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Apple Bloom was the leader of the Cutie Mark Crusaders club. They were fillies then. But now, 10 years later, Apple Bloom is all grown up now and in college, and she gets a letter from Princess Celestia. Apple Bloom discovers that she is royalty, becomes an Alicorn, and her friends show her how to fly and use magic. But then she has second thoughts on accepting the fact that she's now an Alicorn.
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Good going! The beginning is always the hard part.
I'm interested to see how this plays out. Happy writing!
Pretty good, but where's Scootaloo? Is it mentioned later or something? And what's up with the whole 'snob' thing?
Somebody added my story to some group! Yay!
Oh, and whoever keeps disliking my stories for the PROLOGUE, WHICH IS NOT EVEN THE STORY YET...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 
EDIT: I take that back. I bet it was the description that made them dislike it.
2275828 Scootaloo will be one of the main characters in the next chapter. Scootaloo did not show up in the prologue because they do not know if Scootaloo goes to the college. They will find out. Also, what snob thing?
2275721 Thank you! I totally agree that the beginning is the hard part. Nothing really seems to happen in a prologue, either... This will be updated in at least a day.
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I thought snob=Stuck up. My bad if you had a different meaning.
2276089 In this case, "stuck up" means a different thing. Sweetie (or me, whatever) was saying she felt like ponies were stuck doing the same thing for the rest of their life and they are stuck with only one talent. My bad
Good beginning, I have mixed feelings about yet another alicorn though, 4 is to many if you ask me.
But, its a really amazing start! Keep writing, I am dying to find out what happens next!!!
2276211 Thank you for the comment, and like I said, this might not update for at least a day. Also, I think you mean 5
Because there was Celestia, Luna, Cadence, and Twilight. If you add Apple Bloom, that's five. 
A good start to a story that looks great already. WASHED.
oops...no wait, WATCHED.
>>PrincessAmazingPony Ehh, I get it. I do wordplay and twists all the time.
>>Night Howl With Princess Bloom, that makes 5 alicorns.
I'm a true brony, not a clopper.
2276330 Heh, xD Thank you so much!
Doesn't the second chapter remind you of that Spongebob Squarepants episode when Patrick finds out he's royalty? I didn't even realize that until I reread this before publishing this chapter!
Also, UPDATED 20 HOURS EARLY! *LOL*
Kinda sloppy, but enjoyable. Please continue.
2276932 Thank you
Well, guys, the third chapter is up. I hope you enjoy!
Yeah I won't lie I had a massive grin accross my face as I read this chapter.
2277990 Which chapter?
EDIT: Nvm. xD
Random and a bit rushed, but I like it. Also you might wanna change ancester to ancestor.
Apple Bloom is somewhat accepting the fact that she is a decedent of this "Princess Golden Apple" far to rapidly. And some others points seems a bit rushed too.
Still enjoyable, but deserves more work on it.
The explanation of how she became an alicorn is too contrived.
It is phony and seems like a bad imagination.
It is better not to have any explanation then a bad one. There is nothing wrong with the idea of
becomming an alicorn and God knows I love CMC alicorns but this is really not a good substitute.
Your spelling isn't terrible so that is one plus, seriusly your explanations, its painful, and your descriptions, not much better.
2278037 actually all of them
2278714 Thank you for catching that error. I will fix it.
) but I understand. In my future stories, I will try to put in a bit more detail. 
2278722 Thank you, I am not a fan of too much detail though, because too much detail could bore the heck out of people. But I understand what you are saying. I might be able to edit the story out a little.
2278885 Thanks for the criticism. I am trying to get my stories a little better than my last ones (God knows it isn't easy for me), so thank you! Also, if you'd like, you could help me with the description a little. Actually, this story's ratings is one of my best (22 likes, 3 dislikes
2279052 Oh.
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Well I think I was a little hard with my feelings about your description. It is more plain then anything else. However your explanation for how and why she becomes an alicorn is horribly and just plain dumb.
Let me give you a suggestion, if you can't think of a good explanation, and don't want Apple Bloom herself to gruble in it you could just skip the whole first part. perhaps her having been so for a while (maybe her whole life) and just been hiding it. Then something happens and her secret is revealed so she has to deal with it,
OR
she is in a Peter Parker/Spiderman situation, where her alicorn self is a secret masked identity superhero that saves the world against mad supervillains, while at the same time having her earthpony persona attend collage with all the problems that entails. Perhaps you can add the twist that she still dosn't have a cutiemark making her subject for mockery.
This is just a suggestion, you can go a tons of different routes but you need to get rid of the lame explenation that "late cutiemark=alicorn" "godday princess"
I love how they talk so casually about burning themselves to a crisp.
2280442 That was deliberate xD
I'm sorry "Chapter 4- The Restaurant Experience as an Alicorn" was not as good. This one was kind of rushed, because I really needed to update cuz' I was getting so crazy because I hadn't updated today. So I did. It was rushed. That's all I have to say
How coincidental is that? With all the greats and the third offspring. Is that even possible?
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meeeh its ok, you dont need to rush on the chapters because one due lane, do them the best you can and that would be the best you can do for the readers
keep it up
Steak?! Meatballs?! Hamburgers?! They're ponies, they don't eat meat!
2287578 Fanfiction. In my world, they do
2287069 Waaiiit, I was gonna change that.
I was gonna switch the "great-great-great-great-great-great grandchild's third offspring" to Apple Bloom's ancestor being a princess, Apple Bloom will become one because she was a descendant of royalty.
Well, guys, Apple Bloom's Weird New Life is now COMPLETE!
This is a great story. I think the ending was perfect.
3647064 Thanks. This story was published on the 16th of March, and I have no idea how people-- err, ponies-- still see it.