Axton Coglink, your everyday young colt, is a blank flank. Constantly pursued by bullies in his old school for being one. When his family move to Ponyville, a whole new life starts for him which invite all sorts of adventures where he'll make new friends, a few enemies, and with luck, embark upon some amazing ventures. Teaming up with the CMC (Cutie Mark Crusaders), Who knows what's in store?
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Before I do anything, I would like to assert that Australia is best Country.
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While the lay-out appears good, the fact that you have brackets in the story giving the thought process of Axton...
...
This kinda put's me off.
But at lest it's still fairly well written with no obvious spelling errors with the exception of Oatsralia
And now, AWAY.
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2245429 thanks for telling me it was Oatsralia, i didnt know what the pony equivalent of australia was
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I look forward to more in the future. And I'll be the first to read it. Proofreader FTW!
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A group I was in contested over naming EVERYTHING... No biggie though.
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(Fucking majestic as fuck)
2245429 Also, wherever I do put brackets, which has been edited, they are Axton's thoughts
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While I know that, we Normally don't put brackets in our stories, just something that it can get confusing at times for people.
2256170 Aye, it's normally put in italics.
Nevertheless, not a bad chapter. Still wish you'd send these to me to proofread, as you're meant to be Axton.
I have sent you many a URL but you're never on facebook at the time, which is where I send them through to
However, Fluttershy Auditore, I will remember to send you the document before i publish it.
2333761 Welcome. Anyway, I had just played COD, so I was in the mood to write something with a bit more ker-blamo in it
2256170 Also; speaking with the royal 'we', hm? Another person who favors Luna over Celestia? If so, good on you!
If only this young colt and his family knew exactly what went on at one of Pinkie's parties,how powerfully fun they are. They are so fun, they're not.
Right on, young Unicorn! No one likes those two anyhow. Although, me, I would have turned them into potted plants.
Good thing I'm a Pegasus!
Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon...
?
Armors self in steel coat... *cannot find appropriate ponycon so nods head a few times, steeples fingers/hooves and says "Go on."*
Hmm. Shippin's?!
Fillies and mares... Feel not despondent, young Axton. Not even fully grown stallions have a hope to understand the female mind.
We declare that this story should be continued! *said the Pegasus, trying to slink away after attempting to engage the RCV and failing
*
yep
That... spell... was... AWESOME!!!
DUDE THAT WAS AMAZING DO MORE COOL MAGICS
That's terrifying! He can turn into the robot things?
I am totally reading this.
Dawww! Skeptical colt is skeptical...
Pinkie pie takes her parties very seriously...
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Oatsralia... Majestic as the name implies. Loving the story so far, keep it up.
you could say that this chapter was....
Enchanting.
YYYYYYYYYYEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH!
It's spelled "Artifact" by the way.
Also, THAT WAS AWESOME!!!!!
All I can say to the Axton/Bloom 'ship is "D'Awww
"
ADVENTURE!!
It's just so amazing..
"Oatsralia" I swear to celestia i fucking DIED i laughed so hard.
New character. Righteous.
This is getting better and better!
Onwards tot the next chapter.
ALLONS-Y!!!
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAADVENTUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUURRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Did you get the idea for the Hunter's Robe from the series The Legend of the Seeker? Because there is an item inn that world that functions precisely as your Robe.
I'm in your Author's notes?
...
...
So Awesome!
Awesome chapter by the way, you could say it was...
Dark: Stop with the horashio jokes!
Condemned: Alright... geez
2451583 Nah, i didn't get it from that.
I just like the idea of a stealth robe 
Hey! I may be curious but that doesn't mean... hey what's that over there!?
Another chapter, another pleasure. Keep up the good work!
Keep it cool, Condemned.
weird and really random but it caught my interest despite the fact that I saw something like this coming. Good on ya
2465150 Thanks! Although, I can be a known to be a bit cliché at times, I can probably pull out more surprises than discord himself. More will be on the way soon.
We art eagerly awaiting thy next chapter.
Sincerely, A Renegade Time Lord.
New chapter...
Young Condemned: All of my yes!
Reads it, and looks to Dark.
Young Condemned: You seem like this in here...
Young Condemned: It's so adorable!
Young Dark: I'm helping!
Excellent work, Sir Axton.
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2491084 Why did I read young Darks voice in the voice of Caboose from RvB? ...
2493976 Because you're awesome.
Imagine if Darkmoon was a guardian, nothing OP but when the time comes, he could stand beside Axton and Defensive for the fight against the mighty and many hordes of legionaries. The battle shall be legendary!
Indeed it shall. My trusty commanders!
i would fight beside both if you to the end * salute's both of you*
Aww! Little colt crush!
It's so adorable!