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Rainbow Dash had always acted rough and tough, and that's how she liked it. Always the strongest in the group, fitting in perfectly with the colts and stallions. Until a Wonderbolt named Soarin came along and turned that all upside down.

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Comments ( 52 )

Great story has huge potential but for goodness's sake, separate the paragraphs. Just makes it very hard to read and made me not want to finish it. You mimight need an editor would help also and I hate to be a jerk but I had to vote thumbs down. Maybe I could help I'm not the best but I can catch the basics.

2250660 Thanks for the feedback. I'll edit it as soon as I can. :twilightsmile: Will you vote it up if I do? :3 PS. I don't know about that editing thing... .-. (PPS, might***)

I like it so far

2251448

If you fix it then maybe:scootangel:

I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Though I really loved the last one you did of the two and I'm upset it's gone but o well

So when is chapter 2 coming out :D I'm so exited:twilightsmile:

2276137 When I have the time and motivation to type. ._. Not very soon, though, I guess. Next chapter will have Thunderlane, by the way. ;)

Comment posted by wolflover418 deleted Mar 18th, 2013

I can't wait no longer for chapter 2 I waited for like 5 months now :fluttercry: soo when are you gonna make chapter 2 and please makae it fast and good no preshure but you got us all in a cliff hanger. Right now im thinking you fell like trollestia :trollestia: But then yet no preshure take your time and have good ideas I hope you make chapter 2 soon

Huh... Really? Soarin as a Hoity Toity?

Considering how that guy eats pie, I find it hard to follow.

:pinkiehappy: loved it :pinkiehappy:
:twilightsmile: PLEASE MAKE MORE !!!!! :twilightsmile:

Please sir, can we have some more?:scootangel:

i like the chapter :]

Loved it
Can you pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls write more?!?!?!?!?!?!?!!?!?!?!??!?!?!??!?!?!?!?!??!:scootangel:
continue pls...:moustache:

2338888 I don't see how Hoity Toity comes in....? :trixieshiftright:

2339611 yus, mi again SURPRISE T__T

2344020. -_- well ur a constant downer...

2344959 *smile alert!* *smile alert!* "We have ourselves a flipflop" code 666

this was awesome did dash faint or something?. But I don't care it's enofe to keep my happy and I thought it was a great chapter. and i'll be waiting for hapter 3 and im gonna be ready so keep it up :rainbowdetermined2:

I think this is counted as a dumb question but...what does "on hiatus" mean? Im kinda new... y'know...

2563090 It means that it's "on hold". Like, the chances of me updating are really small. Updates will be few, yeah?

Me like this:heart:Me want more:rainbowwild:

i like how your the first..no, second person to made soarin a duche [thunbs up braw]

Sorry I Have to say this

I wanna get Rarity fat marshmallow flank and drive a stick through it, put it over a fire and cook it till its a golden brown.ut it between to wafers and eat to my hearts content! Hell that fat bitches flank could feed all of Etheopia for a month!

2634048 you heard me! I hate Ra- no she doesn't even deserve a capital letter- rarity, I hate her to the point I want to burn her alive!

2634058 lmfao, in this story...YUSSS!!! BURN BITCH

Can u make the rest please I wanted it to be about soarin and rainbowdash

I love this story! Make more!:pinkiehappy:

man its so cool..make more!!

I was just thinking about this story and then I thought..could you write more? Its intresting

Plzzz continue i read this and was like :pinkiegasp::pinkiecrazy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

I was going through my favorites and saw this.. What ever happened to it? It had so much potential -.-

2563090 It means the story is paused for the time being.

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Forget chapter two what about the "incomplete" status!?!!?!!

WHY MUST EVERY GOOD STORY END INCOMPLETE :fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry:

Oooooo. What happens next? This is getting intense. I would love to know what the situation would be at the triple G if you know what I mean.

update please continueeeeeeee I am intrigued, I need to know what will happen

Wow. Never knew Soarin could be a snob. That certainly makes Dash ticked off. And what’s worse is that Soarin chose Rarity for that matter. I have no words for how that makes him an ass. Not you and your writing, just Soarin. I love the story so far. Please update.

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Moral of the story: Never read the commens before reading the first chapter. :rainbowlaugh:

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