XVI. Blackest Night
Lyra shifted to get comfortable, wishing for the first time since she became a doll that she hadn’t regained her sense of touch. For what felt like weeks she had been trapped in ice, unable to move, in the dark.
Twilight looked down as she shifted position. “Are you okay Lyra? I thought I might have lost you.” She managed a weak smile.
Lyra looked up and smiled back at her. “Yes, I’m just glad you came back for me.” Her attempt to cheer Twilight up with a smile had failed.
She did little but look down at Lyra and began to frown. There was clearly something on her mind.
“Twilight, what’s wrong?” Lyra asked. She had been resting in bed with Twilight and Mac when the alicorn bolted out of bed.
“She’s coming,” Twilight said.
“Who is coming?”
Twilight growled, sensing the build up of power from across town. “Luna.” She got out of bed, leaving Mac and Lyra behind.
She flew down from her room to the front door of the library. Twilight paused to retrieve her element from the nearby display. She stepped outside and looked around. It was dark under the new moon, and across the street from her stood Luna and Guard. Twilight grinned. She had prepared a spell that might help with the sarosians.
“Twilight Sparkle, we command you surrender into our custody at once!” Luna shouted in the Royal Canterlot voice. There was a hint of malice in it that Twilight had not heard since she cleansed her of Nightmare Moon.
Twilight grinned and looked around, noting the positions of each pony. “No. You had your chance to be there for me, they all did! Now I’ve found a way they’ll never have to die. They may have failed me, but I will never fail my friends!”
“You have failed, Sparkle. All this—the deception, the lies, the investigation—Celestia begged that you be given the chance to confess and be redeemed. I should have brought you to her in chains and beat the confession out of you. You are a monster, now come quietly or else.”
“Or else what? You’ll have your guards arrest me? We both know I’m too powerful for that. If you want me, you’ll have to try harder than tapping the Nightmare for extra power.” Twilight levitated the element of magic where they could all see it. It was radiating an infected purple aura, with streaks of green tainting its purity. She placed it on her head.
What little patience Luna had was gone, and she lowered herself towards the ground, ready to attack. “You are charged with the murder of two Lunar Guards, Colgate, Bon Bon, and the disappearance of at least twenty-eight others.”
“Cut the crap with the voice, and what do you mean two guards?” Twilight thought about it a minute and began laughing. “You mean Echo was in on it the whole time? You’re such a coward you had to use a decoy? Then he got what he deserved! It’s not your place to deny my friends immortality!”
Luna closed the distance between them until Twilight could feel the temperature dropping. “I am not a coward. Were it not Celestia’s wish to investigate and arrest you peacefully, I would not hesitate to strike you down. By the old laws, I can execute you without trial for the confirmed murder of members of the Lunar Guard.”
Twilight laughed again. “Citing laws from your failed regime? What’s your end-game here? I haven’t hurt anypony that didn’t deserve it. My friends are immortal and safe, I could have even granted you true immortality. Instead, you’ll just end up back on the moon. Only this time I won’t send you there alive.”
The aura of magic around Twilight thickened until it repulsed the cold night air from around her. Luna braced herself as Twilight opened herself up to the same dark side of her equinity that once turned Luna into Nightmare Moon.
“So, we’re doing this the hard way?” Luna stated. She flexed her neck, cracking several joints, and slowly backed up to give her guard a clear shot. “Unlike Celestia, I’m not afraid of a fight.” Luna nodded at her guards.
The twenty-two guards aimed at Twilight. They emitted their supersonic screech at her to disable her magic, as Luna charged her horn. Twilight responded by charging her own horn, bringing out a tainted glow from the element of magic.
Twilight braced herself as she cast a spell to amplify the sound waves. Within seconds it had started a feedback loop, growing hundreds of times louder than should be possible. It took all Twilight’s might to weather the storm, and within seconds it had ended.
She opened her eyes and grinned in triumph. Around them lie a platoon of Lunar Guards, bleeding from the eyes and ears, twitching in agony. Their brains had been scrambled by their own secret weapon, amplified and returned to their sensitive ears a thousand times stronger.
Luna stood there with her mouth agape. “I did not realize you’d come to possess such power.”
Twilight smiled widely, showing off her teeth. “Well, Luna, having second thoughts?”
Luna bowed her head. “Part of me still didn’t want to believe you had fallen so far.” Luna lowered her head and began to channel magic. For all the evil Nightmare Moon had wrought, Twilight had once gone out of her way to save her. Now, Luna had failed to save the one pony who had redeemed her from exile. Tears began to fall from her face as she realized there really was only one way this could end.
“What you have done here is inexcusable. There will be no trial.” Luna raised her head and opened her eyes. They had turned jet black and began to radiate energy along with her horn.
Twilight barely had time to wipe the grin off her face before a bolt of black magic closed the distance between them. She raised the first counterspell she could think of, forming a blunt shield in front of her. She was flung backward by the force of it colliding with poorly focused shield. Twilight recovered and cast another spell to slow down her inertia as she sailed through the air. A large branch snapped in two as it stopped her in mid-air and she fell to the ground.
She looked back up at the alicorn advancing on her. Twilight charged her horn and fired the doll spell at her. Luna batted it aside effortlessly, and turned back just in time to see a branch hurdling through the air at her. It caught her in the side, sending her sprawling across the dirt.
Twilight flew up and dove down at Luna, firing as many bolts of energy at her as she could muster. Each one swirled into a black void around Luna’s horn, being absorbed by her. Soon she was on the defensive as Luna redirected her own magic back at her.
She was more prepared this time, but her shield still barely held. Twilight landed on her hooves and looked around for Luna. A solid beam of energy shot out at her from her left side. She joined it with her own beam of purple energy. The two pulsed against each other as they lowered their guards and poured all their magic into a focused beam of energy. They stood locked in place as the deadly torrents of energy battled between them.
“This—is how you use—what Celestia taught you? To destroy?” Luna asked.
Twilight gritted her teeth and pushed the beam of energy further towards Luna. “No, I’ve—used it to give—eternal life!”
“You do not grasp the true meaning—of immortality!” Luna launched a surge of arcane energy into her horn, blasting Twilight back against the library. “To live forever trapped in a cage of stone, or banished to the moon. Do not ever presume to tell me you are giving eternal life!”
Twilight tapped the energy of her element, reversing the gravity around Luna. Before she could recover, Twilight reversed it again and amplified it, pinning Luna to the ground. She walked over, straining under the effort of mimicking the gravity on the surface of the sun.
“I’ve—preserved their minds in dolls—that will never rot! Never wither!” Twilight screamed. “We—will all live forever—happy! young!” She increased the gravity more, causing the ground to depress under Luna. Her entire body was glowing a dark blue as her magic kept her from being crushed instantly.
Twilight almost stopped the spell when she noticed the darkness fall over them both. All the stars were vanishing, and the new moon had grown into a full moon. It continued to grow brighter and brighter as Luna tapped it for energy. “Wha—”
Twilight was cut off as Luna opened a conduit of arcane energy between herself and the moon. Like lightning, pure energy shot forth from her horn and the celestial body, passing through Twilight. She struggled to shield herself but it had already burned its way past most of her mental defenses.
She tried a last ditch attempt to teleport and disrupt the energy flow. Every nerve in her body was on fire and her muscles tensed, overloaded by the energy. Retreating into her mind, Twilight was able to find a small bastion of power she could still control. It was the element of magic, giving her just enough focus to teleport out of the conduit of pure arcane mana.
Twilight succeeded, but the backlash threw her into the wall inside her kitchen. Twilight rolled over and fought to regain her footing. She could see in the reflection on the refrigerator most of her mane and tail had been scorched away.
Twilight wondered why Luna hadn’t followed her in. She tapped into her element of magic again, finding it nearly depleted. She tossed it aside and grabbed the largest knife she could out of the nearby cabinet.
Walking outside, she found Luna still struggling forward from the exertion. Twilight began laughing as she walked towards her. “So, that’s all you’ve got? The mighty princess of the night and her moon?” Twilight walked towards her and waved the knife towards the moon, which was still outshining every star in the sky.
“You sho—” Luna coughed up a little blood. “Should not be alive, nopony can survive that—much energy.”
“Oh Luna, my cause is righteous. Surely you did not expect to beat me?” Twilight closed in on her prey steadily. “Now that I know I’m more powerful than you, I have nothing to fear.” Twilight jammed the knife into Luna’s shoulder.
Luna screamed in pain and collapsed on the ground. As her blood stained the dirt beneath her, Twilight noticed the moon also turning blood red. Soon, everything as far as the eye could see turned a deep crimson.
“It’s over, Twilight. Celestia is coming,” Luna said.
Twilight turned towards Canterlot, looking again at the moon. In ancient times, a red moon signified that war had been declared on Equestria. Twilight wouldn’t have long now to prepare before she had to face Celestia herself.
“Good, no more hiding from what you’ve done Celestia. Do you hear me?!” Twilight screamed. “You let my family die and wouldn’t even comfort me, you are the true monster! The immortal sun goddess! Raising me like your own foal and discarding me like worthless trash!”
There was a loud popping sound behind Twilight. She turned around and Luna was gone. The princess had teleported away, no doubt to Canterlot.
Twilight ran back towards the library giggling. “Yes, plenty of time now. I’ll send everypony to the Everfree. It’ll all be okay!”
Rarity flinched as they heard another loud explosion from outside, shaking dust loose from the rafters.
“Is—do you think that’s Celestia? Come to save us?” Sweetie asked.
“I don’t know, Darling, but I hope so,” Rarity said.
They had gathered the remaining unfrozen ponies near the prison and were trying to free the dolls trapped inside of it. Sprocket as the most mechanically inclined of the lot was trying to pick the lock with a few bent pins.
“We have to get out of here!” Vinyl yelled. “Whatever is going on, it’s our best chance to escape!”
“The tunnel isn’t finished,” Octavia said. “We were close, but there are least four feet to go.”
Another loud noise from outside shook dirt loose from the ceiling. “Got it!” Sprocket yelled. He had picked the lock to the prison and managed to get the trapped ponies out.
“About time,” Dash whined. She crawled out of the lockbox and began biting at the rubber bands around her wings. “Sounds like Scootaloo made it!”
All the ponies gathered began to cheer. The door to the basement swung open, and a brilliant wave of lavender magic washed over the room. Large runes etched into the wall began to activate.
“I have a bad feeling about this,” Vinyl said.
Scootaloo had finally made it to the castle. Unfortunately, it was gargantuan for a pegasus as small as she was. She didn’t want to waste time trying to convince the guards, but had little choice.
She flew down to the guard at the front doors of the castle. “Hey, you! I need to talk to Celestia immediately!”
The guard rubbed his eyes and blinked a couple times. “What the, hey Steel, you seeing this?”
“Yeah, Flint, but I don’t believe it. Is that a toy?” Steel said.
“No, my name is Scootaloo, I’m an orphan living in Ponyville and a friend of Rainbow Dash, the element of loyalty! Twilight has been imprisoning us in dolls and I have to talk to Celestia immediately or more ponies will die!” Scootaloo shouted.
“I—what on Equestria is the regulation for this?” Flint asked.
“I don’t know, but it’s above our paygrade. Better just take her to Celestia. She might still be in the main hall holding the night court for her sister,” Steel said.
“Awesome! Come on guys, we don’t have much time,” Scootaloo said. She landed on top of Steel’s helmet as they galloped inside to find Celestia.
It was a short ride to reach her, reminding Scootaloo how much she missed being able to walk and fly like a normal sized pony. It had taken two hours when it should have taken twenty minutes to cross Canterlot to the castle due to her size.
The trio burst into the throne room, causing Celestia to tilt her head and put the bite of cake on her fork down. “Guards, what is the matter?” Celestia asked.
“Princess!” Scootaloo took off and flew towards her.
A thousand years of grace under pressure and regal composure began to slip, her eyes going wide in shock. There appeared to be a talking, flying doll, rapidly approaching her. Celestia dropped the cake from her levitation and her mouth fell agape.
“Celestia! Twilight’s gone crazy and she’s trapping everypony!” Scootaloo said.
“Wha—guards! Send for word from Luna immediately,” Celestia ordered. “Ready the Solar Guard, and bring the Knight-Captain here at once.”
“Celestia, please promise you can rescue everypony, please,” Scootaloo whined.
“It’s okay, my little pony. Now, tell me what has happened a bit more calmly.”
Scootaloo landed on the armrest of the chair. “Well, Twilight tricked me to come to the library and poisoned me. Then she captured me as a doll, and Dash too. She has a whole town in her basement of dolls. Rarity, the crusaders, Vinyl, Lyra, Big Mac. . . She plans to get everypony and make them be her friend forever!”
Celestia was still processing this shocking news. Part of her refused to believe her pupil had this in her. After years of trials and tests, after raising her to the status of princess, how could she have this evil inside her?
“You are sure?” Celestia asked. She immediately felt it was a pretty stupid question. Tiny replica dolls of ponies that disappeared without a trace isn’t the kind of thing you could make up.
“Yeah, an—” The room took on a red tint. Scootaloo looked up through the skylight to see a blood red moon hanging low in the sky. “What does that mean?”
Celestia stood up and levitated a dusty trunk out of an alcove in the corner. “It means, Scootaloo, that we’re at war. It means Luna needs my aid. May the creator have mercy on Twilight if what you say is true.”
Though the chest was dusty, the contents inside still gleamed as brilliantly as the last time Celestia had worn them into battle. The golden raiments of the sun goddess hadn’t been used since banishing Nightmare Moon a millenia ago.
Now, Celestia slipped into the golden breastplate with sterling silver designed engraved on it. Her cutie mark adorned it, protecting her chest from all weapons magical and non-magical. She put on large boots, a larger regalia that protected everything below her knee. Celestia’s mane was tucked under the helmet, and her horn slid through a hole in the top of it.
Scootaloo watched in awe at the transformation. Celestia had once been white with a flowing pink, blue, and green mane. Now all that was visible was a golden deity, barely a hint of white fur showing. Her flowing mane had vanished, replaced by a golden ethereal mane and tail. The entire room seemed brighter from her mere presence.
There was a loud popping sound in the room. Scootaloo turned to see a bloodied and bruised Luna in the center of the chamber. A large wound in her shoulder was spewing bright red blood onto the tiles. Scootaloo and Celestia flew over to aid her.
“Lulu! What happened? Are you okay?” Celestia cried out. She stopped in front of her sister and began to charge her horn.
“No, Tia, stop! Leave it for the doctors.” She held a hoof up to wave her away. “you’ll need your strength for Twilight, she is not the filly we once knew.”
Celestia dropped her royal visage for the first time in millennia. Her facade cracked as her eyes narrowed and she grimaced. In one moment she was crying, the next her body was tensed up, her ears flat against her head. She was quick to regain her composure. For that brief moment, the pensive leader had shown her subjects the emotional turmoil within.
Scootaloo backed up as waves of heat began to radiate off Celestia, threatening to melt her. “Twilight tried to kill you? Was she behind the disappearances also?” Celestia asked.
Luna nodded weakly. “Yes to both, dear sister. She has fallen even—” Luna choked back a sob. “Even further than I did.”
Scootaloo was blinded and realized it was the noon-day sun shining through the windows overhead. Celestia had raised the sun, despite it being nearly midnight.
Celestia motioned for the guards. “Take Luna to the infirmary at once. Dispatch all guards to Ponyville.” Celestia grabbed the nearest guard, Steel, by the scruff of his neck. “And do not misunderstand me. When I say all guards, I mean every. Single. One.” She released him and he ran off to carry out her order.
Celestia motioned to Scootaloo “Take her to the infirmary too. Do not let harm come to either of them.” Celestia was so carried away in her disappointment, pity, and anger at Twilight’s betrayal she did not realize the fear she was invoking in her subjects. Ponies who had never seen her raise her voice at the rudest solicitor were now backed against the walls as she channeled the pure essence of the sun.
She walked towards the door to the main hall, tears dripping from her cheeks to the floor. The nearest ponies raised their eyes and saw a look of determination and sorrow. Clad in her battle armor and with the sun high in the sky, her true meaning had been revealed.
Twilight, I’m coming for you.
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i think you mean sun
Oh DEAR
Also what happened to Fluttershy? She never spoke after being turned into a doll.... hmm. ANYWAY MOAR! 
I usually don't go in for these stories that can only end badly, but this is just too well written to ignore! 
THIS CHAPTER IS UP!
I loveeee ittt! I love it Kaiden!
Once again, you leave me speechless... I don't even... Slsofhvldsfijnvliejv.
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I don't know what I'd do without you. Can I fire my editor and hire you?
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She's hiding in her cottage. It's hard to have so many dolls and give them all 'screen time'.
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Yay!
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IT IS BEAUTIFUL KAIDEN, NOW GET THE NEXT ONE UP!
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2698206 ... that wouldnt be wise i am not good at grammar but im just a spelling nazi
*Builds A Nether Portal. Herobrine Walks Through*
HEROBRINE: Why has thou summoned me?
ME: Sire, Princess Luna has been wounded in battle by Princess Twilight Sparkle.
BOTH: ...
HEROBRINE: *Adorns His Black Hellish Armor And Puts On His Crown* Gather all of thy soldiers, we go to battle at the crack of dawn.
Twilight better be ready for some Ol' Middle English MAJOR PWNAGE...!
Well, this is going to be one hell of an endgame.
I still stand by my opinion that Twilight needs help, not execution. And I think Luna's being a hypocrite. Who tried to end all life on the planet again? It's strange that she just jumps to threats of execution without trial when she most likely did the same kind of things a thousand years ago.
I mean, she was granted a chance to be cured by the elements when she was corrupted, so why not grant Twilight the same?
And don't get me started on Celestia. Even now she doesn't realize that she had a hand in Twilight's downfall.
I don't know what to expect from the rest of the story. You're one of those writers that have a knack for 'wtf' kinda endings, so I'm not expecting a good ending or a bad ending. Just a fitting ending
Something in my gut tells me that this isn't going to end well for Twilight. No matter, we shall see the result when the chapter comes out....anyway, excellent job!
Oh, snap son! Here comes the pain!
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I smell banishment
2698206 Twi is about to get her ass handed to her unless Celestia reverts her back to a mortal unicorn. Now that's the best punishment for her actions.
Shit just got real. This was SO EPIC I didn't even care about the population counter.
Take the most epic movie you've ever seen. Multiply by 2. Multiply by 10. ... Ok, whatever, multiply by infinite to the power of infinite. That is only a little fraction of the epicness going on here. If your last chapter is one billionth as good as this one, I'll be happy forever. A bit more and you may kill me :/
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She needs help, but she can't get that if she wins. Lyra has already shown that talking down Twilight is pointless as she'll silence anyone who tries to tell her she's wrong. Even if she did it in a state of dementia, Twilight still needs to answer for ponies she did legitimately kill. There's also the issue that none of her friends want what she's doing. If she wins then they're all going to be trapped in a living hell for all eternity. Dash will never be able to fly again, and Applebloom and Big Macintosh will never see their sister again. They'll all be unable to die or mature. Plus when Twilight kills Celestia, the sun will either die out or be stuck in place, which would mean absolute disaster for anyone still living out there.
Twilight could then, depending on her ability to sustain herself, end up dying as well, which would leave her dolls stuck, alone for all eternity and unable to die. Not to mention that without a sane leader to band under, the rest of the nation would devolve into complete anarchy. The only person who has the complete upper hand in this is Discord, who being far stronger than any of the Alicorns, is litteraly unstoppable now that the only weapon capable of defeating him is unusable. He could pretty much just take over the entire planet now and no one could stop him.
Luna's probably just as emotional as Twilight considering Echo, someone very close to her, was killed by Twilight, and Luna hinted that Celestia was in her own state of emotional distress. At this point everyone really needs to just calm down and talk things out, but thats not going to happen because emotions are running way too high so this will probably end with someone dead.
tl;dr - Twilight winning would be the worst possible thing.
By the way, this goes to Kaiden; do you consider there to be an afterlife in your version of Equestria?
Wow... Shit has just gone real.
I really hope this won't end with a downer ending. I'm not asking for a happy-ever after, but don't let all of Equestria get doomed.
They need Twilight alive. Otherwise, the doll converting spell will be permanent.
2698687 I never said that Twilight should win. I said that she needs help, just like any other person with a mental disorder. She does have to attone for what she did, make no mistake about that. She ruined the lives of over thirty ponies and killed ten or so too. Twilight is not the good guy here and I'm not defending her actions. I am pointing out that somepony should have done something before it got to this level.
But I think I'm a bit biased. I have a friend with a form of Multiple Personality Disorder (or however you write it in English) and he attacked me a few times. I could have easily abandoned him at that point. But I didn't and he eventually made a recovery. Well, as far as one can recover from that...
Celestia abandoned Twilight in this story while both of them were suffering. They could have helped each other but Celestia did nothing and chose to suffer in silence. Who knows how old Celestia is but she probably has experience with losing those close to her, while Twilight does not.
And Luna almost immediatly started to threaten Twilight with execution. No trial, no nothing. If Luna had succeeded, the dolls would have been like that forever too. She probably was overly emotional from losing her guard and I realize that probably impaired her judgment too.
Anyway, you're right about everypony calming down and sitting down to talk. That was what should have happened in the first place. But then we wouldn't have had this amazing story.
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Kaiden, you don't even know how many spelling mistakes I've found in your stories.. Finding one isn't that hard...
Let's play a game. Can you tell what's truth and what's false in the replies? One is a spoiler, and the rest are red herrings!
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And may the odds be ever in Twilight's favor.
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Wait, I can't have Twilight kill Celestia and doll every single pony?
*grumbles*
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That sounds like an awesome ending. Everypony dies, except the ones who can never die...
And yeah, the afterlife is a grassy knoll and the mane six will have a picnic on it and be happy forever. Unless it's the grassy knoll the sniper was on, then it could get awkward.
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I try to dodge, *rolls against dexterity*
You're tackled by Dash in an endless hug and suffocated.
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Twilight does need help, but I think she may have finally snapped.
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Something in my guy tells me you're right.
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Yeah, I had considered the whole investigation being a test to see if Twilight would admit to it and ask for help. But if Celestia sent Luna and they knew it was her all along, that wouldn't work out. So then I went it getting personal for Luna and her having a temper. She still did try to reach out, she just has horrible social skills. Then she sorta tried to kill Twilight, and Celestia is pissed anypony would dare try to kill her sister.
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There is a sequel, so it must be a happy ending, right?
I mean, authors don't just kill off the protagonist and make a sequel about somepony else? Do they?
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I wonder, without the element of magic, will Twilight stand a chance? Will anyone call me on borrowing heavily from battles in Immortal Games? Will life ever be the same for Derpy Hooves when she stops getting free muffins from Twilight? Derpy is the real victim here!
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I think she activated them, but they need to be 20% cooler to get screen time. I promise to give them some much needed love. "Fluttershy look! Twilight's killing Celestia! Quick, get the party cannon!"
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Look for me on the dawn of the third day as the sun rises... Twilight and I shall be coming for you and your puny army.
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LAUNCHING PAINBOW! Wait, Twilight broke the painbow.
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SPOILER!
Also, you spelled gut wrong.
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ah gof'n shaggoth! c-vulgtlagln gnaiih shoggor, y'hah!
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I'a Kaidan!
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Ytharanak eekn'aa hupadgh lliog
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EM HCUOT T'NAC
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Hai ysll'ha gof'n vulgtlagln gnaiih!
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UOY T'NEVAH DERUGIF TI TUO!
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I saw tsuj practising gnisitcarp ym niaheyl'R
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TIMMADDOG
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buW uoy oot!
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Wonderful chapter -- I enjoyed the battle sequence. I'm disappointed that Luna's not stronger than Twilight, but that's just personal preference right there. -laughs- I do find it odd that Celestia seems to be going straight into war mode. Seems out of character -- though she may also realize that Twilight needs some punching around before she can be talked to? Or something. Regardless, spiffing job.
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Knocking sense into head is best sense. It's more of the angry parent, where you see them and instantly go "Oh shit, I'm fucked" and confess and beg forgiveness.
But will Twilight have that much common sense?
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>streaks of green tainting it’s purity
*its
>there is at least four feet to go
*are
Luna: The night will last... FOREVER!
*a few years later*
Twilight: Their lives will last... FOREVER!
Celestia: Oh, not this shit again...
3292891 Lolz
2698261 you do that I'll start an army of robots
And a side note,
Dear princess twiglight,
Your fucked.
Your next door neighbor,
SUN-1105
The most fitting music for Twlight and Luna's Battle is With Me Masaive Power Remix By Crush 40 (I don't know how to put the video in my comment)
5894081 copy the utube link
2698206 celestias pissed off war mode music http://youtu.be/2viESLJQRlo
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I'm just going to to leave this right here
I see what you did there...
Oh my... dis gonna be good. Epic fight incoming! Badassery-o-meter at maximum! It's gonna be AWESOOOOOOMMMMME!!!!!!
It's ass-kicking time!
Wow. I'm listening to The Final Countdown right now! That's spoopy.
Hold onto your marks, everypony: It's about to get real up in here!
MY LORD THIS ENTIRE CHAPTER GAVE MY ENTIRE BODY CHILLS MORE THEN I CAN COUNT! MOMENTS LIKE THIS IS WHY I LOVE THIS SITE!
Oh shit, I'm actually glad for forgetting this story. It makes rereading it much more epic.