• Member Since 23rd Feb, 2013
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Tower of 0


Here in my Library, I want to craft stories.

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An ordinary brony finds himself in Equestria. Which raises many questions, the biggest question of which was what exactly happened to bring him there.

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 6 )

Seems a little uninteresting at first. Think about making the description of the character AFTER we get some action. Also, try and proofread some, as I am noticing misuses of words and grammatical and spelling errors. Make paragraphs shorter, I suppose (interests people like me with ADHD who HATE long paragraphs). Work on your writing style some also! Good Luck!:pinkiehappy:

2352291 I figured, my computer hates some letters.

Why does this story have so many dislikes? I mean, it can't be that bad, right? ...Right?

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