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"The changeling looked at the foal much like a space explorer would look at an alien life form. He resisted the urge to prod it." - Flitter

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Misty Cloud and Lemon Frisk find themselves in trouble... and it's entirely Misty's fault.

This was written for the 300 Members Special competition at the Fallout: Equestria group, and it seems I still got it, since I won third place!

Any events that happen in this are totally non-canon with the main TDU storyline. Jokes used in this silly one-shot may be recycled in the main story later! You have been warned.

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Comments ( 17 )

You did all this in under a day?
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I really hope that this can motivate others to also join the competition, and really lovely that you write about it in the description with links and what not :pinkiehappy:

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The real trick was to get it over 1000 words... I originally wanted to do just one scene, with it ending at the tickle fight :rainbowwild:

Mind you, I may have severely slacked off at work to get this done :scootangel:

But, yes... this is all new. I got loads such scenes in my scraps and future chapters material, but this is all written from scratch, with just the main "Why Did You Do That?" idea as inspiration. With Misty, the choice of what exactly she'd done was pretty obvious :pinkiehappy:

And it begins.

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Well, not really. As the "complete" status and the description should show you, this is a silly one-shot.

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and it ends.

Comment posted by Noakwolf deleted Mar 5th, 2013

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Umm... "if I do say so myself" is normally only used in situations where you are giving a positive evaluation of your own work.

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:trixieshiftleft::trixieshiftright:

I knew that... Yeah.....

:rainbowlaugh: I gotta read the main story after this! In the meantime, I'd better get to competing with you. Those 3000 words won't write themselves! :rainbowdetermined2:

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If you liked this, you won't be disappointed... the main story's basically a ton more of the same :rainbowwild:

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Dude.

One Word.

Awesome.

Wait, Lemon Frisk and Misty are dating, right? Hmm....

- "Hay, it's about bloody time you swept her off her hooves instead of acting all tough around her." * * * As they walked back to Stable 69
- off her hooves instead of acting all tough around her." * * * As they walked back to Stable 69
- tough around her." * * * As they walked back to Stable 69
- As they walked back to Stable 69
- Stable 69

I see what you did there.

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Thanks!

Stable 69 is more than just a little throwaway gag, though. And they're not quite dating... but they may just get there, eventually. The fact he's a ghoul makes it sort of weird, y'know... for him anyway. Not to mention, he's got a ton of emotional baggage.

You'll have to read the full story to see what the deal is with those two, and with Stable 69 :twilightsmile:

If you want to read another silly little teaser... I once posted a blog called The Fresh Shrink of the Big Bad Wastelands, which is kind of the first chapters of the story seen from Misty Cloud's point of view. May contain spoilers, if you care about that sort of thing.

Misty Cloud seems kind of crazy.

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Oh, they both have their moments :rainbowlaugh:

Read the main story to find out more about what makes them tick :twilightsmile:

(in fact, I noticed you added Night Eight and Day of Cabbages and Turnips to your Read Later list... both of those contain serious spoilers for TDU, so better read the original first.)

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I plan to read the main story first yes. I only read this because it said it was non canon and i happened to be going through my short stories end of the read later list. Trimming down my list slowly but surely.

With how things go for these two
Yeah this could totally have happened

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