• Published 12th Mar 2013
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>Censored< - MetaKnight145

Your or John Everyman's smexy fun in equestra.

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Check the first paragraph, you forgot to change a lot of the hers to hims.

Comment posted by Pyriel deleted Mar 27th, 2014

Wait... Reads the lousy excuse for saying the L-word. Wasn't that the same fucking excuse from the other chapter just reversed!!!???!! So which is true Charles?!


A Rule 63'd version

What the fuck do you think this means?
That it would be different?

4140358 I'm just saying, I'd think the alternate versions of themselves read the same romance junk and (get this) NEITHER IS TRUE! Whatever, this just me pointing out stupid things.

I was only criticizing the fact hat you thought it would be at all different from the last one.
That romance junk is only there to get the two to fuck.
That is it.
I wasn't trying to make a real romance here, I was making a clopfic.

4140517 yeah, I know...

If I could have gotten away with it I would have just had them start fucking from the get go.

4140638 yeah... Is it just me or at the stereotypes true? :ajbemused:

Y the story die?

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