Link is reborn in Equestria, unaware of his fate he lives his life day to day. When ponyville is attacked Link takes up arms and embarks on an adventure of self discovery and continues the eternal fight between good and evil. undergoing rewrite
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Hm. I didn't get time to read all of it, but I am a Legend of Zelda fan myself. There are a lot of mistakes in there, and from what I read, it seems a bit rushed. Might I suggest getting an editor? I could be it, if nobody else wanted to.
Awesome
when will next chapter come
Next chapter would be nice to have thats all i have to say.
the next chapter is comming along. Not as fast as i would hope, i had some homework that i neglected to do and it caught up with me so... yeah.
Looking forward to the second chapter. I do like Gannon's lie to Twilight. You need to think carefully how the characters should react to events so that they stay in character. Personally I doubt Rainbow would have just led everyone away. Her spunk would have insisted she stay to help unless made to see reason.
You'll also need to explain why Braveheart fights upright like a human instead of like a pony would. Easily explained but keep it in mind. There is a lot of potential here. I really want to see this become something amazing. I could totally see a certain Pink Pony pulling the annoying "Hey Listen" reference occassionally. And please proof read. Spell check is good but flow is important and it's hard to hear unless you read it aloud after a good break. Hopefully these tips help.
Also remember it's Zelda so there has to be a quest adventure to get the things for the thing. Keep at it!!!
Ok first of all.. the title of the chapter. first word should be canterlot. i'm far to lazy to find all the mistakes though. plus it's midnight as of now
oh shite! canterlor!!
thanks from that levimos
interseted i,m falowing
The strange thing about this is that I just finished working on recreating some Zelda music.... Great chapter! I can't wait to see what will happen!
So I do really like this story the only problem is everything seems a bit rushed. In the first chapter Link is dreaming then he is suddenly awake and his house is on fire. Be a little more descriptive, add in tiny details. Also is his name Link BraveHeart, or do different people just like to refer to him as Link And lastly who gave him the clothes? Was it the Goddeses, Luna, the note said John Smith so could it be the Doctor? Or is it just a secret to everyone :3?
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Yeah pacing has never been my strong suit. His name will be explained later and as well as the clothing mystery.
Great story so far i like that is original while not straying too far from the games keep it up
I think all of this is happening WAY too fast. It is a bit hard to keep up with the story and get to feel things from Link's perspective. I feel as thought all these events should have been told in greater detail in about 3-5 chapters.
Other then that it seems like a nice concept. Its alright for a first story
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plz update its a great fic i cant wait for the next chapter this literaly combines my two favorite things ( holy shit are these new?
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More. More! MORE!MORE!!!MORE!!!!
Wow. This is actually pretty dark.
Celestia getting enraged at Braveheart like that really caught me by surprise.
I'm impressed! Keep it up!