Just A Little Prick

by Sweet Tale

Live Reading

A very good friend of mine has recently done a live reading of this story.

Thank you very much GeodesicDragon !

Comments

[Terrifying Space Worm]

Oh, now I get the joke. You dirty lil' thing, you.

[Railroad Brony]

That title works on two levels. Angel can be quite the prick.

[Loganberry]

This was an enjoyable read, even if I am rather more pro-Angel than many! No doubt about my favourite aspect of the story: the really good comedy. This fic has great comic timing, especially in the more physical comedy. That made it a whole lot of fun to read. Clever title, too, and I thought the Angel-POV sections worked quite well on the whole.

It could have done with one more proofreading pass, though, as there are several technical blips. Most notably, rabbits are not rodents: they're lagomorphs. The occasional iffy word choice, typo ("vetinarian") and the dreaded "it's" for "its" inevitably drag it down just a little bit.

Still, those are mostly minor problems and this story's good points well outweigh the bad. An amusing story that I don't have a lot of trouble imagining actually happening in-universe.