Discord is bored.
He is tired.
He wants to do something fun.
So he chooses to dance,
and everypony else does too.
Author Notes
~ Editors: TLSpark and Reddened Chaos.
~ Inspired by this, and the fact that most of the time everypony in the show breaks into a song once somepony starts singing. (EX: Winter Wrap Up, The Best Night Ever, Mystery Magical Cure.)
~ Character Tags should include mostly everybody in the show that I could had thought of at the time, but... you know... character tag limits.
Chapters (1)
So you finally managed to get it done..... nice.
That was amazing.
This. I love this. So effing. much. Notey you are awesome. I bucking love you and if I could I'd be hugging the stuffing out of you.
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Quite the amusing tale. Celestia and Discord dancing is something that I can only see in words, sadly enough. Adding this to my favorites list and giving a thumbs up.
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Wavy! Not here!
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Too shy?
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Is here really the time and place for "us" time?
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True~Still Can't blame apony like me to have a little fun~
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*kisses the tip of your horn*
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2286122 Uh like Chaotic said. Let's take this somewhere else.
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Tee hee~
2286142 How about we go to Notey's page?
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I said when I am able and I'm still occupied with exams,right now I'm just taking a small break~
2286161 Aww kay. See you~
Breaking the fourth wall... Really? But other than that I was laughing my ass off the whole time.
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Breaking the fourth wall is the best!
Also, dat cover art of Discord!
This was awesomely amazing. X3
Why can't I keep giving this thumbs ?!
This story was so good! 
I wish to give this all my likes. Just take them.
Here's a somewhat-related picture.
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Fixed it for you, and thanks!
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Ah, yeah, I got it. It just took a second of repairing the URL.
Love it, absolutely love it.
Glad I didn't miss this excellent chaos here.
Also, we really need a Discord emote.
I don't have time to read this right now but the title made me think of the safety dance, and john delancey singing it
No Party Rock? For shame
I'm pretty sure you mean "aura."
Might wanna remove the first word.
You switched to present tense there.
"loud, monstrous" or "monstrously loud"
woken
gotten
In order to what?
"generously tall" or "tall, generous"
should have
Remove the second "more."
Remove the first "had."
"suddenly took" or "had suddenly."
"had been" about to cast a spell on him. You reeeaaally need to figure out what narrative voice you're using.
Pick one.
Her idea suspects?
No offense, but I found this in-story correction to be somewhat ironic.
You broke tense again.
There in her graceful misery? Try, "but Celestia wished for her safety."
she couldn't help but feel that she was missing, etc.
Pretty sure he has more than one scale.
Broke tense.
Pretty sure it's more than apparent.
hear
Broke tense, and Spike's a dude.
"matched her slim figure" or "matched very well with." Also, "matched" probably isn't the best word to describe a form-fitting garment.
"considered pulling."
Don't just tell us it's hilarious, describe why it's hilarious. Or just say, "In a comical fashion."
I think you meant, "trying to picture something."
"sipped at" or just "sipped."
Tense.
She
quicklynoticed the both of them and whisperedover to them,All of that was confusing, but it looks like you had trouble with word choice anyway. Perhaps, free will = wild side, and along that line = along those lines.
"lit the entire thing, creating a massive bonfire and starting the real party."
"her body feeling very worn out" or "feeling very worn out."
Remove the last two words.
Bizarre word choice.
Broke tense again. This time you meant, had been kind of fun.
Remove or change two of those "a bit"s.
It didn't make sense until I read the description. Yeah, I'm surprised this made the feature box, too. Heck, even my stuff deserves it more than this story does in its current state. *sigh* I was really looking forward to challenging you to a duel for the feature box.
Lots of errors, but the storry had me laughing, well done.
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Currently waiting for my editor to finish plowing through it at the moment.
for some reason i can see his happening and i love it
This story wins a stache
I can see this happening, especially where Discord is concerned. Utterly amazing that no one else thought this up yet
I liked that you gave Celestia and Discord he spotlight for a time instead of our favorite princess ^^, I also enjoyed Celestia's dancing, you described every bit of detail that was necessary for a good story ^^.
That was hilarious, and I thank for it.
Ciao darling
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Ah, a fellow Criken fan.
Welcome, fellow Crikenite!
Hmm. Yeah. That was pretty cool, I guess.
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I really enjoyed this
This seems like the kinda thing reformed Discord would do; not a bad thing, but still pretty chaotic in its own right. And the randomness of the song choices brought a wee smile to my face 
One more flaw: you should really remove the "mane six" tage and replace it with Spike, because he has much more presence in this than the ponies, most of whom aren't even mentioned.
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True, although Twilight has more presence in the story than Spike. Part of the story was described from her point of view.
I really did enjoy this story. Good job
Oh my lol.
TAKE THE LIKES. TAKE THEM.
You gets the likes and favs my friend!
You deserve a fav, a thumbs-up and a nice little tap on your back!
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Wait.... why does the picture say "EI"? Shouldn't it say "Hasbro"?
Also, I want your personal opinion on Criken's new "quickies". Do you think they are good, or do you want to see the return of "The Fun House"?
3rd order of buisness, mind if I join in on the love fest that is going on in the comments, sorry I arrived late :P
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Idk.
Why not both?
And no.
Don't think I forgot about how you invaded Gamer Luna's page and claimed you was her soulmate.