Bonus Chapter.
So for those of you who are reading my new story, you may know I was under the influence of some fermented liquid yesterday. Well, I have been busy helping my dad in the garden today, so haven't been able to write much. When I finaly got to open my word processing tab, I discovered three files. What I had worked on for the next chapter, my story plans, which I deleted cos they made no sense!!, and.............this. Enjoy.
“Ahhhh, I can't........do it!”
“Come on Dash, you........know you can!”
“Uhhh......it's too......much!”
“You....can....do...it!” She slowly slid across my chest, stretching out. Her rather ample chest was pressing in to my face.
“I can....see why.....Luna likes......you so.....much...ahhh!!!”
“Don't get....jealous Dash......it's just.....you and......me now!” I looked over to the couch, where AJ and Twilight were sitting, sweating and out of breath. Luna stood behind them with a smirk on her face.
“Don't mind me, carry on.” I watched as Dash's hand stretched out even further, getting to almost its full reach. With one more gasp of breath, she finally gave in, collapsing on top of me. We fell to the floor in a panting heap. “Looks like you beat another of the girls. So, who do you wish for next?”
“Um, I'll go next. If you don't mind.”
“Sorry, Lulu, Shy..........I'm totally.....fucked now.”
“A shame really, I was looking forward to my turn.” I turned my head to face the violet haired woman. “I think I'll go with Fluttershy. I hope you enjoy the show, Captain.”
“If you continue to tease me like that, Rarity, then I'll include whipped cream.”
“You wouldn't dare.” I got to my feet and stalked towards her. She backed away till she hit the wall, and I raised my hands to her shoulders. She shuddered as I gently brushed my hands across them, then flicker her nose with a finger.
“.......got you!” her mouth dropped open to say something, but closed it again and she smiled at me, walking over to Fluttershy. She whispered in to her ear for a moment, and the pink haired girl's cheeks started to turn red. She looked at Rarity and then nodded. I sat on the couch on the other end of AJ and Twilight.
Rarity and Fluttershy stood opposite each other....and then started to strip off. Rarity unbuttoned her skirt and let it slowly slide down her legs, revealing a black lacy thong, with attached suspenders, and stockings. It slid to the floor and she stepped out of it, beginning on her shirt buttons. She undid the top three or four, slowly lifting it up from the bottom, and moving it very slowly up her body. I couldn't help but stare as her breasts appeared, resting in a matching bra. It came off her head, and she blew me a kiss, and threw her shirt at me. So there she was, standing in a bra, thong, stockings and suspenders, and high heels.
The shirt hit me in the face, and fell to my lap, her perfume assaulting my nostrils. She gave me a wink and pointed to Fluttershy, all I could do was mildly turn my head. She had her back to me, and she started on her top half. She peeled her sweater off, revealing a tight white t-shirt, which followed soon after. She was wearing a white frilly bra with pink hearts on it. She turned her head a bit and also threw me a wink.
She then placed her hands to the front of her jeans, and I heard the zip slide down. She moved them to the sides, and started to push them down. Like Rarity, she was wearing matching underwear. Her jeans hit her ankles, and she kicked them away, leaving her small white socks and trainers on. She turned to face me, and pulled a pose that would make any man melt.
Luna plonked herself into my lap, leaning back against me. “Now, you'd best keep this under control, or I'll have to punish you later.” She gave me a quick kiss and turned around, facing the girls. “Stop smiling like that. Now, why don't you choose what comes first?” I gave the spinner a flick and waited for it to stop.
“Okay Rarity, Fluttershy......”
“................left hand yellow!”
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oh darn got trolled FUUUUUUUUUUDGE
2643166 That was the product of me + alcohol + a fully charged laptop. A quick read through of it and I corrected lots of mistakes, gave it another read, and couldn't not post it!
2643175 well it would seem my good sir that if you didn't post this chapter you would have missed a perfect opportunity to troll people which in my opinion my good sir is an absolute tragedy.
now little sir Lucky
keep on trollin'
I like this one
LOL, nice... I thought i missed a chapter somewhere LMAO
new that was going to happen, everyone does it these days...
2646817 But, did you think otherwise at the beginning of the chapter? Plus, in my defence, I was drunk when I wrote it. Was a surprise when I saw it open in my desktop, and thought I'd out it up anyways.
2648179 When I saw the start, my thoughts were "Probs a troll, just like all the others" lol
3005720 You are the first one to comment on that... and yes he did...
4105833 Can't replace them as I can't remember what they are.
4105917 No, almost. We have been thrown out of a few bars though.
We... uh, actually got a free lap dance each that night!
4107216 In progress, not by me.
4107276 I know. If you read it properly, they never actually used the thermite. Technia shaped the C4 to obliterate the rocks, thus negating the nee for anything else.
4107406 To us it was sparring, to an onlooker it was fighting. So yes, that did happen. Quite often, actually.
4108149 OK. I read kinda fast, so sometimes I miss things. Also, did you know that it is legal for a civilian to make thermite in the US? I've made a few pounds here and there for the hell of it. Always set it off in a sand pit on my grandfather's land.
Is there going to be a sequel to the sequel?
4109857 Not that I'm planning on. I honestly think I took this as far as I could.
4110160 OK. Because you have the makings of a kick ass series.
Unfortunately for me, I'm familiar enough with the game of "Twister" that the troll wasn't properly effective. Alas.
Anyway... The end of ...what the fandom says Rarity reads.
And thus a good story ends for lucky but will his descendents get there own adventure?
Yo, know it's a selfish question, but whatever happened with Swift? You got the mare who managed to save Lucky and his Hunters back during the first changeling hive and gave them some extra time to set the mini nuke off, flew headfirst into a Hydra's stomach and chewed its own heart out before cutting her way out then asking for a taxidermist... and she just kinda disappeared. Last that was heard of her was when she was tossed down into the pit with Lucky and the Hunters during the Changeling/DD brawl. Did she die there or something?
I mean, I know she wasn't in the Hunters, but damn, maybe a little something woulda been nice to see what happened to her.
It's a good story, but too many "epilogues" I think...