A rift between universes has opened up, unleashing a new evil into the world of Equestria. They plan to seize this utopia and all of the magical energy within it. Only three brave fillies have the power to stop them.
Heaven help us...
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What's with the hooflets already!? The suspense is killing me!
Not a bad start at all. You've already got one reader wanting more so clearly it's working. Keep it up with what you have here and you've got the entire world to mould into whatever you wish... a good story being the preferable outcome.
This has rather good potential. Please continue.
Aye liek dis storee.
But really, I don't see any problems with the prose, so you're good on that. I do find myself unable to take the story seriously, but seeing as it's tagged as comedy, I'd assume that's not really a big priority on your agenda. However, I will say that I'm interested. Anything that is guaranteed to ensure shenanigans has my attention, and this has shenanigans written all over it... and in it.
I can't wait to see where this goes
So, Sweetie Belle can control the weather? Awesome!
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