It has been foretold that the Dragon Chains would return and rage a devastating war that would destroy Equestria and the rest of the world. Centuries have past and the threat has been seen as no more than an old mare's tale. What everypony doesn't know it that the old tale is true. Oh so very true.
Set after the Canterlot Wedding.
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This sounds good! Maybe you can make up another villan? Just a suggestion. (Maybe for one of your other stories :/)
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It will all be explained in the next chapter. I promise
This has promise! continue!
Past Sins as a play? what pony would write that play? someone who knows Twilight, i hope.
Go on... and good luck to you on finding a pre reader. may i suggest someone in the Writer's Group?
Keep going...
Really Celestia? Would killing Spike save equestria?
Continue...
*SQUEE*
sorry im just *SQUEE*
excited
HOLY CELESTIA FLYING TITS THAT WAS AWESOME
Why was Celestia looking for Twilight if the gift was ment for Spike? And why Spike didn't remove the ring right away?
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First, Spike was home alone by himself.
Second, the ring makes the wearer tired upon the first use and Spike needs the ring to battle.
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First: That's totally not what I asked.
Second: He needs it to battle? Sure. But he doesn't know that yet, does he?
Celestia didn't know that was one of this mystic chains? Really? You want me to believe that she simply bought it on a store or something?
And why is it necessary to kill Spike? Can't he just take of the ring? You havent stablish if that is imposible.
Ho well .Thank you for a completely pointless scene, then.
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Thank you for your criticism. If you have concerns please tell me. Also you think this is bad. You should have read my first story NanoZ. You can't read it now because I'm still working out some problems on the story.
So I have to ask is the magic chain from something or his your own original idea. Also I hope Spike gets all the chains and bring the dragons into a new age.
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