An ordinary brony finds himself in Equestria. Which raises many questions, the biggest question of which was what exactly happened to bring him there.
Here in my Library, I want to craft stories.
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Seems a little uninteresting at first. Think about making the description of the character AFTER we get some action. Also, try and proofread some, as I am noticing misuses of words and grammatical and spelling errors. Make paragraphs shorter, I suppose (interests people like me with ADHD who HATE long paragraphs). Work on your writing style some also! Good Luck!
*raises
2352063 And where do you see that?
2352145 Story intro
2352291 I figured, my computer hates some letters.
Why does this story have so many dislikes? I mean, it can't be that bad, right? ...Right?