A lesson forgotten . . . and another learned
Had anypony tried to enter the Golden Oaks library for any purpose, be it checking in/out a book or attempting to coerce Twilight into leaving, they'd be barred entry by the force field said unicorn had surrounded her home with. Ponies who passed the library would stare at the barrier in relief, as they knew all about Twilight’s obsessive-compulsive mentality due to the Want it, Need it, Smarty Pants incident. Twilight’s closest friends, however, only grew increasingly concerned about her well-being each time they passed the lavender unicorn's home.
It had been a couple of weeks since Twilight started work on her HUMAN project, as she was now calling it, and just a few days since putting up the barrier. Her friends knew exactly what she intended with it; keep everypony from distracting her until she was finished with her project. Spike was allowed to leave/return to the library by way of Twilight’s teleportation whenever he wished and would update the group on Twilight's condition from time to time. At first the group thought to inform Princess Celestia of the current dilemma, but ultimately decided against it confident that another "Smarty Pants" incident wasn't in danger of occurring. Plus, they all knew how important Twilight's project was to her, and the last thing they wanted the lavender unicorn thinking was that her friends didn't care about it. After all, that was the lesson they'd learned as a result of the "Smarty Pants" incident.
Currently, Spike was returning home with a box of cupcakes from Sugarcube Corner. Though Twilight hadn’t requested any food, he'd decided to bring some for her anyway. Along the way, however, Spike succumbed to temptation and started eating the delicious treats at his leisure. By the time he'd returned to Golden Oaks, only four of the sixteen cupcakes remained. Holding the box in one hand, he lifted the remaining one to announce his return via the designated "secret knock" on the barrier.
“IT’S DONE!!!”
The sudden exclamation from inside the library startled Spike, making him drop the remaining cupcakes onto the ground. Before the baby dragon could groan in frustration, however, he was teleported inside the library where he found himself staring at Twilight bouncing around the ground floor like a maniac, levitating an enormous rolled-up scroll with her magic. All the dragon could do was stare in awed concern until the lavender unicorn finally remembered his presence.
“Spike!” she exclaimed, looking at him with the widest grin possible. “I’ve finally finished HUMAN!”
“That’s . . . great,” Spike replied. No matter how many times Twilight went hyper-emotional, it seemed he never could find immunity to its effect on himself.
“You betcha,” Twilight said. “And I know just what to do with it.”
She immediately picked up a nearby quill and blank parchment.
“NO!!!” Spike shouted.
Twilight turned to look at him, her jaw agape and eyes blank in surprise.
“You’ve done enough, Twilight,” Spike continued. “You’ve done nothing but write for too long; I’m surprised your mane and tail aren’t disheveled from lack of grooming. You NEED to get out of here and do something else. Staying inside for too long is unhealthy; one would think you’d have learned that by now.”
Twilight continued to stare blankly at her assistant for a few moments before sighing. Spike was right; she HAD been cooped up in the library for far too long. Thoughts of her friends concerned for her well-being invaded Twilight's mind and she couldn't help but cringe thinking what they probably thought of her by now. Still, she wanted to find SOME way to continue working on her project. And just like that, an idea was hatched in her overused brain.
“You’re right, Spike,” she replied. “Let’s go celebrate my accomplishment with our friends. After all, they had a helping hoof in it themselves, no matter how small it may have been.”
Spike sighed with relief. “Sure thing, let’s go.”
And with that, the pair set off to gather their friends for celebration.
As the citizens of lower Manhattan looked up at the North Tower in both awe and concern, a familiar noise was heard approaching from overhead. Looking skyward for the source, a second plane was seen barreling towards the still intact South Tower. The first impact had attracted attention from every news outlet in the city. As a result, plenty of cameras bore witness to the second plane's impact with the South Tower. The screams of onlookers were immeasurable when the realization that the collisions were not accidental, but a coordinated assault instead, hit everyone hard and fast. As debris from the second impact rained down onto the streets-
“STOP!”
Everypony was so enraptured by Twilight's narration that when Fluttershy suddenly shouted their hearts all skipped a beat. Turning to face her, they saddened upon seeing how visibly distraught Fluttershy was. Though she'd rid herself of any nightmares brought about by the graphic content of Twilight's story, hearing it narrated still left the butterscotch pegasus anguished and in tears.
“It's okay, Fluttershy," Twilight said to her. "Take all the time you need to let it all out."
Fluttershy looked at her for a brief moment before she resumed crying. Twilight sighed; she and Spike were treating their friends to smoothies in celebration of Twilight’s story's completion. When they all asked how their contributions were implemented she decided to read parts of the story which showcased them. Since Fluttershy didn't object, Twilight assumed she overcame her distaste for the story's graphic nature. It was clear now, however, that she hadn't.
Once Fluttershy stopped crying Twilight spoke to her again. “Will you be alright?”
Fluttershy wiped away a few tears and nodded. “Continue,” she said.
Twilight picked up the scroll and resumed reading.
As debris from the explosion rained down onto the streets of Manhattan, several bystanders took out their cellphones to call 911, the emergency telephone number, which also happened to be the current number date. It didn’t take long at all before every fireman, police officer, and hospital worker was on the scene doing everything they could to get control of the situation at hand before full blown pandemonium ensued. Several were injured by falling debris, while others were trapped inside the doomed towers waiting to be rescued. Dozens were likely dead, and more deaths would surely follow if the worst had yet to pass.
Those watching the scene unfold on their televisions from the safety of their living rooms were either baffled, shocked, horrified, or (the most common case) any combination of the three. But above all else, they wanted to know one thing: why? Why did this happen? Who was responsible? What were their motivations? Could anything have been done to prevent this terrible tragedy from occurring? At the moment, however, all anyone could do was watch the scene unfold and keep the hope that things would turn out okay alive.
One thing, however, was for certain; America had lost its innocence. After having spent over a century without conflict on its home turf, the American people had now seen the horrors of modern war firsthand. Like all people, they would seek to bring justice to those responsible for invading and attacking their homeland, and they would not rest until said task was accomplished.
Twilight rolled up the scroll and placed it onto the table in front of her before returning her friends’ gaze.
“Now then,” she continued, “I have another tidbit of news to announce.”
All of Twilight's friends looked at her excitedly; she took a couple gulps of her smoothie before resuming.
“Such a literary masterpiece as the one we created deserves to be published in hardback. I know a publisher back in Canterlot who could do just that. With me being Princess Celestia’s personal protege, I can all but guarantee he’ll agree to do it. I’m telling you all this because since you all helped me write it, it’s only fair for you all to receive an equal share of profits.”
Twilight looked at each of her friends to see them all smiling. Taking a sip of her own smoothie, Applejack spoke up.
“Well, that’s mighty kind of ya sugarcube; I’d definitely love ta be able ta pay for some renovatin’ around Sweet Apple Acres.”
“Yes, thank you Twilight dear,” Rarity said. “Every single bit certainly helps me and my boutique.”
“Th . . . th . . . thank you,” Fluttershy stuttered.
“Ooh, maybe we could throw a we-all-get-rich party,” Pinkie Pie said, bouncing in her seat excitedly. “IT’D BE GREAT!!!”
“I know what I’d do if I had a few thousand bits,” Rainbow Dash said, smiling wistfully. "I'd book a reservation at that new DELOS resort out west.”
“I’m glad to see you’re all as excited about this as I am,” Twilight said as she levitated the enormous scroll her story was written upon. “I think this little world of ours will teach everyone who reads it a very important lesson, not just in friendship but life itself. No matter how many flaws you might have you can push through the hardships in life and be happy; that’s essentially what humans represent in this story. For all their wars, atrocities, and unspeakable acts of malevolence against their own kind, humans need only to lend each other their support and they can build a bright future for not just themselves, but their entire world.”
Twilight gulped down the rest of her smoothie before continuing.
“I was a fool when I first began writing this story. I figured a doomed future would await any world devoid of magic. What I didn’t account for, however, was the magic of friendship exists in every living thing, no matter how malevolent and hateful they may appear to be. It was only once you all started helping me that I began to realize that truth. Thanks for all your help in shaping both me personally and this little world of ours to be better.”
After Twilight finished her little speech, tears formed in the eyes of everypony in the group, even the usually stubborn and prideful Rainbow Dash. For the next few minutes, they let loose their tears freely, not caring what anypony else nearby might think of them. Twilight’s speech had moved them too much to care. Seeing all of her friends crying made Twilight shed a few tears herself, only to be cut off by the sound of roaring flames to her left. She turned to see Spike in the process of sending a letter to the princess.
“SPIKE!!!” Twilight shouted.
Unfazed by the loud exclamation practically right in his ear, Spike looked up at Twilight with a modest smile on his face and a few tears of his own adorning his cheeks.
“Don’t worry, I caught every word.”
Realizing Spike’s deed, Twilight sighed and patted her assistant on the head.
It had been a week since Twilight sent her story to the publisher in Canterlot. Just as she expected, the reply letter stated that HUMAN would be published and made available for purchase right away. Twilight couldn’t help but feel a rush of pride at being able to return the gesture to all the great authors she had admired all throughout her life by contributing such an enlightening work as HUMAN to the field of literature. The publisher had said that he had never seen anything bursting with as much creativity and philosophical importance as HUMAN, and if word of mouth worked in their favor, he expected to sell at least one million copies of HUMAN by the end of the month.
Currently, Twilight was sleeping the morning in, something she hadn’t done since she started work on HUMAN and rarely even before then. She was woken out of her slumber, however, by a knocking on the library’s front door.
“Spike,” she said, groggily. “Could you get that?”
When more knocking came with no answer from her assistant, Twilight looked up to see Spike wasn’t in bed. She panicked at first, but quickly remembered he was due for a dentist appointment with Minuette that morning. Realizing he must've went on his own, Twilight got out of bed and, after stretching her legs a bit, proceeded downstairs to the library's front door. More knocking sounded as she approached it.
“I’M COMING!” Twilight yelled.
Using her telekinesis, Twilight opened the front door to a most unexpected sight. Before the library stood a crowd that must've consisted half of Ponyville's population. Upon closer inspection, Twilight saw everypony had something in common; they were all holding a book to their chests with a fore hoof. They all read 'HUMAN' and showed a picture of a human male wearing what looked to be blue pants, a white shirt, black and gray shoes, and a black jacket of sorts. As realization dawned on Twilight, a certain mint green unicorn mare near the front of the crowd stepped forward; the widest smile possible present on her face.
“So,” Lyra said, “how long before the sequel?”
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motherfucking lyra
i should have seen that coming
Next thing you know, ponies start becoming "humares"
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My brains!!! Too much thinking!!!!
How long before Australia badassery gets a mention?
urmergurd
thert erndering
Wonder where this is going next?
2228804 right after Canada's badassery
2228749 Oooh, nice idea. IT'S MINE NOW!!!
2228861 Which is . . . NEVER!!!
2228186 Or perhaps, having them speculate that we are writing fanfiction on them at some point. If that doesn't happen, then perhaps a Space Marine would kindly remind them. At all, we could interpret this as an alternate dimension. They view a portal into our world, and we view into theirs. One thing we have in common? We created each other. One world is fiction. The other is real.
And vice versa hence forth. By good Glaux, I dare say they might even come up with some book club alternative to the site we are currently reading on... Along with the SAME or similar kind of content one might find on Fimfiction. But there is another thing. We aren't always evil. Despite all the bad that happens on a day to day basic, there is some justice to be had in the world. It's just that we're so fixated with the bad because we want to solve those problems first. We don't exactly get excited or alarmed by good news.
For example, despite our sometimes greedy ambitions, it also helps us advance fast in technology in a relatively short period of time. Now, this will depend on how you interpret canon and what you decide to take into account, but in general, Equestrian technology appears to lag behind by ours by several decades in some areas, similar or the same in others, and at worst centuries behind.
For goodness sake, the best that the Equestrian Military (At least if you decided to go only by show canon and not expand or create your own universe.) has to offer are what appear to be antiquated Royal Hoplites of Greek and Roman times. I would hate to think what would happen if Equestria were to be invade by a foreign military power. And one has to wonder. Where the hell did they manage to come up with these rather morbid ideas? Perhaps there is some far past Pony War that occurred. (NOT BETWEEN THE PONY TRIBES.) Surely there can't be all peace and quiet. (Again, it depends on what you make of the canon and whether or not you decide to include it in your fanon. For example: If you like being flexible, there were several fics in the Mid Season 2 and all of Season 1 era that depict their military, with Shining Armor not among them. But anyhow, they seem to be based on how armies operated during the times that the Roman Legions roamed the Earth.
It is also doubtful that Celestia herself is hoof clean of any blood on her hooves. Again, it depends on what kind of backstory you have created for the scenario.
Moving on to the subject of fanfiction material and even breaking the 4h wall.
Somewhere down the line, I believe Pinkie Pie may slightly void it or close to doing it by including that we have made a television show about them, which in turn spawned a massive fanbase. What if the same thing happened to them? Sure, our reality may look bleak at a glace for the normal Equestrian, but we have our good moments as well, even surprisingly thought rarely enough, in wartime. Don't forget the courage that we humans will display when our loved ones our threatened. Not to mention some of the selfless Samaritans that exist on this planet.
2228749 If that happened, we'll rue the day. I wonder what kind of repulsing things that they would come up with?
God forbid if they started inserting themselves into human lives. By everything that is holy, they will be in for a rude and shocking awakening.
.... And I just read the chapter... By good Nayru, I hope they don't get any ideas....
And if the Multiverse theory is any indication, chances is are that at least one stupid unicorn will try to either bring themselves or us to Equestria. After that happens.... Whelp, someone will have to say the following.
"YOU BLOODY FOOOOL!"
2228861 When was the last time Canada's military was compared to Predators (the ones from the movies)? Because thats what the Vietnamese though of us Aussies.
Then there was the time a single brigade of Australian Militiaman (who where under equiped and tired from travelling a trail that kills well equiped tourists) managed to send an entire Japanese airfield running for the hills.
Then there is the fact we live in Australia.
2228933 you know what you are right. learning how to kill a bear with a sharpen spoon to make yourself a fur coat at 12 to fend the cold climate (we're speaking -45) we have 9 months a year I am sure hold nothing to what you "Austral pals" must have to do in your deserts. Freezing hell we have more water then we know what to do with when snow (water cristalised in tinny flakes) acumulation reaching 8 feet hit us during the 3½ to 5 mounth of winter we have. of course given the same gear for survival we would not stand a chance in each other country. you'd freeze to death in what us "Kanuks" call a "nice fresh spring weater (-23)". while we would die of dehydratation in your "cold autumn days (+19)"
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TBH I don't think that you should really refer to the Vietnam war, or any war really, like that. Sure, there were Australians who went to war and did what they had to. But when I go to the ANZAC parades I don't think about how badass the Aussie diggers were. I think about how proud I am that they laid down their lives to protect my freedom, and how glad I am that those days are over.
That, and there was a reason the Vietnamese people thought that way. It was because wherever the fighting went, people died, be they Viet Cong or rice farmer. That's just how war is.
It's cool that you're patriotic and all though.
I love it. As an avid fan of HiE stories (especially ones with an interesting premise besides ;"You are in Equestria. Wat do?") I have a personal interest in this story. I hope this story turns out great, and anything I offer is to aid the fan-fic. I'd hate to see a fairly promising candidate not get the attention it deserves.
On a less serious note. Ponies writing fan-fiction. May whatever deity is listening take mercy on us.
2228933 and yes I know the "Kanuks" are the one you sent with broken second hand toys for the ennemy to kill before the "Ah-Maree-cahn" get out of hidding with silencer equiped Submachine gun of course we look weak in a desert in those conditions we specialise in winter, montain and woodland warfare. Also when you sit next to "Number one millatary power" you then to get use to play "retard mountie from the north EH?"
We can not afford to act like "Orignal Dundee" in front of them. You have an Island for you alone. We have to share the continent with trigger happy... charming people pointing their guns at us. so we play it safe until their next civil war.
Yes! A sequal to Human!
I would certainly love to see Twilight write about the early 21st century up until now, considering she seemed to end at the 9/11 terrorist attacks. I would certainly like to hear the Mane6 come up with stuff like Russia's attack on Georgia (tha nation not the state) in 2008 all based off what happened to the USSR like our history!
And I would certainly love to see them write about our travels to space, maybe, when you run out of history. They could write about the future things that havent happened yet! ERMAGHERD YER CRERTED THE BERST TRILIGER EVAR!
Enjoyable, though I was hoping that the story's description would be a bit less figurative. Still, it's apparently incomplete, so I look forward to seeing what you do next.
One thing: Did anypony think to make mention of the humans' mythology. Unicorns, dragons, and other such ridiculous concepts?
will you ever try to make a, series out of this?
also it would be great if you do latin american history
This is like inception, somehow we are reading a story of someone else's story. P>P
Idea:
After reading twilight's book (and possibly the sequel), Discord decides to transform everyone into humans.
It would bring a horrifyingly grimdark idea: what if this actually DID happen, and we are merely the descendants of those ponies who, thanks to the tyranny of a draconequus who made the mistake of transforming the pony world into the human world (including himself), cannot fully and properly return to the magic of friendship?
So let's see: Twilight is Studio B, anyone who writes novels, game stories, movies; are fan fiction writers, MLP: FiM is like those fan fictions where humans are a tv show in Equestria. So things like Call of Duty, Clockwork Orange, Aliens, Half-Life, South Park; those are all fan fiction for HUMAN. Also, Anthropology is a fan fiction written by Lyra.
Wonderful story. I'm curious about how the sequel will turn out.
THE CANDLE ON THE STORY PICTURE LOOKS LIKE A PENIS.
THANK YOU.
Also Lyra.
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There will be PoE (Pony On Earth) fanfiction. Would be fun to read, a fanfiction written by a pony and it's a self insert. What is the human version of the black-red-maned allicorn OC's? A pony turned human who spawns completely with the newest Laptop, Iphone and a few million Euro's (YES, Euro's)?
2229252 why do all countries think the U.S. is so trigger happy. All the wars we fought in so oppression against people could be stopped or during the formation of our nation.
Revolutionary War: us vs england
Franco-American war: us vs french privateers
War of 1812: us vs english blockade
Civil war: us vs rich people who thought they were american
Spanish-American war: we freed Cuba (something they were never very thankful about)
World war 1: you know why
World war 2: above
(I will admit this next thing was pretty pointless but it never turned to war so it doesn't count) Cold War
Korean War: us vs north korea (to stop the oppression of south korean people)
Vietnam conflict: never officially was a war but pretty much same reason above
Gulf war: us vs dictator
War on terror: us vs terrorism
Now tell me we are trigger happy, we fight for the freedom of others and ourselves. Canada is almost exactly the same as the United States. Canada is like the young brother of the U.S.
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Sequel? Sequel? She'll get up to the part where Kim Jong Un starts another war, and then everything dies. Or we go far into the future, and fight a Necromorph scourge.
I sense madness coming soon.
2230234mememaker.net/meme/never5
2229290>>2229428>>2229514>>2230235 Sequel? AS IF!!!
Nah, I'm kidding, I'd never abandon something that people love. That said, I don't plan on publishing a whole new story for it, but rather continue writing chapters for this one.
2230112 Gee, maybe because more people are shot to death in America every day than any other country on Earth?
2230398 if you are going to go by crime involving guns, here is my counter point, the middle east and EVERY COUNTRY GEOGRAPHICALLY BELOW THE U.S.
2228734 *motherbucking
still lyra pretty much perfected the ending
2230435 all of whos gun crazes is directly linked to the US man read your history if your gonna defend yourself.
2230652 please clarify what you mean. If you mean they got their guns from the U.S. look at Russia and other things like the black market. Seriously look at all the things they sell to small militia groups. If you mean they started killing because of the U.S. I highly doubt cartels and militia groups kill just because of the U.S. Or finally do you mean all of them started using guns because the U.S. has guns. Because all countries have guns, even Sweden has guns.
Interesting.
I wonder if Twilight wrote (or will write) about Gandhi.
2229547
Quite the astute observation, my friend
2229252 That was damn offensive what you just said.
So I guess it's my turn.
We Americans feel bad for ourselves that we picked the one spot to settle where we would have to live next to a nation of retarded people that think they won the war of 1812 (Canada didn't exist yet Britain won that war) and gloat about how their nation is the most liked while the entirety of the world is tossed around by World Wars and economic collapse.
This is why the US acts to do things before our Northern neighbors try to actually be a part of a war somewhere and fuck things up getting themselves killed. Although we do like their bacon... mmm Canadian bacon...
2230729 well your information is true about the black market, most of the guns these groups get there hands on is made and sold to them by the US be it legaly or otherwise. the other side of it is that they usualy aquire guns with using them agianst the US in mind. in one way or another the US is usualy connected to them. be it the arms trade or simply cause other countries don't like the US.
2230112 oh I do not denie those where mostly rightchous action but which country gave in it's constitution the right for every citisent to own a gun
in canada we have to have a clear judicial slate to be hallowed to rent a hunting gun. the privilege to own one is withdrawn even for pety theif. the only "shootings" you hear from canada were done with illegaly optained weapon or by one stolen from millitary weapon storage.
2230933 not every country specialyzes in killing you know. and thats not an insult military is the USA's largest asset. we canadians have a crap army, crap navy and crap airforce, but you know what? we don't have to disguise ourselves to get treated better when we travel abroad.
2230991 well the reason the right to own guns is in the our constitution is to limit government, you see the people who made the constitution didn't want government to have all the power like England so they made it so the citizens have the means to fight back if the government were to.. oh i don't know start sending its own drones at is own citizens or something. But ya, it is there to help stop the government from taking control from the people instead having the people control the government. I can see why you Canadians have gun laws like that but you have to remember that these countries started out in completely different ways. We came about through revolution you came about as territories that more or less just drifted apart from England.
Also wow, I really broke off from my original point I need to learn how to stay on topic.
2231029 actually in my opinion the military of Canada isn't that bad. I mean yes it is true the U.S. military is stronger but that is out of necessity. Canada has a great Air force and Navy I can't say much about their army though because I haven't read a whole lot about Canadian ground confrontations.
Ahh, a good old "lets hate Australia, then America" comment war. *pulls up chair, grabs popcorn.*
2231277 Which is why I haven't deleted it. *grabs own popcorn*
2231351Excellent story, btw.
2231472 Well thank ya kindly.
IS THERE GONNA BE MORE OF THIS?! I HOPE THERE'S GONNA BE MORE OF THIS! I WANNA SEE TWILIGHT'S SEQUEL! THAT WOULD BE SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SAD IF I DIDN'T SEE IT! PLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASE*gasp*PLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLAESEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASE
2231564 Thumb up and it's all the more likely.