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Mad Hattie

I write things. Sometimes they make sense.


If Celestia is God, then who are her Angels? Based on Cupcakes by Sgt. Sprinkles: In the aftermath that follows the tragedy at Sugarcube Corner, the Elements of Harmony are lost and broken. However, one night, Luna visits Twilight's dreams to inform her of a powerful resurrection spell. When Dash returns, she isn't the pony that her friends remember and what's more, an 'angel' has followed her into the living realm.

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 97 )

Faved, looking foward to the next chapter :twilightblush:

Well I'd Say this looks good from a readers point of view. I look forward to more.:pinkiecrazy:

God, Cupcakes was freaky. I skipped to the end after Pinkie chopped off Dashes wings.

more please! very interesting so far!

you arent writing this to hate on pinkie right? alot of people seem to write cupcakes stories just to hate on her.

Well I am rather looking forward to what comes next.

I got to admit cupcakes was a good fic but Srgt. Sprinkles....

Beautifully written. I'm probably only saying that because I haven't actually read cupcakes :unsuresweetie:
Just some side stories and youtube videos :twilightsheepish:


You could try and write something more imaginative and creative, but I won't judge this fic until i've read it, which will be never. Apparently you've got some decent ratings, though, so good luck with that.

While I don't generally approve of of cupcake inspired fics, this seems will written, and you look like you want to head somewhere with this.

Im gonna keep on offhand view for now,

I loved it! The emotions that the characters went through seem accurate for their personality. I wanna know more about Pinkie! :pinkiecrazy:

Moar pink anima Diane pie:pinkiecrazy:

Cupcakes messed me up.....but this fiction I actually like.....well played

I don't mean to be stereotypical, but....
A cupcakes sequel that looks to be starting out....good?
Don't get me wrong, there are good cupcakes sequels, but Sturgeon's Law works with it a lot.

Anyway, liked it, waiting for more, hope it goes well, all that jazz.

Off to a good start. I hope you continue this.

This is really good!

I'm on board.

This caught my interest. Please continue. :twilightsmile:

Why do I have the feeling that Celestia considers that spell to be forbidden magic, which is why she didn't say anything about it?

Yikes!! Dash is totally gonna hate Pinkie's guts!!!:pinkiegasp:

I'm just gonna point out that having the gore warning in the authors notes is a bit pointless as the gore has already passed...
Anyway nice chapter and I'm already guessing that something is going to go wrong in the spell casting!

A 'night' necromantic spell to bring back the dead, cast on a being that embodies one of the greatest magical sources of all time which could interfere with a spell, combined with that cover image... What could possibly go wrong with this?

This can't possible go wrong! I'm betting on Rainbow Dash coming back as a Terminator and killing EVERYTHING.

2239204 Pinkie's gut are still in her body. Dashie's however, are hanging by her side because the carrage hit a rock.

When I saw the title, I thought you mean't the game. But this is pretty good! :pinkiesmile:

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I stated my distaste for these kinds of fics, and then wished him luck at the end

Cry harder

My bet is that it is a highly advanced form of necromancy, where deviation results in a more standard form of undead, possibly a type of lich because the spell would have to bind the soul to truly resurrect Rainbow Dash.

*See story:smiles, reads:grins, talks about resurrection spell: aww it got happy*
"Ha ha ha ha, puny pony lover! HATER is the strongest there is!!!"

What the hell Is Wrong. With. Me.

Good story, this is ether going to end kinda good or end really bad. And it's all pinkies fault , I swear, some one write a story NOW where pinkie gets justic , batman style.


Mr. Pones is best commenter
Also may I mention that :twilightangry2: should be called :butthurt1: because it appears in 96% of butthurt comments

anyway yeah sure i like this so far
it's reasonably good
i'll keep an eye on it

Something tells me Dash is gonna be out for blood when she comes back.

The perfect plan. Jesus, no. Next chapter is called "The Resurrection"? What the hell is that supposed to me? Is that a clue or something?

It shouldn't hurt spike to much because if he can withstand swimming in lava, he shouldn't at all really. :twilightsmile:

Why was I not notified of this? :facehoof:
I'm not judging anyone. Sorry if I offended you Parasprite. :fluttershysad:
Anyway, the story is really good. Don't you agree? :twilightsmile:

I haven't read a Cupcakes spin-off since "the Cupcake Chronicles" (which was fantastic) so I'm eager to find out where you take this. The quality seems quite good so far as I can tell, and the premise is interesting. I think I'll keep an eye on this - nice work :pinkiehappy:

Huh, maybe that icon is a bit inappropriate...uh, have a happy Twilight instead :twilightsmile:

want more, if that's ok with you.:fluttershysad:

Hurry make more before I die!!!

Comment posted by Poyoarya deleted Feb 3rd, 2019

Huzzaah! Now the major plot of the story can be accomplished :)

Thy princess approves!
Thou hast great writing talent.
Pray contine with thy story hoof servant.

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