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Rainbow Dash has had the dream of becoming a Wonderbolt since she was a little filly. When she joins the military so she can become one, she finds out what really goes on outside of Equestria. Instead of becoming a Wonderbolt, she is sent to fight with the Zebras in their civil war.

A side-story to Where My Demons Hide.

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Comments ( 5 )

he is sent to fight witht the Zebras in their civil war.

with*

she tossed her saddlebags in her hooflocker

Full sentence, "she" needs to be capitalized.
Sorry, I'm a grammar nazi at times. lol :rainbowwild:

B company. i have this feeling this will be like bad company.

but mice story though,saw a few mistakes but its still okay

I like how this is going :)

is this story going to verdun with ponies?

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