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Kontaro

Kontaro #1 · Feb 1st, 2014 · 1 · ·

Check the first paragraph, you forgot to change a lot of the hers to hims.

Comment posted by Pyriel deleted Mar 27th, 2014

Pyriel

Pyriel #3 · Mar 27th, 2014 · · ·

Wait... Reads the lousy excuse for saying the L-word. Wasn't that the same fucking excuse from the other chapter just reversed!!!???!! So which is true Charles?!

MetaKnight145

MetaKnight145 #4 · Mar 27th, 2014 · · ·

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A Rule 63'd version

What the fuck do you think this means?
That it would be different?

Pyriel

Pyriel #5 · Mar 27th, 2014 · · ·

4140358 I'm just saying, I'd think the alternate versions of themselves read the same romance junk and (get this) NEITHER IS TRUE! Whatever, this just me pointing out stupid things.

MetaKnight145

MetaKnight145 #6 · Mar 27th, 2014 · · ·

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I was only criticizing the fact hat you thought it would be at all different from the last one.
That romance junk is only there to get the two to fuck.
That is it.
I wasn't trying to make a real romance here, I was making a clopfic.

Pyriel