Follow Your Heart
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic © Hasbro & Lauren Faust
By: Blue Spark
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~Terra Bolt~
THIS CHAPTER HAS BEEN EDITED, IF YOU HAVE READ IT BEFORE I ADVISE THAT YOU READ IT AGAIN IN CASE YOU MISS SOMETHING
I wonder why I can't go to school? I dunno why most kids are glad that they don't go to school but I'm not. Sure it gets hard at times but that's where all my friends are! Christian, Alex, Blake... Even Shelby! Sure she's a girl and all the other boys say girls have cooties but she's really nice! She's my best friend. I even hear she likes My Little Pony! Though I don't know why Conor and Axel don't want me to tell people though... Something to do with me being made fun of but I don't think my friends would do that- That's a big dog...
"Hey Momma, look how big that dog is!" I shout as I tried to lift myself up more in my booster seat to get a better view of the really big dog. I always wanted a really big dog, I mean, think of how cool it would be to ride one like a horse!!!
Wait a second...
Momma looks at where I'm gesturing and smiles. I really like it when she smiles, it makes me feel happy that, well, that she's happy too.
"You're right, it is a pretty big dog." She then turns her head to focus back on the road while I try to get settled back down in my booster.
Dogs are the coolest animal ever! They're loyal, great companions, always there for you; heck, Applejack has a dog too and she's the best pony in the whole world! *GASP* Maybe I can get one too!?
"Mommy, can I have a puppy?" I ask while trying to use what my brothers call anime eyes or something and look as cute as possible. Parents always get the cute child whatever they want in the cartoons when they pulled this off.
She pauses for a moment and looks like she's thinking about it.
“No.”
Huh, guess I was doing it wrong.
She sees my disappointed look and quickly replies.“I think that there are enough animals in the house as it is." She chuckles a little at the end.
"We have animals in the house? I thought we didn't have any pets." I said while I stared at her suspiciously.
Maybe she got me a dog and was hiding it from me!? That must be it!!!
She takes in a sharp intake of breath and I can see her eyes grow wide from the rear view mirror.
"Honey... Do you know what a pony is?" She asks slowly.
Ignoring the question now, huh? I shrug it off and decide to ask about it later as I think over what she asked. I think this is one of those "deep" questions that Axel told me about. He says you need to think hard on the answer.
“Hmmmmmmmmmmm...” I mumble as I stroke my beard.
Okay, well, I don't have a beard yet but give me a few days. Dad can grow one in three I think... Look! I can already feel the the fuzz on my chin! Nope, wait, that's fur...
Well drat.
"I think... A pony is a small, magical horse that usually lives in Equestrian. They are really nice and don't like to be mean. They don't eat any meat and can eat flowers. And you can either be an Earth-Pony, Unicorn, or Pegasus." I finish off my thought with a nod, I think I described ponies pretty well.
I have the strange feeling I forgot one though...
She lets out a sigh and shakes her head.
"That wasn't exactly where I was going with this but... Maybe I should have one of your brothers do this."
"Do what?" What does she need to ask my brothers about?
"Terry, sweetie, not everyone knows what a pony is, I don't know what a pony is, and until they do know they might assume that you're, well, animals."
"Technically, people are animals too." I point out smugly.
"What I mean is, you aren't human anymore. People are going to look at you differently and because of that they are going to judge you-"
"Like rakeism?" I hear that's a bad word.
"What?" She blinks and looks back with a confused expression.
"You know, when people hate on other people because they're a different color?" I think that's how it was... Or was it when you rake the front lawn?
"Do you mean racism?" She asked, sounding surprised.
I nod in response.
"How do you know about that?"
"Well, I asked Axel why there were mostly Unicorns in Canterlot instead of Pegasi or Earth Ponies."
She looked over at me, as if expecting me to say something.
...
What? Why is she staring at me? Is there something on my face!? *GASP!* DID I JUST GROW A HORN!? CAN I DO MAGIC NOW!?
A quick glance up does confirm that I did NOT spontaneously grow a horn.
So much for wanting to grow up as Harry Potter...
"And?"
"And what?"
"And what does Unicorns, Earth Ponies and Pegasi have to do with racism?”
"Oh! Well, Axel said that all the Unicorns were jerks and because no other pony wanted to be around them so most of them left Canterlot."
"I don't quite think that's really the correct-"
"And the reason they were being meanie pants in the first place was because they thought Unicorns were better than any other race, next to Alicorns, because pants." I take a deep breath after that, also, talking non stop makes me thirsty. Either way though, I think that sentence would make Pinkie proud. I've been practicing my speaking in long sentences talk too.
She blinks for a second before nodding.
"Alright, I guess that sorta makes sense?" She pauses for a moment before another thought crosses her mind.
"I notice that Spencer and Chase have either wings or a horn, I'm guessing that they'll eventually be able to fly and... Use magic?" She threw a questioning glance.
"Yeah, Spencer will be able to fly, move clouds, and control lightning! Chase will be able to cast spells, levitate objects, and all other sorts of cool stuff like teleporting!"
Mom stares at me in shock.
"Really? Telepor-"
BEEP!
Her sentence is left unsaid as she makes a full blown stop, the car dangerously jerking forward and I have hold on for dear life as a car goes speeding past us from the light we were in. Mom rolls down the window and is about to shout at the car but stops short as it begins to dangerously swerve. We watched in growing horror as we see the car hit the sidewalk, sending it flying and flipping it over on its back. We sit there for a minute before I decide to break the silence.
"That... Looks SO cool! Can we make our car do that!?" I tried to get a better look at the other car in my seat.
Mom ignores the question as she is digging around in her purse for something. I glance around at the other drivers and people at the street to and they all have their cell phones out as well, some talking on them while others are taking pictures. I hear a Mom say something under her breath and I decide to direct my attention towards her.
"It looks like the emergency line is busy but judging from all the commotion and people with phones out help is already on the way."
She continues the car on it's way at a more cautious pace, a few other people were continuing with their day too but would glance every now and then at the wreckage. There wasn't much they could do anyway, no one there was a doctor. As we move past the car I take one last look at the wreckage.
And inside of it was a pony.
Or at least I think it was a pony... I couldn't quite tell what kind of pony it is but I think it's a pony because of how brightly colored the person in the driving seat was.
"Hey Mom."
"Yes sweetie?"
"I think the driver was a pony."
She sits there but I could see the surprise on her face. She glances at me for a moment and the look quickly shifts to worry. She reaches over a hand and runs her fingers through my mane. I can easily tell that she's upset.
"Momma? Are you gonna be okay?"
She takes a quick intake of breath and nods but doesn't say anything.
The rest of the car ride was in silence.
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I was trotting in a field full of tall green grass and wild flowers with my dog when I felt a sudden lurch. A moment later I
find myself rubbing my eyes and trying to get a good look at my surroundings. It took me a second to realize that I was in the car and a glance up from my booster seat confirmed that we just entered a parking lot somewhere. I soon felt another bump jerk me fully awake, looks like it was caused by some of the speed bumps that stores put up.
We soon came to a stop and Mom got out of the car. I tried to undue my seatbelt but for some odd reason I can't press the switch. I grunt in frustration as I continue with renewed vigor, not noticing Momma opening my door.
“Here, let me.” She reached over and began to undue my seatbelt.
“No, I got it!”
“Terry, look at me.” I kept fussing with the button box thingie. “Terry, stop.”
“But I-”
“No.” My eyes shrank and I gulped as I heard THAT voice.
The one voice that you know to never, EVER, go against.
“Yes Momma...” I said sadly as she leans over and releases me from the booster seat.
She sighs and looks at me sadly while I stare at the floor.
“Look, Terry, I'm sorry for being strict with you but there are some things you just can't do anymore by yourself now.”
“But I was able to get myself out yesterday...” I Whine.
She shakes her head.
“You were a human then, you are a pony now. Because of that you'll learn that maybe there are some things that you can't do now that you were able to do before.” I look at my hooves as I hear this and contemplate on the meaning.
Now that I think about it, maybe being a pony isn't such a good thing...
I sniff a little, afraid of any other fun stuff that I won't be able to do anymore.
“But...” Momma grabs my chin and lifts my face to look at hers, wiping away an excess tear in the process.
“I'm sure there are many more things that you can do that you weren't able to do before.” She rubs my hair and steps back, offering a hand to help me down.
“Think not on what you can't do, but what you can do and focus on that instead.”
I reach out a hoof and she holds it as I make the jump down from the car.
“And know that either way I will be with you every step of the way.”
I stand there and smile, knowing that she'll be with me most of the way.
As we make our way over my Mom grabs a cart and we make our way in.
There wasn't a car crash before, was there?
Anyway, I wanted a new episode, not a remake of already existing...
I'm sad :-(
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Sorry, I just needed to change something to this part. :(
Some associates of mine agreed with me that I had Terry act way too young.
Another thing is that I added a little bit more to the chapter; instead of ending at the car crash I extended it a little.
I'm sorry but it's been hard getting myself to write due to lack of motivation and some stuff that keeps happening.
Sorry for the disappointment. :(
so wlamart? grocery store? target? animal supply store?
2990720
Here's a hint.
It's what the brothers (Twins) say is the greatest store on the planet.
(Hint: It was the store in a movie called "Neighborhood Watch".
Hmn...Not much to say....It doesn't appear very different stylistically...But hey! What do I know? It's still interesting either way.
2992270
I knew editing it would make it better.
Glad to know it worked. :)
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It's slightly different because previously Terry sounded more younger...
Truth be told, when I was writing this chapter I was thinking of my younger cousin, but...
Well, he's 4, not 9, so that might have been what was wrong. :/
2992344 Eeyup...by the by....you shouldn't use the word more in that sentence....it would be much, or just plain younger....Do you need an editor?
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Yes, I could probably use one but I'm so lazy writing chapters that I'm not sure if it would be worth it...
I have an idea for what could happen next but I'm tapped out on inspiration.
Though maybe an editor would help with both my troubled writing and inspiration.
A person to share ideas with, perhaps?
Would you be up to the task?
2992472 I don't know much about the inspiration part of the job, but I can troubleshoot...I don't mind helping you out, but I don't think I'd be a great editor...(especially since I don't have much experience at the job), but if you ever need a proofreader/early reviewer-critic, I'm happy to help, especially if you want to share ideas... I think you might want to ask Samaru about the editing though.
2992498
Samaru?
As in Samaru163?
So you both know each other then?
2992270
IkioStar says to talk to you if I am looking for an editor.
Would you be able to help me if I asked?
2992609 Sort of....I tend to hook my reviews next to his on occasion...I guess you could say we're acquaintances...
2992623
Ah, that makes sense.
2992651
A letter you say?
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Would this suffice?
She has brought you the letter.
2992664 My god...best derpy picture I have seen yet....
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I randomly found it on the internet so I thought it would be perfect for this situation. XD
2992678
Thank you, I'll make sure to do so...
Once I have them. -_-
Gawd I'm so lazy... XD
2992842 Its not like Samaru isn't getting anything out of the editing though...He gets a sneak peek. Still, my offer stands, you need someone to bounce ideas off of, I'm happy to help.
2992938
Thanks, I'll make sure to fill you in later when I have the time to.
2993124 Ce ok. I'll be off now. Things to do, fanfiction to read, you know how it is.
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Lol, yeah.
Actually...
That's kinda what screws me over most of the time when I am trying to work too... -_-
2993227 Patience friend...If you truly want to keep your mind occupied though, you could work with others on it...A sort of bonding exercise with friends? I just wait till I get in the mood though... Still...I'm writing for my pleasure, so it doesn't exactly work the same way as writing for work....which I could do...just...less deadlines....
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This is actually a colab with T00SOBER but at the moment I'm a little behind on reading his own fic.
Furthermore, he's been busy recently and I'm not sure where either of our fic are going...
You're probably right though, if I did this with close friend then this would be more fun.
Too bad none of my close friends are into MLP...
2993355 Yeah...Hmn...Why don't you go talk to T00S0BER and get your questioned answered? Surely it could help, correct? And if its a collab, your characters have to meet at some point...or is that a crossover? Hmn...And it might even help stimulate some of your own ideas as well. ...Hmn...you could probably connect via something like Skype, and get things done faster too...give the feeling that you are with friends...Hmn....Yeah...well, that's what I would do...it may not be the best thing, but if I wanted to force myself to write without concrete inspiration, that's what I'd do.
I don't even remember what the old chapter was like, that's how big the shadow of this is. Good job!
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No problem at all. Don't push yourself too much, no need to do so.
I trust in you bro, you can do it!
2993385 he hasn't updated in a very long time. Now is as good as any other time to catch up. Honestly since he's too busy to progress you should see if he would be alright with you taking over for a small time with a list of whatever you should avoid doing. That way you can carry on, and avoid ruining his plans at the same time.
It's nice to see this update, by the way.
2997753 I couldn't get into it though...while I might be able to write a separate story, both T00S0BER Blue Spark have vastly different styles and ideas than my own. I doubt I could write something with them and come up with something even close to what they do. I've always been a much darker writer, even before coming to fimfiction, and trying to write something completely opposite is beyond me. If you want evidence you should just look at this place, and try to find similarities in style.
Additionally, while I might like their stories, it isn't very comparative to the stuff I like most, which I'm more likely to write stuff similar to. If I could find someone wanting a break with their stuff that was a decent enough writer, I might recommend them to apply for the job though. So while I might be able to scout for the position, I'm not going to go out of my way to get someone to fill the readers void.
2998181 Eheh, ahhh... I'm afraid I meant that for Blue. My apologies.
2998255 Blue already stated his problems....Hmn...But most of it still applies.
2997753
*Sigh
All I can do is apologize for being a lazy bastard.
I'm sorry, I'll see what I can do to look for inspiration.
2998376 no need to think like that, you'll just burn yourself out like PoorYorick.
Only write when you feel like doing so, otherwise it becomes more work than fun and that's not good for anybody.