When Rainbow Dash finds Fluttershy ill, she takes it upon herself to nurse her best friends back to health!
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It's a cute little story and I could see something like that happening, Rainbow Dash being the loyal one and all. But I've never seen Fluttershy referred to as 'Shy before.
This was a very nice little story to read. Good job!
Short but sweet and episode material.
Looks like it's time for Dr. Fluttershy to make a house call.
Funny, reminds me Feather Flu from yesterday but this time, Flutters is sick.
Yeah, I've always loved simple story with Rainbow as a caretaker, especially for Flutters
2297708 Yeah, both stories were submitted for a writing contest with a prompt of 'one of the mane six is injured or sick.' Great minds think alike.
- You have a soft paragraph here, you need to double space it, otherwise, it's improper formatting.
- Again, soft paragraph, you need to get rid of incredibly irritating mistakes like that.
- Also, you have a missing word between the bolded words.
2298153 thank you. fixed.
This may be short, but overall I enjoyed it. Great, varied use of vocabulary helped. But not too much- you got to the point in a way I could imagine like I was there. Bravo.
I like the sentiment of the story and how you didn't leave out too many details of Fluttershy being sick (just the stuff that would have made others sick
).
All in all, it was a very cute one-shot and I'm glad to have taken the time to read it.
thank you i was in need of a nice fluffy shipyish story so thank you for for forfiling that need
3051557 Always happy to please.
Short and sweet. Very nice.
Damn, and I just got my D'aaaaaw Meter back from repairs.
Cute, but a bit uncharacteristic of Dash.
Even if Fluttershy was sick; all that would ring in RD's mind would be 'Work' and 'Contagious'. She honestly wouldn't go so willingly, and I can't see it any other way. 
It's an okay story and that's about all I can say about it. Nothing exciting or interesting happens, just one character gets sick, other takes care of her and they mention friendship every four sentences on avarage. I know it's MLP and all, but this story is just too much sugar, not enough actual story. I half expected Rainbow to sturggle with doing her chores or fighting with Angel until they reached a truce over common friend, but oh well.
It's not bad by any means, just a bit dull.
Since I'm sick abed right now and a dear friend is taking care of me this was perfect. If only I could get better as fast as Fluttershy.
5527444 I can understand your feelings. Though for me it made sense since it's tagged as slice of life I expected it to be very simple and light. Still nice of you to be polite in your feedback to the author.
It IS SO CUTESEE WOOOOTSY
The ending was so cute!
What an underrated little gem this is.
very
very
very
cute