.
I hate you for writing this. But i'm also thanking you for writing this. :trollestia:

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Actually, at this point, probably never :twilightsheepish:

I HATE HOW MUCH IM IN LOVE WITH THIS OR THAT IT IS THE BEST STORY IN THE FREAKING WORLD! DAMMIT! I LOVE YOU! :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: P.S: pleaseee i want to see what Aj would say pleaseeeeee

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I appreciate your enthusiasm, but alas, the story ended where it needed to end :)

but.......but........but,.....but.......... STILL GREAT JOB ^^

Was kinda disinterested at first, but boy did that pick up by the end!

This is just... just... I have no words. And I feel like crying.

I would jump for joy if you let me do a sequel! Please?????? :twilightsheepish:

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