Chapter 7: Can it work?
"Are you ready?" Derpy asked the shocked pair. They nodded her heads and Derpy explained. "Rainbow read the clock and it said two thirty. She was pacing when some robbers broke in and were holding guns. Rainbow Fought them before they could take a single shot. She tied them up and then left through the same hole and took them to the Ponyville jail. She said she said she might not be back on time so she said for me to tell you this before she took off." Derpy finished the story. Twilight wasn't buying it for one minute.
"I have a hard time to believe this story." Twilight started. "But since you are the one here, I can use a spell that replay's the past. I could try that." Soarin nodded his head. Twilight's horn began to glow a bright purple aura. There was a bigger glow coming, then there was a big circle and there was Rainbow, pacing back and fourth. Derpy was wincing and crying.
"I can't believe I have to go face my biggest fear!" Rainbow said, still pacing. Then the clock said two thirty, Rainbow heard the clock go off, causing Rainbow to jump. "I'm sorry Derpy, I can't do this..." Then she flew out the door slammed shut out of accident, causing some of the wood to fall off.
Then the circle evaporated. Twilight got a worried look and Soarin sighed.
"Twilight, do you want to find Dash, or take Derpy to her appointment? Soarin asked.
"If Derpy will let me, I'll take her." Twilight answered. They looked at the clock, and it read two forty five.
"I trust Twilight enough to take me, you see if you can find Rainbow Dash." Derpy said. The other two nodded their heads in agreement. Soarin flew off to find Rainbow and then the mares left to go see what's wrong with Derpy. But the question is, will it work? Will everything come together like they hope?
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Two thirty sounds a lot like "tooth hurty". ('Tis a reference to a joke)
2774748 I see what you did there
I found it rather funny.
Ok So I'll ask you, What should I do for my next chapter? Soarin finding Dash, or Twilight and Derpy going to see Colgate. Because apparently. No one is reading the authors notes and or answers
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Soarin finding Dash would be a better option as the story has been focusing on Derpy the most so far, and focusing on Soarin and Dash would be a great change of pace. (Variety is the spice of life after all...)
(P.S. Sorry for taking so long, I have been quite busy.)
2802507 That's fine. I think it would be better, considering I had made chapter 7 was so short. Thanks. You just made it easier.
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You're welcome. I'm just glad I could help.
2802967 stick around, I may need you again.
2803001
Will do my good friend, will do.
2803018 thank you! Sweet Celesta THANK YOU!
2803154
You are very welcome. I am happy to help however I can.
(But first I need to get some sleep)
2803177 sleep is important. You should probably get some.
2803211
Okay, I will be back in about 8-12 hours.
2803235 ok goodnight!
Rainbow Dash, acting all brave for Derpy, only to chicken out! Tsk, tsk.