Princess Twilight Sparkle has found plenty of time to spend with her friends; Rainbow Dash cannot deny that, yet there is still something bothering her that she can't quite express.
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feels....
even more feels......
nice. :D
2228152
it's not supposed to make everypony cry!
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Feels? Where be the feels? I think this was lovely and sweet and amazing, but no feels have been seen for me anywhere!
Hm... pretty good.
If this has Alicorn Twilight, it should use the tag for that, not the old Twilight tag.
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my thoughts exactly. Silly ponies.
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Thank you, I haven't seen that tag used at all, didn't even cross my mind!
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Thanks, I really appreciate it. ^^;
A very nice little work you have here, especially since it left me satisfied but craving more. Very well done.
Also, your bio says to please be a critic. So if you like (and if I find the time), I can analyze and critique this; it would mostly contain praise on things done well and things I think could have been done better, but until I start analyzing I cannot be sure. Thanks for the enjoyment of this little fic!
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I'd really appreciate that! Most of my experience with writing is technical documentation and argumentative essays, a good analysis of what works and doesn't work would be awesome! If you go through with it, be sure to send me a request on my DeviantArt page and I can make some art for you.
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I don't think it will end up being any kind of a formal essay where I analyze this–mostly since I usually only make "professional" style essays when I need to, I am lazy in writing something I feel doesn't matter–but when I find time, and hopefully if I remember, I will write it, but like I said before, I have no idea how it will turn out. Anyways, I will try to write it, the fan art offer is a nice incentive as well–plus I like your art–but I can make no promises, I tend to get busy, which can lead to forgetting things. Nonetheless, I should be able to make it (hopefully).
Any errors in my writing are caused by my phone :/
You know, because it is never the user's fault. (Sarcasm)
I'm amazed... this story was for sure one of those I really enjoyed and loved.
i saw someone said "where are the feels?" Well, perhaps it might soudns pretencious, but I found them, and they are touching.
You did an amazing job, what calls more my atention, is that there was no need for a kiss or an "I love you "
Congratulations for such a nice and well redacted work :)
P.S. My apologies if I have any mistakes, english is not my natural language
Cute.
You have this huge confession scene lined up then you go NOPE, any they end up just sharing a(nother) moment together.
Just Cute.
I enjoyed that. :D
I am deeply touched by this story. So much meaning, so much to gain, all wrapped up in a fluffy, warm, carefree package. Bravo.
*gets hit by the feels truck* AAAA
Curse you and this masterpiece.
SEQUEL
SEQUEL
SEQUEL
SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!