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Our action shape who we are. But so the the events that happen around us.


Come into a land ruled by chaos, long before the birth of harmony. Follow Luna and Celestia as the they try to survive in this harsh world, lead their people, defeat Discord and found Equestria.


Image by LeLittleLuna used with permission

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This has promise, but you might want to look into fixing all the typos. Copy/pasting into Word or Google Docs and doing a spell/grammar check could do wonders.

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i write in gdocs and check with the autocorrect,
then paste it here and check again
so that's about all i can do

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