‘It isn’t proper for a lady to moan during sex.’ WHAT the HELL is wrong whit you Fancy Pants you don't want to hear her sweet music of love you are F*** in the head.
Looking into my 'Read Later' list, I see… ah, a familiar face. No need for an introduction, I suppose! Let’s get right to the proofreading and reviewing. Oh, but I hope things have been well! Because depending how this goes, they could get a lot worse real fast.
Nah, I'm nice when I wanna be! Let's go.
… “splashed over my.” – ‘over my’ should have a noun of some sort to conclude the sentence. … “couldn’t hurt him right” – Place a comma between ‘him’ and ‘right’.
Hmm... Well! I certainly couldn't get many errors from this! Kind've amazed, only due to me reading a lot of error-laced stories lately, but regardless, they've been good ones.
Will this be a change for the better or the worse? I dunno, but I might as well present a basic review of the plot and character. Fleur is rather simple in her character, which isn't necessarily a bad thing. The plot is simple enough: Heat cycle unable to be quenched, but the simplicity of why it's a problem (married mare) intrigues me. I can only hope this particular theme is prominent in the story, but wait!
‘It isn’t proper for a lady to moan during sex.’
WHAT the HELL is wrong whit you Fancy Pants you don't want to hear her sweet music of love you are F*** in the head.
I'm imagining everything.
Something tells me, this is not going to end well.
Looking into my 'Read Later' list, I see… ah, a familiar face. No need for an introduction, I suppose! Let’s get right to the proofreading and reviewing. Oh, but I hope things have been well! Because depending how this goes, they could get a lot worse real fast.
Nah, I'm nice when I wanna be! Let's go.
… “splashed over my.” – ‘over my’ should have a noun of some sort to conclude the sentence.
… “couldn’t hurt him right” – Place a comma between ‘him’ and ‘right’.
Hmm... Well! I certainly couldn't get many errors from this! Kind've amazed, only due to me reading a lot of error-laced stories lately, but regardless, they've been good ones.
Will this be a change for the better or the worse? I dunno, but I might as well present a basic review of the plot and character. Fleur is rather simple in her character, which isn't necessarily a bad thing. The plot is simple enough: Heat cycle unable to be quenched, but the simplicity of why it's a problem (married mare) intrigues me. I can only hope this particular theme is prominent in the story, but wait!
Why hope? NEXT CHAPTER!
2287914 but dat pic tho
"How the hell do that work!?!" troll.me/images/ancient-aliens-guy/women-logic.jpg