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Twilight begins to learn more about her alicorn nature, and winds up discovering something about Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy that catches her off guard.
Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy have always been especially close. Few ponies can come up with a reasonable explanation for this. On the outside, it would be hard to imagine them being any more different.
However, on the inside, they couldn't be more alike.
They've always been the perfect match. Always.

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Comments ( 24 )

That was a rather original take on Fluttershy and Dash's relationship. It's quite interesting. :yay:
However, Spike is rather... how do I put this nicely... :pinkiesick::raritycry::fluttershbad::twilightoops::moustache: Yeah.

:rainbowderp: I love this idea please continue

Aw, this was a great story about Fluttershy and Dashie's relatioship. :heart:

More? More. Moar. MOAR. MOAR! MOAR!!! :flutterrage::flutterrage:

This chapter was funny and heart touching. It was awsome all around. Yeah there are some spelling mistakes but I can look past them becauses the story is so awsome.:rainbowdetermined2::rainbowlaugh:

This Story.. So awesome :rainbowkiss:!

Loved this. "That if she ever needed her kidney back, I'd give it up in a heartbeat." All the feels, bro. All the feels.

Well shit, if the Wonderbolts are anything like the military here, Rainbow has no chance. They like their pilots to have two working kidneys, not one transplant.

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Given how difficult it is to survive a transplant as I've shown here, I doubt that's a major concern.

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I just think it would make it more of a concern. But I am thinking from a modern military point of view where you do not want a pilot who you have invested millions of dollars on to fall ill do to a preexisting condition.

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Whereas, in the case of Equestria, the individual Pegasus has invested most of their life and energies into becoming a Wonderbolt, and the Wonderbolts invest a few outfits and a few weeks of extra training.

Total investment on the part of the candidate: approx. 3,000,000 bits
Approx. investment on the part of the Wonderbolts: 70 bits

...I don't think they care about pre-existing conditions.

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Watching a Wonderbolt have a conniption in mid air: Priceless.

What's in your saddlebag?
Neighsa, it's everywhere you should be!

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:rainbowlaugh::rainbowwild:

There are some things money can't buy.
For everything else, there's Princess Card.

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Equestria Express
Don't leave your cottage without it.

CanterlotOne
What's in your saddlebag!
*said by Diamond Dog*

I loved this story. The title was retroactively brilliant, and that last line from Rainbow was one of the most powerful perfectly-in-character line for Rainbow I've seen.

I came for Flutterdash shipping and for once I'm totally fine that it's friendshipping instead. This was an incredibly moving story, especially with that last line. On the lighter side of things:

The book was titled, 'The Captive Princess', and the cover art showed a dragon encircling a royal unicorn rather... suggestively.

That's an interesting book you got there Rares :trollestia: My Sparity senses are tingling.

3331324 I see a molestia.:trollestia:

M-m-my-my feels:rainbowderp:! You broke them!:raritycry::raritydespair::yay::moustache::moustache::fluttercry::fluttercry::pinkiesad2::pinkiesad2::moustache::twilightblush::raritycry::twilightoops:

A clever feels read.

Wow. Very feels-y, but that just makes it an even nicer read. As a heart transplant patient, it hit me pretty deeply, too. Immunosuppression (anti-rejection drugs and whatnot) can cause a lot of issues post-transplant, that's why I've gotta be careful.
And Rainbow's last line of the story. Dammit, if that doesn't solidify her loyalty, I dunno what does. Awesome job with this one.

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Glad you enjoyed it!

wow..i just...i dont even have words for this...or at least none that are good enough

Is someone chopping onions nearby?

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