“Oh no oh no oh no, this can’t be happening!” Twilight flew all over the sky, desperately trying to find Rainbow Dash. “What happened to her? She was flying and then just vanished! That can’t be!” She scanned the area where Rainbow had disappeared, for about the twelfth time, when she suddenly got a horrible theory. “Uh oh,” she looked down “what if she went too fast and crashed?” She flew down to the ground and started looking around, hoping she wouldn’t find a crushed Rainbow Dash. About thirty minutes of searching later Twilight was convinced that Rainbow did not in fact crash, but she was still left wondering what happened. Looking back to town, she frowned “I hope Rainbow’s okay. Hopefully, my friends can come up with something.”
Twilight flew back to Ponyville and headed to Sugarcube Corner. She reached up a hoof to knock on the door, but before she could the door swung open and she was pulled inside by a pair of bubblegum-pink hooves. “Twilight, it’s terrible!” Pinkie cried as she hugged Twilight tightly.
Struggling to escape Pinkie’s vice grip, Twilight sputtered “H-how did you know about Rainbow Dash?”
Pinkie instantly released Twilight, causing the Alicorn to drop to the floor with a thud. “Know what about Rainbow Dash?”
Twilight took a moment to catch her breath “Wait, if you’re not upset about Rainbow Dash, what are you upset about?”
Pinkie frowned “I broke the Cakes’ new blender when I tried to make a jawbreaker smoothie.” She reached behind the counter and held up a blender that looked like it had been beaten with a hammer. She embraced the blender and cried “It was so young! It never even got the chance to make its first milk shake!”
Twilight raised an eyebrow “Um, Pinkie, I’m really sorry about your blender, but there’s an emergency. Rainbow Dash vanished into thin air this morning and I have no idea why! I used a spell to make her fly faster, but when she was using it she just vanished!”
Pinkie blinked, paused for a moment in contemplation, and suddenly gasped “I knew it!”
Twilight’s mouth dropped “Y-you did?!? But how?!?”
“It was my Pinkie sense, silly,” Pinkie giggled, “when my ears flop, my tail twitches, my left hind hoof skips and I hiccup, it means somepony just got sent to another dimension.”
Twilight stared at her for a moment “And, how exactly did you discover that particular combo?”
Pinkie put a hoof to her chin and thought. “Hmm, when did I learn it?”
“My turn!” Kaiba said as he drew his next card. “Now Blue Eyes Ultimate Dragon, finish off that annoying pony!” The three-headed dragon reared up, all three of its mouths gathering energy, aiming at Pinkie Pie.
As the energy blasts were fired at Pinkie, she pointed to a face-down card “Nice try, but I play Magic Cylinder! This cancels your attack and hits you with damage equal to your monster’s attack power.”
“What?!?” Kaiba gasped. A pair of golden cylinders appeared next to Pinkie. The beams flew into one of the cylinders, and moments later they shot out of the other one, aiming straight for Kaiba. “NOOO!” he yelled as the blasts struck him.
“Hmm,” Pinkie shrugged, “Sorry, I can‘t remember.”
Twilight sighed “Okay then, let’s just focus on the problem at hoof.”
“Okie dokie lokie,” Pinkie said, holding up the broken blender, “to the appliance store!”
“I mean the problem with Rainbow Dash” Twilight deadpanned.
“Oh,” Pinkie said, putting the blender back down, “to the library!”
“Not quite,” Twilight pointed out, “you head to the library, I’ll go get the others.”
“I’m on it” Pinkie saluted, before hopping out the door and bouncing towards the library.
“Well, I guess next up is Rarity” Twilight muttered to herself. She trotted out the door and headed for Carousel Boutique. “Rarity?” she knocked on the door, “are you home?”
“Coming,” Rarity responded from the other side of the door. A few moments later, the door opened and Rarity smiled at the sight of her friend. “Twilight,” she greeted, “come in darling, I was just about to make some tea.”
“Sorry Rarity” Twilight shook her head, “but there’s an emergency. Rainbow Dash vanished, so I need you and the others to go to the library so we can figure out what happened and how to get her back.”
Rarity gasped “Oh my, that’s terrible. Don’t worry, I’ll be at the library in no time.” With that, she started to trot to the library.
“Well,” Twilight said, “at least that didn’t take as long as Pinkie. Next up is Fluttershy.” About thirty minutes later, Twilight finished delivering the message to Fluttershy, and she and Applejack were now trotting to the library together.
“Now what exactly do ya’ mean Rainbow vanished?” Applejack asked, “Ya mean she skipped town or somethin’?”
Twilight shook her head “Don’t worry, I’ll tell you all about it when we get to the library.” They arrived at the library and entered, where Pinkie, Rarity, and Fluttershy were waiting for them. “Okay girls,” Twilight started “take your seats and I’ll explain everything.”
“Okie dokie lokie” Pinkie giggled as she pulled a bean-bag chair out of her mane and set it on the ground next to herself. The others chose not to ask questions and opted instead to just sit down and listen to Twilight’s explanation.
Twilight stood in the middle of the room and began her summary of the morning’s events. The others listened intently, with expressions of confusion at times and fear at others. “…and when I was finally able to see again, she was gone.” Twilight finished, looking around at all her friends.
Applejack was the first to speak up “Wait, so what you’re saying is she just vanished into thin air. How did that happen? Did’ja mix up a teleporting spell in with the speed spell or somethin'?”
“I don’t know, Applejack” Twilight shook her head, “I don’t know how it happened. That’s why I gathered all of you here, so we can try to figure out what happened to Rainbow Dash and start working out a way to bring her home.”
Rarity was the next to speak up “So, if I’m understanding this, you want us to search through all of the books in the library so we can find a spell that can find Rainbow Dash?”
“Almost,” Twilight responded, “we can look for either that or a spell that has the same effect as what happened to her.”
“But, wouldn’t that be dangerous?” Fluttershy squeaked, “If the spell made Rainbow Dash vanish, shouldn’t we avoid it?”
“No Fluttershy,” Twilight shook her head, “if we can find a spell that has the same effect as the one I used, we can figure out a way to reverse it. Now, we’ve got a lot of reading ahead of us and I don’t know how much time we have. Let’s get to work, ladies. Let‘s do it for Rainbow Dash!”
The others all nodded and gave a mutual cheer of “For Rainbow Dash!” before they spread out to look at the different sections of the library.
“Spike,” Twilight called upstairs, “send a letter to Celestia and tell her what happened. Even if our library doesn’t have the information we need, the royal archives in Canterlot will.”
Spike saluted and responded “You can count on me Twilight,” before running to write the letter.
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Hours of reading later, there were five large piles of books in the room, five exhausted ponies lying next to the books, and zero books left on the shelves. “Well girls,” Twilight sighed, “we checked everywhere, and still nothing.”
“Ah guess that means we need to head fer Canterlot and check those archives” Applejack replied.
“I guess so” Twilight responded, “but the last train for Canterlot for today already left. We’ll have to wait and go there tomorrow morning.”
“Well, look at the bright side,” Rarity spoke up “that means we’ll have plenty of time to get our beauty sleep and pack for the trip.”
“Rarity,” Twilight started “this isn’t vacation, it’s a rescue mission.”
Rarity stood up “Well, so was our mission to the Crystal Empire, but we were given plenty of time to pack for that mission.”
“I guess you have a point,” Twilight said as she rubbed her chin with a hoof. “Okay girls, let’s all head home for the night and meet back here in the morning. We’ll catch the first train to Canterlot.”
Applejack yawned “that works fer me. Ah’m beat after all that readin’. G’night y’all. See ya in the mornin’.” She trotted out the door, followed by Pinkie, Rarity, and Fluttershy.
After she closed the door, Twilight frowned and slowly made her way to the stairs. Spike noticed her sad expression and spoke up “Aw, don’t worry Twilight. I’m sure Rainbow’s gonna be fine.”
Twilight sighed “It’s not just that I’m worried about. I’m also worried that this was all my fault. It might have been my spell that made her disappear. If it turns out it was my fault, and something really bad does happen to Rainbow Dash, I don’t know how I’ll live with myself.”
Spike placed a hand on her shoulder “Come on, Twilight, you need to cheer up if you want to find the spell in the archive tomorrow. You can’t search the archives if you’re too busy sulking.”
Twilight tried to smile, but couldn’t, “I’m sorry, Spike. I’ll try to keep my spirits up when we get to Canterlot, but I don’t know how.” She slowly climbed up into her bed and pulled the blanket over herself, sadly looking up at the same spot she had looked that morning, saddened by the fact that Rainbow Dash wasn’t there anymore because of her.
The Yugioh bit was pretty funny. MOAR!
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Thanks. I had to restrain myself from making it too long, since it was there as a gag.
Don't worry, at the rate I'm going I should be able to keep coming out with at least one chapter every day (except this Sunday; I'm going to SeaWorld this Sunday).
Live near SD? 2295470
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Riverside. I'm currently going to UCR, and I'm one of few people I know on campus who actually walk to school.
Closer to Disneyland then, nice. 2295536
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Yeah, but since Disneyland is so expensive I haven't been there since Grad Night. I'm gonna be near there in May when I go to Equestria LA, since it's at a convention center literally directly across the street from Disneyland.
Good luck with that, I have been to that center and it is insanely small, then again I'm spoiled from San Diego Comic Con. And yes Mr. Mouse has been charging far too much for his park 2295558
2295479 Really you too. If this other dude favs this too......
*falls over dead*
*gets up and turns into psyco pony*
HELL YEAH THIS'LL BE GOOD!!!!!
I swear it just happens lol, or maybe I have good sense of reading. 2295566
2295572 Well this is on my list of Stuff to Read Later. Have to read it at the right time.
You heard the lady. SHE DEMANDS MORE!!!!
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I, myself, haven't been to Disney land since I was a kid. It's all the way across the country from me. But I prefer Disney World, anyway. it even has pretty reasonable season pass prices, too. I believe it's $20 down and $20 per person for all four Florida Disney parks, plus the two water parks, plus Downtown Disney. I could be dead wrong, though.
15 here, and man I miss WDW. Haven't been there since I was 12... 2296091
yu-gi-oh reference ... I LOVE it....
looking forward to more pony mischief...
Chapter 3 + 10 comments.
faaaaantastic!
cannot wait for more!
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Don't worry, they're coming...
2295558I've been to DisneyWorld and HersheyPark. Both epic.
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Sentences needing to be capped? When did that happen? I don't have a prereader.
As for the comment about it being short, that's because I don't have much patience when writing dialogue. When I'm really in the zone and writing a really exciting, action-packed scene, it practically writes itself and I make it very detailed because I enjoy writing it as much as I expect people to enjoy reading it, but when it's just a scene where the characters are sitting around talking I end up losing patience and speeding it up so I can get to the action. When it's complete I'll probably go back and flesh it out more, but until then I'm just so excited to get to the more exciting portions I have planned that I can't help keeping the chapters relatively short for now. I already have the outline ready, and am working on the next chapter, so at this rate I might actually manage to finish by the end of Spring Break.
I'll read this if someone guarantees Lucario's in this fic. :P
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Oi, the main thing I saw in that comment is that you don't have a pre-reader. I HIGHLY suggest finding one. I haven't taken a look at this story yet, but I figure, it may be time I hope in on the pre-reader train now that I got four for my own super awesome secret story that I can't stop mentioning in my blog that I need to shut up about, Anyway, if you want a pre-reader, I'll gladly take up the mantel if you want! Also, I love the cover art! (You should use Rainbow with an Altaria in this story, I mean look at this pic, they are PERFECT for each other!)
Anyway, I shall dive into this story in a little bit, I gotta eat breakfast, or is it lunch? I don't know, I am just hungry xD
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Perhaps you should get a pre-reader. This story has potential, and the totally within Pinkie Pie being Pinkie Pie battle with Kaiba had me chuckle. I could pre-read for you if you wish. I have a very firm grasp on the English language and where proper punctuation should go. You miss a lot of punctuation but that shouldn't be allowed to hinder your story.
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Agreeing with this. New pokémon stories is always a good thing - we're kinda short on them - and while the premise is good, you really need to stop hasting away just to get the words down and get your writing sorted out.
Good luck anyways.
That akward moment when you notice that you are not in Kansas anymore X3 (Or Equis for that matter)
I misread every third chapter as every chapter and almost died inside.
ya know wut funny?
i was watching pokemon... then started reading this
Your Pinkie Pie...IS AMAZING!
Brilliant pinkie, you never fail to surprise, I mean beating kiba is pretty hard
I love this story.
Do you think you could add/hint at my headcanon next story?
My headcanon, by the way, is that Pinkie Pie is Palkia's daughter, and is just pretending to know nothing of Pokemon.
Ugh.
Also, I can get Twi casting that spell for science, but how the hell can she not know what she cast?
2314657 not really, theres always one flaw in every stratagem of his that can be exploited...his over developed ego. beats him every time...
2542340 True, however Pinkie can't use that... she too nice
What in the name of the dark magician was with pinkie and Kaiba?!?!?!
You got everypony written perfectly! Well done!
2862357 I don't know... But I heard that pinkie gets around by crossing through dimensions by cracks.
2405479 You sir are brilliant but maybe Pinkie is the Creation OF..........MEW!!!
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OMG! Same, and it was black and white. Just perfect.