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Gerulf is a strong and able leader. He is cunning and charismatic. To top it all off, he's the greatest griffin warrior in a century or more. Hartwin, his brother, can play the lute. This is the tale of a gentle soul's journey through hell and back, and how it changed him forever.

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*picks his jaw up off the floor*
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An excellent story, though I apologize for getting too sucked into the little history bit. (Have a bit of a fondness for worldbuilding. Actually more like a raging inferno of passion for it :rainbowlaugh:) You sir have earned that gold star and a thumb. Maybe even a follow :raritywink:

I like it! Great images, strong characters, action, you cannot ask for more. I want to see how you tie this is in with the history of Equestria, it should make one heck of an epic.

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Thank you for your kind words. I love world-building too. It's part of my passion for speculative fiction. Strangely enough, the little "history" section near the end is more folk tale than history, kinda like the tales of Hercules. The story of Hartwin is supposed to take place only a generation or two after the first Hearth's Warming Day.

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Thank you. I'm certain there's probably more I could do to make it a stronger piece but I'm really glad you like it. As to how it ties in, you're right. If I have my way, it'll be epic.

I liked this. Nicely done!

This was your first fimfic!? Its amazing! I can't wait until you post another story. (especially if it's about griffins) :pinkiehappy:

Hi there. I hope you don't mind, but I loved this story so much that I have adapted it into a full cast reading on YouTube:

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I'm absolutely flattered by this. I've listened to it and I love it all. Great job with the voice acting.

I want more! I want more! I want more! I want more! I want more! I want more! I want more! I want more! I want more! I want more! I want more! I want more! I want more! I want more! I want more! I want more!
Pleeeeeeeeeeeease make more stories with them!

I also want to thank Scribbler that she has shown me this story.

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