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Disciple of Chrysalis


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Shard, daughter of King Sombra and a mother her father told her died giving birth to her, has lived her whole life in her fathers palace, never allowed to go outside or even glance out a window, but when she finally sees the outside she begins to see her father for the tyrant he is and and learn the truth about her mothers death. She must leave and find someone that can help her and it is obviously going to be her fathers greatest enemies, The Princesses Luna and Celestia, of Equestria.

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Comments ( 39 )

2286677 I admit its catchy and kinda cool, but what does it have to do with my story?

Good story so far, a few errors and there. Over all an interesting read. You just need to work on your sentence structure and use the right words in the right ways.

Well, that is something you don't see everyday, the great and powerful Dark King of The Shadows, King Sombra feeling bad about what he had become.

This is only going to get more excited.

"LET IT RAIN SKY FIRE" ok now I want to know more then ever what will happen now.

Now the shit storm has just started to get real.

2314597 When I fav something I plan on reading it.:pinkiecrazy:


So it gets read.:pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:

2336870 And there shall be Miss/Mister. Glasses, but I'm currently plagued with writers block :twilightblush:

2340375 Alright, wish me luck, cause i'm thinking right now, as we speak

2376698 When I get around to it, theres gonna be a bit of a battle soon

2428805 Yes because he feels his daughter has abandoned him and she was basically, the only point of light in the dark hell that is his mind

Well thats new for King Sombra

2429224 Yes, because ever Sombra fic I read is 'Oh my gosh, he was born crazy and he needs to die' and this always angers me, I want a realistic reason why hes crazy and Shard was always my OC and her story is being told here and this is why Sombra is crazy, k?

2429303 I did not mean anything bad by that at all:ajsleepy:

All I am saying is that its a breath of fresh air too see King Sombra in a new form of light:pinkiehappy:

And I know what you mean by every other Fic out their that he is in, he always is a crazy bastard that has no rime or reason for what he is doing:fluttershysad:

I am just happy seeing him actually showing/felling something that does not involve his immediate need for his own destruction:fluttershysad:

He is my personal favorite character, even though he did not get much screen time that he should of had, I still believe that their is more to him then meats the eye, and believe me when I say this but I strongly believe and think that you hit the nail right on the head with him:ajsmug:

I don't know if you want help, but I'm more than happy to proof read. It seems that there are several minor grammar and spelling issues.

Feel free to get me to proof read, or don't if you don't want to bother with it.

Either way, great fic!

2444484 I think i'm good on the proof reading thanks and thank you for reading the fic :twilightsmile:

This story justs keep getting better and better

I could so imagine Discord saying those things.

"This is usually sometimes the result of a unicorn's birth and we needed to ask you, did Celestia ever have children?".

heheh

usually sometimes

pick one, :derpytongue2: (ps: great story)

Luna hadn't believed her sister, maybe she was hiding something, but this was her sister, why would she hide someting, but Luna remembered something now, Celestia had disappeared a few years ago and when she had returned, had a grievous scar on her neck and refused to talk about her time away, maybe that ad something to do with it.

Oh. My. Gawd. Shard is the daughter of Sombra and Celestia! :pinkiegasp: :yay: :trollestia:
And it is something not someting.

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