Its not THAT bad it was nice!! really really short though. i feel like more couldve been done with it. the whole story had the potential to be a lot longer if you wouldve put more detail in the work and actually described the story itself from the characters, the whole time it felt like a giant narration that was skipping major points in the story(well im not a writer so i shouldnt judge anyways i liked the idea i just wish more couldve been done, i could think of several different scenarios that couldve been better though) good job, loved it ableit to short.

hmmmmmm, the pain Nightmare went through........i can feel it

Aww... It would have been nice if Nightmare would have realized her weaknesses and changed for the better

You did make me laugh quite a bit, though. God damn you.
"I poop from there!"
"Not tonight you don't"

you know, if nightmare stayed with the hate, then the human could have pulled the "you're going to bear my children" card, that would have been crushing for her...

As I always say, "No means yes, and yes means anal."