A New Home

by APoeticHeart

THERE WILL BE A SEQUEL! :)

I am going to try and put the finishing touches on my final chapter today, but I wanted to take this chance to let all you, my wonderful readers that there indeed will be a sequel. :)

I have decided to let it be about one year later when Toby turns seven. Also, I plan to involve either one or two villains into it, I don't know yet, but I am certain there will be one villain in it. I am going to continue with the last chapter of "A New Home" today.

Thank you all so much again for your wonderful support and friendships. I have loved every step of writing this story, and I am glad to continue it. :)

Comments

[shenadri]

[Hunter reaper]

[APoeticHeart]

2674777>>2674747>>2674717

[Fireydude]

Nice!

What gave you the idea to change the time that passes?

[Sky Hooves]

Thank you all so much again for your wonderful support and friendships. I have loved every step of writing this story, and I am glad to continue it. :)

And We loved to read every step of your chapters.

Now, let us hear (or more read) what the others think:

"That makes you 20% cooler."

"Sweeter as a Barrel of the Sweetest Apple Pie, Sugarcube."

"Eeyup."

"You are so Cooly-Cool, I become Ice-Hoofs in your near. DON'T COME NEAR ME! I DON'T WANT TO CATCH A COLD! But a Cupcake I would Catch. Hmm... Cupcakes (Licking her lips). I bet Everypony would Love some, too. I go and get us some Cupcakes. And then we make a "THERE-WILL-BE-A-SEQUEL-OF-THE-BESTEST-STORY-EVER". I think, when I bring Muffins, Ditzy would come too."

"Pinkie, you are so Radnom!"

"Oh, Pinkie Pie."

"Muffins?"

"And I can make the dresses for the next Sequel AND the Party. That will be so FABULOUS! I think Foto Finish and Hoity Toity would LOVE the new collection of mine, what Toby had inspirated me for."

"Dont forget the BEST part! US!" "Do you think, we will become a place in the sequel?" "WHAT? But, we are the Cutiemark Crusaders. And Toby is a part of us. So we MUST come. We could be the... (all in synchro) "CUTIEMARK CRUSADERS, SEQUEL CRUSHERS! YAY!"

"Uh, uh, uh! We could have a Sleepover by Fluttershy again! With Toby that would be so MUCH MORE FUN!"

"Dont worry, my little Ponys. I have faith in the Author that, he will bring us all in the sequel." (looking strictly to APoeticHeart)

"And this Time: With even more MUSTACHE'S!"

"I only Hope, everything will be good for my precious, little one. I dont like to see him hurt... "

"Don't worry, Fluttershy. I make sure the Author will be nice to Toby." Turns around and looked angry direct in APoeticHeart's eye's "Do! You! Have! Understand! Me?"

"Why had the GREAT and POWERFUL Trixie no part in your Story? Everything would be better with me!"

"Mmmm...no."

[Bazing]

SEQUEL!

[frutineo]

Chrisallis, maybe Toby can turn her into good and you can involve a changeling, it would be nice for him to see the dark side of Equestria

[APoeticHeart]

2674913 I like that, and I have really been thinking about using Chrysaliss as the villain thanks to Mr101 as well. Hmm. I like that idea of involving a changeling. If I may ask, if you don't mind, how could I use the changeling if I involve it and Chrysaliss?

2674874 Indeed, there will be. I am just going to work more on the last chapter on this one, and try to start on the sequel.

2674870 *Looks at the CMC.* Don't worry I will include all three of you in the sequel.

*Looks at Big Mac and Fluttershy* Don't worry you two nothing too bad will happen to Toby.

Thank you always for the support Sky Hooves. Love your comment, awesome to hear from everypony. *Looks at Trixie* Don't worry, you might have a part in the sequel.

[APoeticHeart]

2674854 I just figured that I would announce the sequel while working on the final chapter so I can let everyone of my wonderful readers not hold out in suspense any longer. Also, you gave me the idea too

2674855

[Sky Hooves]

2675047

"I think you mean all FOUR of us. Toby is a Crusader, too."

"What are you? A dictionary?"

"STOP ARGUING! We had trying this out and we dont get a "Arguing Cutiemark"! "

Looking to APoeticHeart "I hope so... for YOU!" (Clatch his Hooves together and create a little earthquake)

"I'm just happy you will write more about my son. He is just a cutie!"

"It was clear you would give me a part in your sequel. I'm just to Great and Powerful!"

@frutineo
I had some Idea's
Idea 1: Maybe he can find a wounded Changeling kid (a female, maybe and NO! This is NOT the kid fom Shining Armor) in the Apple Orchard and wanted to help him. After a few Days, come's Chrysalis and is surprised from Toby, that he had helped one of her "foals".

Idea 2: He meets a Changeling foal (NO this is NOT the Son of Shining Armor, too) and plays with him in secret first. When the Other's found that out, they think first, the changeling is Controlling Toby for a "evil plan" or somthing and they try to "Rescue" Toby from the Changeling.

Idea 2.1: He meets a Changeling foal (NO this is NOT the Son of Shining Armor, too) and plays with him in secret first. When Toby hurt his Leg, the Changeling Take him o his Momma ( ). Where they heard his Story, The Changeling is Lost and dont know, where his Home is. Fluttershy Takes him in and He and Her Son become Best Friends. (Like Brothers. And Toby is the Big one^^) Then Trixie come's back to Ponyville and they find out, she is the one, that adopted the Changeling, as she Found him on one of his Travels.

[APoeticHeart]

2675091 *Looks at Sweetie Belle with a frown.* I am sorry Sweetie Belle, I meant all four of you. Please don't cry. *Nods in agreement with Applebloom and thinks for a second.* I wonder though, what would a cutie mark for arguing look like.

*Tries to hold my balance as Big Mac makes a little Earthquake.* I-I-I will keep that in mind. *Speaking through the shaking*

*Smiles at Fluttershy* Yes he is, and I know you are probably making him blush saying that.

*Looks at Trixie and nods* I will think of a good part for you. If I may ask you, oh Great and Powerful Trixie, would you like a good part, a bad part, or a semi-bad part?

Sky Hooves: I love all three of those ideas. That would be hard to decide from those three. I will pm you with a question for one of those ideas.

[Changeling-Drone]

hmmm i would like to have a chapter were toby learns about nightmare moon and then has fun with luna

[Jlargent]

I imagine that you would have Gilda as one of the villians.

[Jadders]

Queen chrysalis as a villain would be nice.

[APoeticHeart]

2675223 A good idea indeed. Something I will definitely think of while I think of what to do with the sequel, thank you.

2675227 Oh, forgot all about Gilda. Now she is a total butthole, but I might consider her as one.

2675355 Popular choice and I am definitely thinking about adding her as one.

[Jlargent]

2675428 Let's just hope that she doesn't get redeemed in season 4 otherwise it'll be a trainwreck.

[APoeticHeart]

2675470 Very true, and if she is redeemed, then I am going to faint and probably be sick.

[BrianPony]

I am so excited to hear this news officially! The last chapter I know is going to be a masterpiece.

You have done such a wonderful job with this story. It's one of my all-time favorites and I've read a lot of fics over the past six months.

THREE CHEERS FOR A POETIC HEART!

[APoeticHeart]

2675564 Aw..thank you very much. I am truly appreciative and my heart is warmed by your words.

[SK Alex]

Wow........this made feel a lot more better :)

[Bronyz4ever90]

This has probably been one of the cutest fanfics Ive read on fimfiction.net :). I do like how theirs gonna be a sequel and evil involved. Im quiet curious on what sort of person Toby will be when hes abit older, like in his teens. But one step at a time right? I hope Discord shows up more in the next one, since I think it would be intersting for Toby to be friends with the god of Chaos.

[APoeticHeart]

2675659 I am glad.

2675676 Oh, don't worry the sequel, I plan to make even better.

[Torroza]

I'm sad that the story is over soon.
It has been and is still one of the best stories i've ever read.
Only think MLD outmatches it actually.

[Lionheart1982]

I'll be looking forward for the squeal.

[APoeticHeart]

2675736 Thank you very much for your kind words and indeed MLD an amazing story.

2675779 Thank you very much, I truly appreciate it.

[Sky Hooves]

The BESTESTEST ( Only I have the COPYRIGHT for this words) chapter
in this Story is this: THERE WILL BE A SEQUEL! :)

[soulknight13]

SQUEEEEEEEEEE thank you thank you thank you there will be much rejoicing cant wait *does happy dance *

[Zekromic]

Either tonight or tomorrow THE FINAL CHAPTER

[Zekromic]

2675779you're in luck, that's just the first sequel

[Zekromic]

2675676poeticheart wrote that he's planning to make ANOTHER sequel, with a teen Toby dealing with a crush from Applebloom, Sweetie, and Silver Spoon (but who knows, he might add Scoots, Diamond Tiara, AND Baabs Seed)

[APoeticHeart]

2676192 Haha..well, thank you. Well, wait, you can't say it is the best yet, because I haven't finished the final chapter yet.

2676282 Hahaha.. always loved the happy dance.

2676286 Yes, I am going to try and finish it by tonight, I hope. Let me think, should I let Babs Seed meet Toby in the first sequel though?

[Zekromic]

2676433yeah, she should meet him in the first sequel, otherwise it'll make less sense IF she has a crush with him in the threequel

[Zekromic]

2676372yeah, shouting at Flutty was a moral event horizontal to me already

[APoeticHeart]

2676372 Oh, I am sure if Fluttershy saw this happening she would def. stand up to Gilda this time.

2676438 Very true, and I like that idea with Babs meeting Toby.

[dargondarkfire]

awesome! can't wait!

2676467
I think i can see fluttershy 'pruning' guilda's wings if she did that.

[Zekromic]

2676372though, I don't expect her to run away crying if Gilda messes with Toby. Hell, I rather deal with Death from Castlevania than a pissed Flutty

[APoeticHeart]

2676501 Oh, yes. Especially if Gilda screams at little Toby like she did to Fluttershy, oh, Fluttershy would become Momma Bear.

[dargondarkfire]

2676506
ugh i hated that boss in every single castlevania game ive ever played.

2676517
also speaking of babs. it would be interesting for her to return and find silver and diamond having personality changes.

[APoeticHeart]

2676531 Ah. that is very true. Makes you wonder how she would take it.

[APoeticHeart]

2676761 Haha.. I knew I would hit readers' feels hard when I came up with the idea for this story.

[jkreader]

2676433 ABSOLUTELY!! Let Babs meet Toby in the first part of the sequel.

[APoeticHeart]

2676862 Indeed I will.

[APoeticHeart]

2677032 Well, I am planning on it not being too stressful or chaotic for him.

[frutineo]

2675047Easy, he finds it in the caves Rainbow and the others went in the episode, "sleepless in Ponyville" make some friends, you get the idea, imagine the action, the drama, the heartwarming... the posibilities are endless.

That or making up your own villain and have poor little Toby at the center of the plan.

[APoeticHeart]

2677369 oh, I like that, but I won't be able to come up with a villain to save my life. Wait though, there is Chrysaliss, which I know I am going to probably make the villain of the sequel, there is King Sombra, but can maybe Trixie in a way be considered a villain?

[Fireydude]

2677984 Maybe you could still find a way to include Gilda into the mix as well..

[KiddTurbo]

2677984 I would love to see Trixie in your sequel, but not as a villain hopefully.

[APoeticHeart]

2678297 I am going to think about that. With the ideas from all you my wonderful readers, and the ideas that are running through my mind, that might be a possibility.

2679119 Lol.. I like that.

2679137 Alrighty. If I do include her, she will not be a villain.

[Zekromic]

Weird, I expected this chapter to be released by now. I got used to get up at 5am and see a new chapter. I bet that in a few hours at most after this post it wil be released (I can try, it happened before )