Dracula

by Lynked

A Letter From Rainbow Dash

A Letter From Rainbow Dash
Wednesday, March 3

Applejack,

So... I had a good time, y’know? It was nice and stuff. Um, yeah, I was just wondering if you wanted to maybe, I dunno, do that again. You, me, alone, and... you know. Kiss.

Not that I need it! I mean, totally your choice, I’m good either way. I just thought maybe you’d be wanting some grade-A Rainbow loving. Hah, hard to live without that, I know, I know. But I’m up for it, if you are. I had a good time. You’re a good mare to chill with, heh. Just give me a shout. Or a letter, if you’re too nervous or something.

Not that I’m nervous! I’m not nervous! Just don’t have the time to really sit and chat right now. That’s actually true, you know. The pegasus weather team stopped by this morning right before I hit the hay, and they said something about a major weather malfunction. Sounds pretty bad, so I think they’ll need me at Cloudsdale either today or tomorrow. But after that, if you’re feeling a bit deprived of yours truly, well, you know where to find me.

‘Til then I’ll be with the flight crews. They don’t know what’s causing this malfunction in the machines, but apparently it’s really bad, and they don’t have a grip on it. Said some kinda big storm is brewing up, and they need some help to kick it down. They also said it might be coming this way, so you might want to spread the word around town. Hey, and also, tell everypony else I’ll be gone for a while!

See ya later!

-Dash

Comments

[Zweiterversuch]

Mmm....short.....but still quite relevant to the story.
For some reason the portrayal of the Rainbow X Applejack relationship upsets me...like it doesn't belong...
I can't put my finger on why it feels that way, but anyway I guess I'll change my opinion later...
Surely it has to do with the story.

[Syvvak]

‘Til then

This is a little thing I didn't know until I did some editing for Josh (psp7master); 'til is acceptable, but technically incorrect. And till was used before until. Figured I would point that out. This was in dialogue (I consider a characters writing as dialogue. Sue me.), so I really don't think it would matter since it is a very common thing. Just a nice little thing I want to kill Josh for I figured I would point out.

This was nice. Another great chapter-thingy... yeah. NEXT!